Monday, May 15, 2017

Make Plot and Backstory Mesh

Janet here. Everyone reading this has a past. That past includes major events and life changing situations that shaped who we are. The same is true of our characters. The writer's job is to fit the plot and characters together perfectly, as if they are tailored made for each other. How do we do this? We look at backstory.   

What is backstory?

Backstory is anything relevant that happened to the characters before the story starts. Past experiences, treatment, birth order, lifestyle, choices--anything that has shaped who they are and what they believe about themselves, believe about others and believe about the world they live in. Characters with a well-developed backstory are three-dimensional and will hopefully leap off the page and into readers' hearts.


How does backstory impact both the character and the plot?

Backstory shapes the characters values, creates strengths and flaws, which impacts their actions during the story. If wounded in the past, especially in the area of relationships, characters will likely refuse to risk their hearts. We can use external conflict in the plot to force characters to confront and overcome the pain of their childhood. Negative experiences like abuse, death and addiction create mistrust, shame and isolation. These create internal conflicts that distort their perceptions and keep them stuck in the past. 

How do writers create the characters backstory?

We make things up, but not just any old things. When we create characters, we want to mesh their backstory, which produces internal conflict with the external conflict of the plot. The right plot for that character will force them to act and change. Think how backstory will affect the characters' actions and how external events will force the internal wounds to the surface. When we mesh the external and internal together, at the story's end, the characters should be changed, able to do what they weren't able to do at the beginning. 

How do we go about creating a story that will mesh backstory and plot?

It's that age old question: What came first the chicken or the egg? Do we come up with a story, a premise, then flesh out characters to fit? Or do characters come into our head and demand their story? It doesn't matter which comes first, just as long as they work together. Alicia Rasley in The Story Within Guidebook says it perfectly: The plot needs this person and this person needs this plot


To get to specifics on how to do this, ask questions about the character and the plot. What does this character need to learn? What does this character want? Will the external conflict not only advance the plot but, also, force the character to grow? 


             Here are possible ways I used in my books to mesh backstory and plot:
  • Use backstory to create characters' external goals. For example, in Wanted: A Family pregnant widow Callie wants to turn her dilapidated Victorian into a home for unwed mothers. Her motivation: a childhood friend got pregnant in her teens and unable to face the shame and judgment took her own life. That painful experience created Callie's goal of helping these ostracized women. 
  • Use backstory to create characters' internal goals. For example, in Wanted: A Family, Callie's internal goal is to forge a family with her child and the unwed mothers and not risk her heart to another man. Her motivation: the deaths of her parents and husband left her feeling abandoned. Even married, she'd felt emotionally abandoned.  
  • Put wounded characters in situations that test their mettleIf an experience in her past made her afraid of tight places, then use the plot to put her in a stuck elevator. 
  • Create backstory that ensures heroes and heroines are exactly wrong for each other. In The Bounty Hunter's Redemption, Carly's dead husband was a violent guy. Hero Nate is the bounty hunter who killed him. To Carly these two men are cut from the same cloth, making Nate exactly the wrong man for her.   
  • Create wounds that hinder faith or judgment. In Courting Miss Adelaide, Charles's father was a church-going hypocrite who beat his family, leaving Charles with a dim view of God and with a past that blinds him to the possibility an orphan is being abused. Or on the flip side the backstory gives the character special insight and a strong faith.
  • Create past wounds that impede the goal. In Wanted: A Family, Callie's sense of abandonment escalates when parishioners rebuke and avoid her for bringing unwed mothers to church, making her question herself and her goal.
  • Create secrets that open past wounds. In The Substitute Bride, Elizabeth's father gambled away the family fortune and left them destitute, the reason she became Ted's mail-order bride. She's devastated when Ted's secret past as a gambler is revealed.  
  • Create a plot that clashes with the character's value system. Ethics clash with the external goal in The Bounty Hunter's Redemption when Nate's loyalty to his widowed sister requires him to hurt another widow and her son. Truth and loyalty clash in An Inconvenient Match when Abigail is caught between loyalty to her father and the truth of what caused the feud between her and Wade's families. 
Once we've developed characters and plot, we can look at the external conflict to make sure it's strong enough to force the characters to overcome their wounds and grow and change. Then they'll finally able to get the "happily ever after" ending they've earned.

