Tuesday, May 13, 2008

Serving up some not-so-imaginary food for thought

Hey, Seekervillites, Myra here. One of my favorite lunchtime pastimes is deciphering the cryptograms in the daily paper. Over the past couple of weeks several of the puzzle solutions have been very “writerly.” So, while Ruthy heads off to those amazing imaginary ovens of Seekerville to whip up some scones to go with your cyber-caramel macchiatos, I thought I’d share a few thought-provoking quotes with you.
The key is not the will to win . . . everybody has that. It is the will to prepare to win that is important. —Bobby Knight
Definitely words to live by for us contest junkies. We must prepare well, making full use of what we learn from study, workshops, critique groups, and previous contest results. What steps have you taken lately to help you “prepare to win”?
We swallow greedily any lie that flatters us, but we sip only little by little at a truth we find bitter. —Denis Diderot
Okay, now does that fit your usual response to a judge’s comments or not? If we aren’t willing to look objectively at both our writing strengths and weaknesses, we have no hope of improving. What “bitter truths” have you been spitting out as you digest your manuscript critiques?
As an artist, I feel that we must try many things—but above all we must dare to fail. —John Cassavetes
The contest you don’t enter is the contest you’ll never final in. The editor you don’t contact is the editor who will never buy your manuscript. The book you don’t write is the one that will never be published. What is God calling you to dare today? What are you afraid of? What are you going to do about it?

Finally, here’s a quote I recently came across through another source. Sinclair Lewis wrote these words in a letter declining the 1926 Pulitzer Prize for his novel Arrowsmith:
All prizes, like all titles, are dangerous. The seekers for prizes tend to labor not for inherent excellence but for alien rewards; they tend to write this, or timorously to avoid writing that, in order to tickle the prejudices of a haphazard committee.
Just the other day in Seekerville (see Ruthy’s post “Pimping your prose”) several of us confessed to tweaking our first chapters to get everything in that we think the “committee” of judges will be looking for. And we’ve admitted this is often at the expense of the broader scope and more natural development of our plots. It’s a choice we make because of our hope of getting those manuscripts in front of the finals judge who just might request the full . . . and eventually . . . hopefully . . . offer us a contract.

Tweaking first chapters is one thing. But does the quest for a contest final and eventual publication cause you to either intentionally focus on or steer clear of certain issues, character types, or plot scenarios? How much does marketing and sales potential influence what you’re writing right now? Are you writing for the market? Writing your passion? Or both?

No judgment here, just something to consider. I’m all about selling these days. I just pray that throughout the process I can stay true to my personal vision, my voice, and especially God’s Word.

38 comments :

  1. Better late than never. I just don't get this Blogger post scheduling thing.

    I'll be in and out today--lots of errands to run. Y'all have fun!

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  2. Frankly, not keeping in mind the "you can't write that in CBA" taboos is hard to do.

    Julie is a freak of nature in that her "ABA version" of PASSION was bought by Revell. How different her life would be now if the sanitized CBA version would have been bought instead? Can we all say a cheer for her agent's blunder? :-)

    As a historical writer, I can't help but think about what historical time-periods aren't welcomed...favorable...liked...hmm, what's the right word...umm, saleable in the CBA market. Granted, established authors have more leeway, especially well established authors.

    But for a writer trying to break in, trying to sell a story that crosses a ton of CBA lines...well, Julie is one in a million.

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  3. Yep, I have to agree that Julie is "one in a million"--and not just because of her novel!

    But I hear you, Gina. I have a historical set in 1929 and have been told it's an unpopular era. Oh well . . .

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  4. Oh, in case I don't get back here sometime today, here's why...

    Touched by Love first round scoresheet tabulation and waiting on scoresheets that haven't arrived and calling the PO to figure out where they delivered the scoresheets that arrived on Saturday but didn't arrive in my mailbox.

    Hubby and I are going to Washington DC tonight (we leave at 3:30) to see an advanced screening of PRINCE CASPIAN.

    Cleaning house to impress babysitter.

    Wiping snotty baby's nose. Wait, that should baby's snotty nose.

    Continuing Operation "Be a Sneaky Contest Entrant."

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  5. So today's quiz will be on writing the book of your heart verses writing the marketable manuscript.

