How thrilling it is as a writer to settle your fingers on
the keyboard and type “Chapter One.” But even when filled with the exhilaration
of new-story-itis, starting a book-length endeavor can often be
intimidating.
Whether you’re a plotter, a seat-of-the-pantser or something in
between, it never hurts to launch out on a story journey with a roadmap in hand
(or at least in your head). Yes, you might take some detours along the way, but
giving serious thought to your destination in advance can pay off in the long
run.
I find nailing down 5 core elements before I start writing helps immensely,
and I try to approach them as FUN, not something that will strangle my
story-telling freedom. In fact, I find working through “fun size” starters
actually energizes my storytelling confidence and enhances my writing freedom.
· Goal,
Motivation, Conflict (GMC)
· Story
Concept
· Story
Premise
· Moral
Premise
· 500-Word
Synopsis
For me, none of these “fun size” starters are stand-alones.
I can start out with any of them and they feed off each other. If I’m trying to
decide whether ideas have enough “umph” to carry them from beginning to end,
I’ll run them through a few of these “filters” to see how they hold up.
It doesn’t take long to throw a few less promising ones back into the idea ocean—and for one or two of them to catch my imagination as possibilities. Once I’ve decided on the core idea, then I move back and forth among the five elements—playing, building, tweaking—until the idea solidifies into a story I’m excited to tell with an engaging beginning, rock-solid middle, and a satisfying end.
It doesn’t take long to throw a few less promising ones back into the idea ocean—and for one or two of them to catch my imagination as possibilities. Once I’ve decided on the core idea, then I move back and forth among the five elements—playing, building, tweaking—until the idea solidifies into a story I’m excited to tell with an engaging beginning, rock-solid middle, and a satisfying end.
Goal, Motivation, and Conflict (GMC) – We all know how important it is for
our protagonists to possess GMC. Lacking even one of them—or having a weak
one—seriously sabotages our efforts. Into this GMC bucket, I like to throw
giving thought to greatest flaws and fears—and the source of them, the worst
that could happen if goals aren’t met, the lie my characters tell themselves,
and how they will change by the end of the story. It’s fun, too, to give them a
secret!
To get the juices flowing on GMC, I often simultaneously play around
with the other 4 elements—and I do mean PLAY. This is a fun way to make the
development of GMC somewhat less painful. I’m not one of those gifted writers
to whom a full-blown story appears in my mind like a big screen movie and I
just transcribe what I see. Coming up with a viable story can often be
grueling, so anything I can do to break the struggle into more “fun size”
pieces, the better things go.
Story Concept – There are a lot of conflicting definitions regarding concepts and premises, etc., but for my own purposes I personally like to think of the concept as the 1-liner idea that first sparked my imagination. The very high-level story question. For instance, this is where my upcoming April 2018 release, “Mountain Country Courtship,” started:
Can an
abandoned-at-the-altar city guy and a small-town runaway bride find the home of
their hearts in each other’s arms?
Not a lot of detail there, but it hints at
conflict…and romance.
Story Premise – I think of the story premise as more
detailed, involving a little GMC and plot. Again, this is not a “textbook”
definition of the word – this is just what I do when I’m trying to get a grip
on a new story that’s formulating in my mind. This was one of my first shots at
it for the same book:
With opposing agendas and a mutual need to prove
themselves, an abandoned-at-the-altar city guy and a small-town runaway bride
are stuck working together renovating an old bed & breakfast inn as they
race to beat the clock to accommodate an all-important wedding that could make
or break their future—and their chance at love.
Just added some detail that made
me give further thought about GMC and plot.
Moral Premise – I like to think of this as what the core of the story is REALLY about under the surface of the action and dialogue. Knowing this as you write can greatly strengthen the story as you subtly weave it into your scenes.
Wrestling the steering wheel away from
God in order to control life’s outcomes leads to directionless confusion and
distancing from love. Turning the wheel over to God leads to inner peace and
room for love.
This moral premise established for me the characters’ current
inward state—and how they need to change.
500 Word Synopsis – 500 words is about one single-spaced page or two double-spaced, so you must stick to the bones of your story. It forces me to pull the other “fun size” pieces AND critical plot points together to reveal if the story holds together for the long haul.
This
mini-synopsis quickly spotlights areas that are weak, that haven’t been
thoroughly thought through, and that aren’t yet solid enough to carry the story
successfully to The End. Discovering those things early on with a 500-word
investment (and performing needed triage) is so much better than getting
blind-sided halfway through writing the book.
For a seat-of-the pants writer,
this short synopsis on the page or in your head may be all you need to get rolling.
For a plotter or planster (or a pantser who must submit a full-blown synopsis
with a book proposal), it’s a great foundation for writing a longer, more
detailed synopsis.
Keep in mind that when I’m playing around with these “fun
size” starters I’m not trying to make the elements perfectly written for anyone
else’s inspection and critique (although I have at times polished up some of
them to use in a proposal or to flesh out my publisher’s art fact sheet
questions). For everything but the synopsis, I’m usually sitting somewhere away
from the computer with a blank newsprint pad on my lap and letting my pen flow
as the ideas come.
For me, spending a little upfront time solidifying the
high-level plot and characters—while having a bit of FUN—can make all the difference
in the world as to how I approach Chapter One…and journey successfully on to
The End.
Please share with us today how much YOU need to know before you start writing in earnest. Do stories come to you full blown and ready to transcribe as the “movie” rolls through your mind? What, if any, pre-planning do you do? How do you get your ideas to “gel” enough to determine if they hold sufficient substance for a book-length story?
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Glynna
GLYNNA KAYE treasures memories of growing up in small Midwestern
towns--and vacations spent with the Texan side of the family. She traces her
love of storytelling to the times a houseful of great-aunts and great-uncles
gathered with her grandma to share candid, heartwarming, poignant and often
humorous tales of their youth and young adulthood. Her
Love Inspired books—"Pine Country Cowboy” and “High Country Holiday”--won
first and second place, respectively, in the 2015 RWA Faith, Hope & Love
Inspirational Reader’s Choice Awards. Just out in May 2017 was ”The Nanny
Bargain,” out now is “Mountain Country Cowboy,” and coming in April 2018 will
be “Mountain Country Courtship” (the final story in the 6-book Hearts of Hunter
Ridge series).
Mountain Country Cowboy. When he’s offered a job at Hunter’s
Hideaway, single dad Cash Herrera immediately accepts. It means the former bad
boy can start over and gain custody of his son, Joey. Still, small-town folk
have long memories—especially Cash’s pretty childhood nemesis. Rio Hunter is
now a lovely, courageous woman…and Cash’s new boss. Past betrayal makes them
both wary, and Rio’s secret promise will soon take her away from Hunter Ridge.
Yet working with Cash and teaching Joey about her beloved horses draw her
closer to both. Can she create a loving family with the man who’s claiming her
future?
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