What is the favorite story you've written that meshed a character's backstory with the plot? 

What book have you read that meshed plot and character together perfectly?

For a chance to win a $10 Amazon gift card, leave a comment. 

I brought tea and coffee, powdered and chocolate frosted cake donuts along with apple fritters. A sugar-fest!   


Janet Dean grew up in a family who cherished the past and had a strong creative streak. Her father recounted fascinating stories, like his father before him. The tales they told instilled in Janet a love of history and the desire to write. Today Janet spins stories for Love Inspired Historical. She is a two-time Golden Heart finalist, a Genesis and a Carol finalist and a member of Romance Writers of America and American Christian Fiction Writers. Her novels are also Golden Quill, Gayle Wilson Award of Excellence, Booksellers Best and Inspirational Readers Choice Award finalists. 

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  1. A powered sugar donut sounds great right now!!!

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    1. Powdered sugar donuts keep us fit. Lots of arm action brushing sugar off clothes. :-)

      Janet

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  2. I love this, Janet. It reminds me of that old debate of 'plot driven vs character driven' stories.

    I am fond of saying, you cannot choose. You have to have both. Each affects the other so profoundly.

    Oh, I've read stories that are far more focused on a character's growth and changes. And others that are full speed ahead story, story, very plot centric. But any story HAS to have both.
    The same story with Jack Reacher solving a crime or Harry Bosch solving a crime is completely different because those characters are different.

    You can't have one without the other and your backstory character focus...and how it affects the story...puts that beautifully.

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    1. I am in total agreement on this! Pass the donuts, please.

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    2. Mary, you're exactly right. You can't have one without the other. How do you typically "find" your story? With plot or character?

      Janet

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    3. Ruthy and Mary in total agreement makes this a red letter day. ;-)

      Janet

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    4. Janet, it's early. Surely we'll find something to disagree about before long. :)
      I think I 'find' my story thru ... telling the story. Of course the characters are the defining element of HOW! But telling a story is how I start.

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    5. Mary, I'm sure you'll find a way to disagree. :-)

      Okay, but where does the story come from? What triggers it for you?

      Janet

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  3. Every story I've read that's been well-written has exactly what you are talking about Janet! It's what makes me fall in love with your characters...fleshing them out, rounding them as "people" and making them real in my mind.

    I really do like learning more about authors methods of making characters and stories real. I can see the real value for writers here in your post. And just how plot and character need to mesh to make the story work! When I read posts like this, it makes me feel like I'm right back in school with a good teacher...although I'm not a writer, I almost feel like I need to make notes myself, lol! I really could learn a whole lot from you ladies :-)

    By the way, it's great to be back with you all in Seekerville. Hubby and I took a MUCH needed week-long vacation (celebrating 20yrs of marriage) to Crater Lake Oregon. We rented a little cabin about 30 miles from civilization which backed up into a clear, burbling creek. Oh the peace & quiet....pure heaven! Nothing but birds, a duck pair, ground squirrels, and some animal that looked like a prairie dog for neighbors :-) Oh and snow much higher than our car when we drove up the mountain to see Crater Lake...beautiful! We had a relaxing & enjoyable time getting away from it all. I even got to finish two books on my massive TBR pile...lol! I definitely want to plan another trip down that way again :-)

    Please add my name for the Amazon card, thanks so much!

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    1. Trxi, so glad you got that much needed vaca! The "little cabin" sounds delightful! A real retreat from the world.

      That being said, we're glad you're back! :)

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    2. Trixi, your interest in craft blesses us! Maybe underneath there's a writer trying to get out. :-)

      Your vacation sounds fabulous! Congratulations on 20 years of marriage!

