Wednesday, August 20, 2008

The Write Way



by Debby Giusti

The eyes of the world have been on Michael Phelps as he swam his way into Olympic history this past week with eight gold medals. A strong and determined athlete, he handled each competition seemingly with ease, making those of us who watched huddled in front of our television sets believe he was born for the gold. Focused on his success, we may have overlooked the years of training—repetitive laps and grueling workouts done day after day, year after year—that brought him to this moment in time.

That same commitment and dedication is demanded of writers as well. Yet some of us may have an unrealistic view of the preparation required for publication and become discouraged when our attempts fail.

People who tally facts tell us most writers complete six to nine manuscripts before they sell. We all know gifted authors who defy the odds and get a contract the first time they submit. Hearing of their success, we naturally equate our own long and labored progression toward publication as falling short of the mark.

I had more than a decade of rejections and hit the brick wall, what I call the plateau, a few years before I got “the call.” At that time, my writing was acceptable but not saleable. Discouraged, I wondered if I’d ever publish.

Sadly, the closer writers come to publication, the more likely they are to give up their dream. A number of my dear friends have stopped writing; others are ready to throw in the towel. The reason? Rejection erodes confidence and self worth.

When editors reject our work, the natural tendency is to back off from the next project. As human beings, we have an innate self-preservation mechanism that tells us to stay away from anything that causes pain. While that serves us well when we get too close to a hot fire, it hurts us when we’re working toward publication.

How do we overcome the survival instincts that may protect us in time of danger but are counterproductive when trying to sell a book? We write. Story after story after story.

By putting words together into sentences that become scenes that grow into chapters, we improve our technique and hone our craft. Just as with athletes, the repetitive exercise of writing and rewriting allows us to eventually understand the essential elements that create a compelling story.

I’ve just completed my tenth manuscript. Three have been published by Steeple Hill, and two more will be out soon—COUNTDOWN TO DEATH in October and PROTECTING HER CHILD in May 2009. My ability to turn a phrase, to make a comparison, to evoke empathy or to heighten suspense has improved with each manuscript.

You’re probably shaking your head and mumbling, so what’s new? And you’re right. Some of the first workshops I ever attended talked about the importance of writing each and every day. But if you’re like me, that advice was hard to put into practice. Three great kids, a loving husband, part-time job, laundry to fold, groceries to buy . . . you know the reasons. In fact, you’ve got your own list of excuses that keep you from writing.

But if you want to break out of the plateau, if you want to move from contest finalist to contest winner, if you want to become a selling author, you have to write.

David Bayles and Ted Orland drive home the point in their book, ART AND FEAR. They tell the story of a ceramics instructor who divided his class into two sections. He told the first group their final grades would be dependent on the quality of their work. They were expected to create one pot that showcased their ability. The grades for the second group would be determined by the quantity of work they produced irregardless of the quality.

To the students’ surprise at the end of the grading period, the quality pots came from the group focused on quantity. Why? Because the first group worked only on one pot, while the others learned through their mistakes, improving as they made pot after pot after pot.

The best advice I could give to a neophyte facing the blank screen for the first time or the PRO close to publication would be to write. The plateau that looms like a brick wall seemingly impossible to break through will never crumble if we become self-protective. Rejection can only be overcome with rewrites and resubmissions and new ideas that turn into stronger stories.

Bottom line, write your way out of the plateau, slush pile, rejection stack, and you'll write your way to the first sale and the second and . . . you get the idea.

Now go write!


Wishing you abundant blessings!
Debby Giusti
www.DebbyGiusti.com
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40 comments :

  1. OMIGOSH, Deb, you had me at "quantity"!! Honestly, the pot story has SO inspired me this morning, and I SO needed it -- thank you! I sit here struggling with a premise for a proposal and allow a million things to get in the way instead of JUST WRITING the stupid thing!! Thanks for the kick in the butt -- SO simple, yet so profound.

    Hugs,
    Julie

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  2. Hi Julie!

    I've been offline for too long, finishing my last book. It's great to have that one completed, but I'm ready to dive in again. Hoping to brainstorm this week and then tackle the dreaded synopsis! There's never much downtime, and that's good. As we know so well, to move forward we have to keep writing!

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  3. My parents are both artists, and they modeled this same idea with their work. They also had jobs in town and kids at home.

    My mom made greeting cards on the kitchen table and sold them for 50 cents or a dollar at local stores.

    My dad drew historic buildings.

    They went to arts and crafts shows, read magazines, took classes and found mentors.

    Now they often win awards for their work.

    Funny thing is, sometimes the same picture will win one show and not get hung in the next.

    They are still progressing, too. My mom went from tiny precise greeting cards to big Impressionistic flowers and landscapes. My dad started to do more abstract things such as a tangle of sycamore roots on a river bank.

    They are 79 and 74 years old and recently bought their own printing press.