    Ever think about the book of your heart and consider that you might not be writing it not because of marketing issues or guidelines or editor on your shoulder, but how about the fear factor. Writing the book deep inside you may be a catharsis you are not prepared to face.

    Anyone else have one of those books inside them?

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  6. Love the quotes, Myra!! You're right. They're so appropriate for writers. :)

    I'm still trying to figure out Mary's, "Hi, Myra." What's that mean, Mary? Just being friendly today but no comments? Oh, wait. I bet you're "working" hard. What a novelty! ;)

    Gina, enjoy the movie!! It looks so good! Don't forget to clean the snotty kid while cleaning house today. :)

    Missy

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  7. Whoa, Myra, EXCELLENT post!!! I LOVE the quotes, but especially yours:

    "The contest you don’t enter is the contest you’ll never final in. The editor you don’t contact is the editor who will never buy your manuscript. The book you don’t write is the one that will never be published. What is God calling you to dare today? What are you afraid of? What are you going to do about it?"

    Whoa, baby, soooooooooooooooooooooo true!!!!!!!!!!

    Hugs,
    Julie

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  8. I was fooling around trying to make Myra's post post...I was pretty sure only the poster could post their own post. But I did find a way to post a comment on an unposted post.
    So I posted that 'Hi, Myra' post.

    Is that clear?

    I loved your post, Myra. Great quotes.

    And it's so maddening to try and make a manuscript contest ready when contest ready isn't editor ready.
    Take out the back story you lose the Goal/Motivation/Conflict. Leave the backstory in and you get knocked down for too much backstory.

    It's all about balance. Picture yourself standing up on a teeter-totter.
    In the center, legs spread a bit, adding, cutting, balance, balance, balance.

    Me...I'm more of a Monkey Bars type.

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  9. GINA SAID:
    Julie is a freak of nature in that her "ABA version" of PASSION was bought by Revell.

    Well, I have been called a "freak" before, Gina, so you're not the first! :) But honestly, I don't think I am all that much of a "freak of nature" with regard to Revell buying an edgy book such as APMP because quite frankly, the timing is right.

    The market is shifting, and I believe that the CBA must shift along with it in order to reach a broader readership for the sake of Christ. CBA publishers know this, which is why Bethany House introduced Deanne Gist in their new "Edgy Inspirational" line a few years back. Are these books for everybody? No, but there is a vast middle-ground readership who believe in God but live according to the world's standards. For many of these women, the spiritual precepts sown into a book like Deanne's or A Passion Most Pure may well be the only contact with God they have. I get irate that the world's agenda is pushed in the majority of romance novels. What about God's agenda?? Wouldn't it be wonderful if God's precepts were sown into the reading of women not prone to Inspies?

    The CBA knows this, which is why some publishers are moving in that direction. So rather than me being a "freak of nature," I am believing that I am only one of many authors to come who offer a bit more realism and passion in the romance genre than what has been publishable in the CBA up until now. I truly believe this will give the CBA a broader appeal (or mission field, if you will) -- something the ABA has enjoyed all along.

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  10. Wow, so good! Thanks for the post. I've been procrastinating on some contests because they ask for a synopsis, and frankly, that scares the chocolate out of me.
    So thanks for the boost!

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  11. I started my WIP a couple of years after DH suffered a head injury and things looked scary right at first. My story is therapeutic but probably not marketable. For one thing, the hero smokes a pipe and drinks "occasionally, as needed" and ditto for dancing. I could get busted as a church lady if people knew that -- let alone sell anything! But it's about a time period and situation that speaks to my situation.

    That said, Myra, I started reading and thought *cough*snort* "Wisdom ..." from Bobby Knight? *choke*

    Not an IU fan! :-D

    Ann

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  12. Popping in between errands. Ooops, sorry, Ann. Confession time: I don't have a clue who Bobby Knight even is! I just liked the quote!

    Gina! Prince Caspian! Can't wait to see it! Have fun! (Even with the snotty baby's--er, baby's snotty nose.)

    Tina, you're onto something. Digging deep to write the book of our heart might be a little too risky for some of us. Maybe we need to take the leap and write it for ourselves with zero thought toward publication. Catharsis is not a bad thing. What's that quote about the unexamined life?