      Janet

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    3. Trixi that sounds so wonderful. Congratulations on 20 years of marriage and Crater Lake and absolute quiet sounds like bliss!!!

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    4. Hey Trixi, wondered where you were....missed you on the blogs! Glad you had a great trip!

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  4. Hi Janet:

    I just love the 'meshing' analogy. If two gears in an engine mesh, it doesn't matter if gear A is twice the size of B or vice versa. The key is in the meshing. If the machine's gears don't mesh, it makes noise and calls attention to itself. But when the gears mesh, it runs smooth and builds credibility in the value of the machine.

    Getting backstory to mesh well with plot is a great way to build credibility. Patterson says he does not write realism but he wants his stories to seem real to his readers. In addition to exacting details, having the character and plot evolve in sync is another way to make your reader believe in your story.

    I have this idea that a writer could use the story's Moral Premise to act as a prism for projecting a spectrum of how well the plot and backstory sync with the evolving character ARCs. (This comment is for Moral Premise fans.(Missy))

    My favorite book for meshing all the elements perfectly (plot, backstory, emotion, conflict, character ARCs), is "The Lawman's Second Chance". When I finished reading this book I remember thinking, "This story rings too ture. It must be based on a true story." It was!

    As far as your best meshing example, I like, "Courting the Doctor's Daughter," which I feel has an ideal character, backstory, and plot mix. This is a wonderful book and if I were this book, I would feel like the neglected child! :)

    Vince

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    1. Vince, I love the gear analogy! It creates a perfect picture of what we writers are trying to do.

      I hope you don't blow the whistle and get me brought up on child neglect charges! What would you suggest I do to nurture CDD? :-)

      Janet

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    2. Hi Janet:

      I think you're safe from neglect chargers. Like me middle children are used to that. I think it might be better to work on ADD. :)

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    3. Vince, I'm a middle child too. Should I work on ADD or just accept it?

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  5. Gosh, Janet, going through those steps one at a time is hugely helpful.

    I always do this one:

    Put wounded characters in situations that test their mettle. If an experience in her past made her afraid of tight places, then use the plot to put her in a stuck elevator.

    But making the hero the wrong person for the heroine, while actually making the hero the ONLY person for the heroine, is really hard, hard work.

    Now working my way through your other steps.

    Mary is right, this calls for donuts.

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    1. Tina, yep, creating stories isn't for sissies. :-)

      I need to use the "test the character's mettle" more than I do. I put Adelaide to the test in my debut, but this is one element I need to do more often. Suspense and villain writers use this effectively and often.

      It's hard but also fun to make the hero the heroine's worst nightmare. :-)

      Janet

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    2. Janet, LOL the hero is the heroine's worst nightmare. That's so MEAN!!!

      And of course, just perfect

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    3. Perfectly mean, hey, Mary! I suspect there's a mean streak in all writers that they unleash on their characters. :-)

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  6. Janet, what a great example post of meshing and balance. It usually takes me several personal edits to feel like I'm close... and then an editor's take to help make sure we are! That first draft is like the med school skeleton, a figure filled with holes. But then the real story evolves from plugging those holes or building more platforms.

    This was wonderful.

    And I took one of Mary's donuts when she dozed off.

    She snores.

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    1. Ruthy, thanks for the warning about the snoring...just in case Mary's looking for a conference roommate. ;-)

      I love your point that we can go back and fill holes. Tweak the characters, tweak the plot, whatever we need to do to make them mesh.

      Janet

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    2. Part of Ruthy's story is true. I do snore. The FALSE part is, I've never left behind and unguarded donut!!!

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    3. Ruthy's pretty sneaky, Mary. Maybe next time, keep your index finger in the donut hole when you nap. :-)

      Janet

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  7. Great stuff here, Janet! Creating the backstories for my characters is my favorite part of the writing process. Thank you for these terrific examples.

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    1. Jill, creating the character's backstory is so much fun! I have to be careful not to overdo the issues. Sometimes I feel a little sadistic. :-)

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  8. I'd love a donut. I'm not picky on the kind. I'd love entered for gift card.

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    1. Cathy Ann, help yourself to a donut. The coffee's hot.

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  9. Had the stomach flu all weekend, so I can eat anything I want. Didn't get any writing done or much reading, it made me sick to try to follow the print. Janet, these are excellent tips.
    One of my better examples of backstory is my unpublished Oregon Trail story, where Oona Moriarty comes to the Oregon Country to try to convince her brother Michael to join her in avenging their families' wrongs with the English landlords. She falls in love with Pace Williams, a disaffected loner who doesn't want to fight someone else's battles, kind of like Rick in Casablanca. ANYHOOO...Sometimes my plot comes to me, but the characters soon follow. Sometimes the characters.
    Please enter me in the drawing.
    Kathy Bailey

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    1. Sorry you were sick, Kathy! The 24-hour bug is making its rounds in my area of the world, but we've eluded it thus far. Hope you're feeling a bit stronger today.

      Sending chicken soup and hugs!

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    2. Kathy, I'm sorry you were sick all weekend! Stomach bugs are miserable.

      Your hero is exactly wrong for your heroine--love it!

      I usually start with a snippet of history or of a hook/plot trope, but not always. Where we start doesn't matter. It's where we end up that does.

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  10. Janet, as always, you've provided a wonderful blog post packed with information! Your stories always hit the mark and go beyond.

    Congrats on your HOLT final! Congrats to Tina's HOLT final too! You girls rock!!!

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    1. Debby, thank you! You're a blessing.

      I'm so excited to be a HOLT finalist with Tina and so many wonderful writers!

      Janet

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  11. Good morning, Janet, and thank you for the KEEPER post! Congratulations, too, to both you and Tina on finaling in the HOLT!! Woo hoo! :)

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  12. Good morning, Glynna! Thank you for your sweet words! The HOLT final was a lovely surprise!

    Janet

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  13. I personally love backstories. I think the love began when I read Pictures of Hollis Woods by Patricia Reilly Giff and I just had to know what happened. Since then I wrote a a story about two spies-in-training who knew each other growing up, and their new relationship paralleling with their old... Also, in my WIC, backstory is definitely very important and figuring out my character and why he thinks like he does.

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    1. Spies-n-training. I love it, Boo. How perfect. I'm impressed. Spy stuff seems tricky. And paralleling the relationship is a perfect literary device.

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    2. Three Approaches to Backstory

      1. Just announce it. Descriptive paragraph. Can cause 'dumps'

      2. Sugarcoat it with other info. Not needed to move story but could be worse.

      3. Make backstory piece an essential element. The backstory itself moves the plot.

      "It says here that our perp was a demolition expert in the Navy. I wonder why he didn't tell us that?"

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    3. Vince, I'll pick meaty entree over info dump and sugar high. :-)

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  14. Good morning Janet, What a great (and timely for me) post on plot and back story. I went on a ride-along with the county sheriff and obtained some great information that I can use to deepen the back story and thicken the plot. Yay. So this post is a great reminder of how to do that.

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    1. Sandra, how fun that you got to ride along with a sheriff! Did anything exciting happen? Of course just being in that car was exciting!

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  15. Congrats to you and Tina and some other Seekerville Villagers for finaling in the HOLT contest. Yay Contests. Yay Finaling. Yay Janet and Tina.

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    1. Sandra, thanks for celebrating with Tina and me and all the wonderful authors who were finalists, especially our villagers.

      Janet

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  16. Boo, thanks for sharing the book recommendation and your excellent points. Backstory is so much fun to create. The hard part for me is creating an external plot that forces them to overcome and change.

    Yes, the characters past helps us know how he'd think and act. One thing I'm learning is to use their actions more than introspection and show how the backstory impacts characters when my first impulse is to tell in their thoughts.