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  13. Just Googled Bobby Knight. Should have remembered. He coached basketball where my younger daughter went to school--Texas Tech.

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  14. Myra, I put the coffee on this A.M. and I've just now brought in fresh, Southern-style lemonade and tea cakes.

    And scones....

    With home-made sour cherry jam.

    Oh, my.

    Great post, and you niggled my spirit several times and not always in a comfortable manner. It's such a hard row to hoe, to tone your book to a potentially saleable market, but I don't see any way around it until we're Deb Smith (love, love, love her stuff) and then we can start our own publishing company and do what we please.

    And yeah, Tina, I hear you. A little tricky to write THAT book too soon...

    My kids are clamoring for me to write a pseudo-fictional account of how a waitress mother and a stock clerk/farmer father got three kids into Ivy League schools...

    Seriously, the book would be a hoot and it might just sell. Who knows?

    And I might do it soon when I need a break from banging my head against the fiction wall.

    But we've got tender hearts and tough skulls, so we plug on.

    What's the other choice, right?

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  15. I can share that I just had the best time writing thank you notes to judges today.

    Out of the last six contests I entered, four judges (that would be 4 out of about 20) got me.

    But boy when they get you isn't it sweet? Don't you want to just adopt them?

    Maybe I can do that.

    I mean don't get me wrong, I just suck up those needed but evil critiques and criticisms like a dry sponge. I want them.

    But, you sort of feel like singing neaner neaner when someone gets you.

    The huge fist in the air YES.

    Of course then you go back to writing in your pajamas notoriety on unpub island.

    But that brief and shining moment was very nice. Very nice indeed.

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  16. Myra, excellent post and quotes! Lots to think about.

    I am an IU fan so nothing Bob Knight says surprises me. But he hit the nail on the head with this one. Published or not, we can never stop learning. We're only sure of our last contract.

    Bitter truth may be hard to swallow. But it's made me a better writer.

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  17. LOL, Mary. So it was just a test post? Okay, I'm sorry for accusing you of not working. :)

    Missy

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  18. Ann, I had to laugh, too. I can't imagine wisdom from Bobby Knight. But it was actually a good quote!

    Ruthy, you should write your story!! And go ahead and do it as fiction. You can have more leeway that way. Those brilliant kids of yours need to be featured in a book by their brilliant mom!

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  19. Tina, they "get" you because you're a great writer!

    Good for you for doing the thank you notes!

    Missy

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  20. Awe you are so sweet, Missy. So unlike Mary. :)

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  21. Tina, it's my life's goal to be nicer than Mary.

    LOL

    (although it's also my goal to be as prolific as Mary!)

    Just joking with you, Mary. You know I love you.

    Missy

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  22. Bobby Knight was an excellent basketball coach with a tiny problem with his temper. Quite famous for it actually.

    In fact, I went to YouTube and wrote in Bobby Knight chairs and BOOM.
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NvRO2GE4x4M
    I also got "Bobby Knight Pimp Slaps a Player" But honestly he just meant that as encouragement, really.

    Which does NOT mean he doesn't say quotable things. :)

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  23. Missy, seriously don't give up. Eventually you're bound to be nicer than me if you try real HARD.

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  24. I picked TINA to be nicer than. A much simpler task........

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  25. Wonderful post, Myra.

    Some of these quotes/questions sting LOL! But in a constructive way.

    Thank You, Julie for saying this, ""So rather than me being a "freak of nature," I am believing that I am only one of many authors to come who offer a bit more realism and passion in the romance genre than what has been publishable in the CBA up until now. I truly believe this will give the CBA a broader appeal (or mission field, if you will) -- something the ABA has enjoyed all along."

    I am one of those authors but I didn't know the CBA was opening up so much.

    In 2004 or 2005 I attended a conference where the Acquisitions Editor of Steeple Hill said the CBA will NEVER loosen their guidelines on sensuality....have they?

    Just curious.

    Pamt

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  26. Mary said: Missy, seriously don't give up. Eventually you're bound to be nicer than me if you try real HARD.

    Missy says:
    ROFL!!!!!!!!!! Touche. Got me good.

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  27. Myra, great post!

    I have to say that even though I've only entered two writer's contests, I honestly don't shrivel at the sight of the constructive criticism. I really take it to heart and try to "fix" my manuscript accordingly.