    Your story with the hero and heroine's present relationship paralleling their childhood relationship sounds so interesting!

    Janet

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  17. Hi Janet - excellent post. I know backstory is very important but I also know it's hard to weave it in to the current story without the dreaded "information dumps" writers are warned against. You do this so perfectly. I can't think of a better example than Bounty Hunter"s Redemption.

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    1. Cindy, thanks! It's easy to fall into the trap of dumping all the angst we know our characters experienced. I just cut and paste stuff that I put in too early to save it for later.

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  18. Janet, I love Quigley Down Under for how they made the heroine face the past of her accidentally suffocating her baby. And then there was the part when her husband drove her to Galveston an put her on the first boat, and he didn't even turn around, the heroine knew because she watched to see if he would. Then Tom Selleck was leaving and turned his horse around and tipped his hat at her. Love, love that movie and how the backstory keeps coming back around.

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    1. Connie, I don't know the movie but it sounds terrific! How can it not with Tom Selleck? :-)
      Sounds like it did a great job showing how backstory haunts characters.

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    2. Connie, one of the best moments in that movie is when she's trying to get that baby to be quiet and we're all afraid she's going to smother him. Then suddenly she realizes what she's doing and she yells to the baby, "You go ahead and cry." And grabs her rifle and aims at the approaching pack of evil dingos!!!

      Great, great movie moment.

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    3. Ooh, sounds so good. I've got to see this movie!

      Janet

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    4. Connie, you had me at "Tom Selleck" :)

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    5. I am so ashamed of myself. This movie has been on my TBW list for so long. Must watch!

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    6. My favorite part is in the exact words Quigley uses about his weapon skills. The outcome hangs on a few words. Did anyone notice this? Yes or No. Don't give it away.

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    7. It really is a good movie. If you haven't seen it, you should. Alan Rickman's in it. And yes, Vince I think I know what you're referring. And what Crazy Cora keeps calling Mathew Quigley, comes back to help in the last scene.

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    8. Mary, Let's both make some noise!

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  19. Janet, your post made me think. I am realizing that I need to be better in creating heroes and heroines who are exactly wrong for each other. I always find it tricky to find those opposing goals and yet ways to get the heros and heroines to be forced to be together. You've got me thinking!

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    1. Jeanne so perfectly put. Heroes and heroines who are exactly WRONG for each other.

      That's exactly right. A conflict between them so huge, so profound, it can only be overcome by TRUE LOVE!!!

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    2. I need to figure out how to do this better. :) But, at least I'm thinking more about it now. :)

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    3. I've had fun doing stories where opposites attract. :)

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  20. Hi Jeanne T, thanks for highlighting that opposing goals are a great way to make the hero and heroine believe they're wrong for each other. There's lots of other ways to show this too. When we do a good job with this, readers will keep turning the pages, wondering if they'll be able to overcome and find their happily ever after ending!

    Janet

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  21. Janet, first CONGRATS to you and TINA and the other seekers who finalized in the Holt! Happy dancing for you!

    Backstory is something I'm constantly working on improving so this post is very helpful! I just finished Kristy Cambron's book The Illusionist's Apprentice and she did a great job of weaving a complicated backstory.

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    1. Sharee S, thank you! We're happy dancing in our caves. :-)

      I haven't read Kristy's book. Sounds great! Will check it out.

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  22. The Hesitant Heiress by Dawn Crandall is an excellent example of character and plot meshing. Since it is a first person viewpoint I think it is able to delve deeper into the individual character. The plot and character can be intertwined more closely when there is only one viewpoint.

    nina4sm at Gmail dot com

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    1. Sylvia, thanks for the recommendation. Dawn's books are great!

      First person would help mesh plot and backstory. Excellent point! Thanks!

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  23. Hi Janet:

    I think when we speak of hero and heroine being
    'wrong' for each other we need to make a distinction. There is 'objectively wrong' -- in which a marriage is doomed to failure if they do marry and there is 'romantically wrong' -- in which their personality and situations would repel their ever getting together romantically under normal circumstances.