    What does irk me about writer's contests, though, is when a judge doesn't bother to comment at all. To me, that's rude and a total waste of both the entrants and the judges time. Whether they think the entry is perfect or yuck, they ought to be able to back it up with some constructive thoughts/criticism. That's my pet peeve!

    Well, I'm off to get an entry ready and praying that my ms gets in the laps of judges like you guys, ones who comment to help us writers-in-training improve.

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  28. Hi, Eileen. I've had a few of those non-commenting judges myself. It does make you wonder. A number on a score sheet doesn't tell you a lot, and when we fork over $25 or $30 to enter a contest, we'd appreciate a bit more feedback.

    With some contests, all you receive is the score sheet and a comment page. If the judge actually takes the time to offer a few detailed remarks, that's great. I know I try to when I'm judging.

    But I much prefer when they make notes in the actual manuscript, whether handwritten or with Track Changes. Then you can see right where something struck them.

    Hoping you get some great judges this time!

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  29. Great post, Myra! You know, I haven't tweaked (sorry, I just can't type....p...pi..pim...ewww) my stories to fit contests as much I've worked and worried and plotted and planned which contests to enter...

    at the expense of finishing one ms, then another, then another and getting them in front of editors.

    I don't enter a fraction of the contests I used to. I pick and choose sparingly, and instead am trying to develop a body of completed works to present to editors.

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  30. I've limited my contest entries, too, but mainly because I'm being very selective about the finals judges. And there's only so much, um, that "P" word I'm willing to do.

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  31. So Mary's nicer than Tina, but Missy's nicer than Mary (like there's anyone on planet EARTH that didn't know that???? Please...) and no one's nicer than Missy.

    Which might mean they're the cream of the crop and the rest of us are evil incarnate.

    Well, a FEW of us, maybe.

    And I'm going through some contest stuff tonight, feeling out what I think works or doesn't work. I had one very, very nice and complete judge in a recent contest who kept correcting my police work set in a major city. She offered me all kinds of advice and gave me her background to back it up, and all done nicely.

    But I'd gotten a detective in that city to work with me on that ms. and I know my take was accurate because he gave it the green light when it was complete. He read the whole thing, had me tweak a bit here and there, and then gave me the thumbs up.

    But she wasn't smacking me for points, either, just offering an opinion. And I finaled in that one, so what I really appreciated was that she gave me her advice, but didn't deduct points which offered me the benefit of the doubt. That's a pretty good judge.

    Ruthy

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  32. I knew when I typed that, Ruthy would feel left out of the 'nicer than' contest.

    I'll let you all fill in which side of the nice coin Ruthy is on.

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  33. I'm definitely not writing for the market! LOL! Obviously! I'm writing what I love. It's the only way I'm able to write. Writing's too hard to write for someone else. I write from my heart.

    Thanks, Myra, for your thought-provoking post.

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  34. PAMELA S THIBODEAUX SAID:
    in 2004 or 2005 I attended a conference where the Acquisitions Editor of Steeple Hill said the CBA will NEVER loosen their guidelines on sensuality....have they?

    Well, I don't think Steeple Hill has, Pam, but I do think both Revell and Bethany House have lightened up a bit. Deeanne Gist's last book (Courting Trouble) had a VERY sensual scene in it, which actually shocked me. And to be honest with you, I am rather surprised at what my publisher has allowed me to keep in A Passion Most Pure and A Passion Redeemed. Not that it's bad, mind you, because I don't think it's any worse than a sweet novel in the ABA, but it's definitely edgy for the CBA and not done a lot before now, I can tell you that.

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  35. I'm nice.

    But not as nice as Missy.

    She's niceness incarnate...and that's on a bad day. Someday, when I grow up, I hope to be as nice as Missy. Mostly. I think.

    In case you can't tell, I'm home from DC. The movie was...well, you'll have to wait until I blog about in the morning. :-)

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  36. I'm so glad I have everyone fooled about how nice I am. :)

    Gina, I'm heading to read about the movie now...

    Missy

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  37. Thanks Julie!

    I'm going to have to check them both out and those books too.

    I'm anxious to see how the CBA has loosened up.

    PamT

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