    I think in "The Lawman's Second Chance" the hero and heroine are objectively ideal mates but their life situations are such they would avoid romantic involvement. We can believe in their HEA.

    I also think the 'not right for each other' hero and heroine can become overused. This is especially true when both the hero and heroine are fighting their attraction and trying to avoid making the same mistake they made in the past. Where is the romance in that?

    One of my favorite romances is "The Price of Victory" in which the match is objectively ideal and the hero falls quickly in love and he does all he can do to romance the heroine!

    I'm not her fan but at least Charity in the "Boston Daughters Series" knew what she wanted and went after the hero. That's fun reading, too.

    I read a book last year in which the heroine very much wanted to marry the hero, they seemed an ideal match, and yet 90% into the book the hero was still debating if getting married itself was worth it! How romantic is that? I just wanted to yell at him, "You don't deserve that heroine. Just go back where you came from!"

    In fact, it can be interesting when the hero and heroine are falling in love but have serious conflicting real world situations like in "Dreaming of Home" where both absolutely needed the only job available in the small town.

    In fact, I may like it better when the hero and heroine are perfect for each other and it still seems impossible that they could get together. This is like Emma's story in the 'Boston Daughters Series'. It's kind of like "Romeo and Juliette" :)!

    All I want is a little more romance in my romance reading. : )

    Vince

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    1. Vince, You make some good points, but if the hero and heroine knew they were perfect for each other and had no issues that kept them apart the book would be over before it started. I doubt an editor would buy it.

      The problems make them feel exactly wrong for each other, but the good they see in the other, the things they admire, attracts them. But until they've resolved their inner conflict and are able to change what needs changing, they aren't ready for love. The hero in Sandra's book and the heroine in Julie's still had their work cut out for them before they could win the one they loved and for good reasons or you wouldn't remember those stories.

      For me, conflict between the hero and heroine, whether from external or internal issues, is what makes the book fun, that push-pull I spoke about in my last Seekerville post. But the push-pull won't work if the things holding them apart are trivial.

      Romance to me isn't flowers and sweet words. Romance to me is earned, a meeting of the hearts, minds and souls.

      Janet

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    2. For me it's proving the two characters have earned the right to have a HEA!

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    3. Hi Tina: I think your answer says more to the point than my long comment. If they 'earned' it then it is more likely to last. Very good.

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  24. Hi Janet,
    Sorry I'm so late to the party. I've just sat down with a glass of ice tea and ready to work. What a great post! You've given me a lot of great ideas. Thanks!

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    1. Hi Jackie, glad you made it! Glad the post brought some ideas to mind.

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  25. Hi Janet,
    Congrats on being a finalist for the HOLT medallion! As I said on Tina's FB announcement, we Virginians, writers and readers, know how to pick a good book. I hope you win it!

    I don't have to go any further than the book I'm currently reading for a good example of plot/characters meshing perfectly. A Heart Most Certain by Melissa Jagears has both. I almost always care more about the characters and see the plot as a way to further the story, but in this book, the plot is so fascinating it's rivaling my love for the characters. That just does not happen that way for me very often. I'm 2/3 the way in, the romance is at a slow churn, but the story is so good I'm not worried about that part at all. Good stuff!

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    1. Tracey, thank you! Virginia is such a beautiful state and obviously has a lot of great readers and writers.

      Thanks for recommending Melissa's A Heart Most Certain as a great story that meshes plot and backstory seamlessly!

      Janet

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    2. And Melissa is our guest tomorrow. How fortuitous.

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    3. Really?! I haven't even looked at the calender, how cool! I hope to be finished by tomorrow too!

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  26. I have to agree with Mary (far earlier in the comments) that plot and character just have to be combined, since one so strongly affects the other. I've been wracking my brain to come up with a book in which the two FAILED to mesh, but it turns out I read too talented of authors, since I can't come up with any. Either that or publishers these days are too wise to print ill-fitting characters/plots.

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    1. Rachael, I can't think of any either! Isn't that a great recommendation for Christian fiction!

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  27. JANET, thank you for this interesting post. As a reader, I enjoy learning more about writing. I love those three dimensional characters that find a place in my heart.

    Please enter me in the drawing for the $10 Amazon gift card.

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    1. Caryl, characters can seem like real people, can't they? I love stories, writing and reading them.

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  28. Love this, Janet! And it's one of my FAVORITE parts of story creating. I love that quote about character needing plot and plot needing character.

    One thing I ask my characters as I'm coming up with the plot (and some of their backstories), is "What does God need to teach you through this story?" It is a fantastic focal point to help guide how the plot will unearth the backstory in such a way the character will be forced to grow and change.

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    1. Pepper, I love doing that, too. Often, what that means for me is asking early in the book planning process: "What is God teaching ME right now?" And then I put my characters through that. :)

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    2. Pepper, isn't it fun make characters grow up and change in a few hundred pages? Now if only someone could do that for me. LOL

      Janet

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  29. Congrats to you and Tina on being finalists for the Holt med. Would love to be in the drawing for the Amazon card. THANKS!

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    1. Jackie, thank you! For me, the HOLT Medallion final was an extra Mother's Day gift!

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  30. Hi Janet, I definitely have trouble with the backstory thing. I have a tendency to reveal too much, too soon. Thank you for such an informative, helpful post on doing it better.

    Also, congratulations to you, and Tina, on finaling in the HOLT contest!! So happy for you both!!

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    1. Laura, thank you! I reveal too much too soon, too, but that's why we do revisions!

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  31. Thanks for a great post. I am not an author but every time I visit all of you Seekers I receive some tip or info to help me as a reader AND a Christian. I read Restoring Christmas by Cynthia Ruchti this past Christmas season and Gabe Langley was such an incredible "leading man". Handsome, caring, devoted to his dad and you just knew that Alexis needed to wake up and really see him. Cynthia's backstory showed us that it was his mother and her death that had helped to mold him into the man he now was.
    Thanks for the giveaway and I would love to be included!
    Connie
    cps1950 (at)Gmail(dot)com

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    1. Connie, thanks for the book recommendation!

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    2. Connie, Cynthia's book sounds wonderful! Those kind of heroes stick with you!

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  32. Great post, Janet. I love slowly discovering the backstory of a character. Love it when an author dangles little tidbits and it takes a while to put all the piece together. That keeps me reading and engaged because I'm trying to figure it out all on my own. Just finsished Sandpiper Cove by Irene Hannon she blends killer backstories into the plot beautifully. I just could not stop reading.

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    1. Kav, thanks for mentioning Irene's books!

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    2. Kav, I love the tidbits of backstory that hint at something important about the character I didn't know. Like you say, readers have to piece the tidbits together. Often those tidbits are emotional.

      I'm seconding the thanks for mentioning Irene's book.

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  33. Great post, Janet. I am working on that in my own writing.

    I think a book that does that well would be Gone With the Wind. I haven't been able to read through all the comments so it may have been mentioned. Lots of back story there!

    Please enter me for the Amazon card.

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    1. Sandy, I'm always amazed that Scarlet was so young when the book opened, but she had to grow up fast during the Civil War and Reconstruction. But that didn't mean she'd changed as she needed to. It was Melanie's death that seemed to finally get through to her. But her love for her father and the land he treasured had impacted her greatly and motivated her actions through the entire book. Great example! Thanks!

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  34. Janet, I'm sorry I didn't get by earlier! What a great post!

    I love your examples. You're so good at using backstory. I really like to take a situation from their past and make them face it again.

    In The Doctor's Second Chance, my hero was always the responsible one, feeling like he had to earn his place in the family with his aunt and uncle after his parents died. He always took care of his troubled cousin. And then he's suddenly faced with caring for a nearly newborn baby. He immediately goes into responsible mode. But the heroine thinks he's not qualified--and he begins to doubt himself.

    Lots of fun with those situations!

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    1. Missy, I loved that "fish out of the water" story! Another of your books that I thought of is your Rita finalist. The backstory meshes with the plot all through the novel. Well done!!

      Janet

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  35. I just read True to You by Becky Wade and the backstory was a huge component in the plot and the characters' lives. I actually didn't see some of the twists coming, and I was a little shocked when they did. Although, I'm not one who tries to figure stuff out before the characters, I'm pretty much along for the ride ;) Great post Janet! Throw my name in for that gift card- you can never have too many books! (At least that's what I tell my husband...)

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    1. Heidi, thanks for sharing Becky's book! I love twists but often miss them coming too. That makes the book a roller coaster ride! Exciting!

      I tell my DH the same. Though to be honest I'm having to cull out some of the books on my shelves. Hoarder comes to mind. :-)

      Janet

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    2. Thanks for the story recommendation, Heidi!

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  36. In a story I am working on, my heroine and hero are reasonably recent acquaintances, they've only really met a short time before the start of the story, but in that time the guy has done something that could put my heroine in danger in order to save himself, and she the fierce survivor that she is (due to trauma that she faced as a child) cannot forgive him for putting her in the compromising position she is now in.

    The problem is that they have to now work together to survive.

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    1. Nicki, thanks for sharing your wip where backstory and plot mesh! I love stories where he's her worst nightmare. Then we authors force them to interact and she discovers his motivations and that his eyes are drop dead gorgeous. :-)

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  37. As always, an excellent teaching post, Janet. Thank you!

    I also appreciate the quote about the character needing the plot, and the plot needing the character. I think when authors force the character into a plot the story reads somewhat like paper dolls moving around in a story.

    The tough thing about backstory is figuring out what to share in the story. There's so much an author knows about a character that never makes it on the page.

    Nancy C

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    1. Nancy C, we authors have to put a muzzle on ourselves or we'll reveal stuff that doesn't impact the plot.

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  38. Excellent post, Janet - - thank you! Another one I needed because in my most recent manuscript I'm thinking there's "too much, too soon" with my backstory. So...back to revising!
    CONGRATS on being a Holt Finalist - - sooo exciting! :)
    Hugs, Patti Jo
    p.s. SO sorry I'm very late in commenting - - been on the go a good bit!

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  39. Hi Patti Jo, I hope the post helps to grapple with the "too much, too soon" of backstory. Trust me I get it!

    Thank you for the congrats! I'm thrilled.

    Janet

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  40. Janet, what great stuff. Makes me itch to beef up my meshing skills! :)

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    1. Pam, some days I'm tempted to mash them together but that never works!

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  41. Your post is a "keeper" for my files.
    I just finished Angel Harp by Michael Phillips. Complicated plot with loads of backstory perfectly meshed. Except not all the loose ends were tied up. Then I found out there's a sequel. Yay!
    Oh, and put me in the drawing if it isn't too late. I never check emails until the end of the day.

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  42. JANET!! Oh gosh, I am two days late and WAY more than a dollar short, my friend!! Sorry for my tardiness, but was out of town on Monday and couldn't catch up from there, it seemed.

    But SO glad I got to read this post -- EXCELLENT suggestions for meshing plot with backstory, especially since I tend to lean toward just one of your suggestions, so this will help me mix it up.

    The one that I lean towards is:

    Create secrets that open past wounds. In The Substitute Bride, Elizabeth's father gambled away the family fortune and left them destitute, the reason she became Ted's mail-order bride. She's devastated when Ted's secret past as a gambler is revealed.

    But I definitely need to get more creative, so thanks for the tips.

    Hugs,
    Julie




    Create secrets that open past wounds. In The Substitute Bride, Elizabeth's father gambled away the family fortune and left them destitute, the reason she became Ted's mail-order bride. She's devastated when Ted's secret past as a gambler is revealed.

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