    I hope I keep learning like they did!

    How about some French vanilla coffee to start our day? With half and half, or milk, and sugar and Splenda. I'll put the kettle on for tea, chai or hot chocolate.

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  4. Oh wow! That pot analogy is amazing. Thank you for this amazing insight that will STICK WITH ME (and hopefully motivate me). The every day thing is so important (in theory) - need to put it into practice!

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  5. Wowzer, just the shove I needed, and the encouragement, well...the rump kicking kind. Thank you.

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  6. I'll be muttering about quantity now. Thank you!

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  7. Thank you, Debbie, for the boost! It is difficult to get past wondering if trying to get published is even worth it. It's always heartening to hear others' stories.

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  8. Debby,

    I guess I'm right on target, since I'm starting manuscript #7 soon...

    Between everything you've said here and Susan May's wonderful workshop on Saturday at GRW (which I wrote about on my blog on Monday), I'm recharged and determined to hang in there.

    Thank you!

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  9. Debby,

    I guess I'm right on target, since I'm starting manuscript #7 soon...

    Between everything you've said here and Susan May's wonderful workshop on Saturday at GRW (which I wrote about on my blog on Monday), I'm recharged and determined to hang in there.

    Thank you!

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  10. Thanks, Debby. Just what I needed to hear. Gotta keep writing!!! I've been afraid to start that next book. But I'm trying to decide if I should finish revising the one I just finished the rough draft of, or start the new one. Decisions, decisions.

    And I seem to get slower and slower as the years go by, unfortunately.

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  11. I get this, "Do you have advice for aspiring authors" question a lot.

    My first reaction is always, "Oh, honey, if you're taking advice from me you are in BIG TROUBLE."

    But then I always go back to


    WRITE.

    Just write and keep writing. Put words on paper everyday.

    Of course you need to be learning. Online classes, contest critiques, critique groups, books on the craft, reading great books. But none of that does any good if you don't go back to your computer and put it all into practice by WRITING.

    As always, Debbie is a genius. :)

    Looking forward to your next release. I love your work.

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  12. Oh, and it took you a decade to get published?

    I don't think I knew this.

    I thought you sold the first book on proposal after writing for one week.

    Now where did I get that impression?
    Probably because you sold about one week after we formed the Seekers. None of us had a life before Seekerdom, did we?

    Or maybe you're just not a whiner like me...............

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  13. Okay. WOW. This is what I need now...thanks for the push.

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  14. I soooo needed to read this today. THANKS!!!

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  15. Debby, you are so right. There's no better way of improving in any area than practice, practice, practice.

    Ann, I love the story about your parents and their creative journey. It's a testament to perseverance and believing in our God-given talents.

    Oh, and I'll take a cup that French vanilla coffee!

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  16. Eloquent and beautiful, like the author. I've got nothing to add.

    Thanks, Deb. Your words are balm in Gilead.

    Ruthy

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  17. And count me in for chai, Ann. Spiced vanilla, if you have it.

    Here's my mug...

    Ruthy

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  18. What an inspirational post today. Thank you, to all the Seekerville posters for their encouragement. It sure helps on this rocky road.

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  19. Debby, thanks for your put-up-or-shut-up post. Well, that's not how you said it, but that's what I heard. :-) What a great lesson the pot story teaches. Off to write!

    Janet

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  20. Hi Ann!
    Love your parents! They sound like fantastic folks I'd like to know. Aren't you lucky! Bet you've got that same spirit.

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  21. Hi Joanne,
    The pot lesson is amazing, isn't it? In fact, the whole book is good. Susan Marsh, a friend who's a wonderful painter, told me about ART & FEAR.

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  22. Oh, Lauralee, I didn't plan to kick anyone's rump! Believe me! But when I finished my last book, I realized what I'd always heard and hadn't put into practice--at least not with as much determination as I should have--was true. The best way to learn to write is to write.

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  23. Hi Patty! Thanks for stopping by. You're right! "Quantity" is today's buzz word! But it works. Write more, write better!

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  24. Chicki, you are so close! Fact is, you're knocking down the brick wall of your plateau and ready to dive forward into publication! Seven manuscripts!!! Super fantastic!!! You rock, girl!

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  25. Hi Debby! This is my first time checking in with you on this blog site. I love it! Such inspiring words of wisdom as always. Now I'll have to go back and read more in the past post!

    Sherry Werth

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  26. Melanie,
    Rewriting is so important, and it's a great way to learn craft as well. But it's also good to move forward with the next book. Why not set a deadline for the rewrites? That gives you an idea of how long revisions will take once you get "the call." Make the first book as polished as you can by the deadline then put it aside and start the new project.

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  27. Melanie,
    I should have mentioned that if the first book has been requested you need to complete the revisions now. (Of course, you knew that!)

    Also keep sending out your work even when you've moved on to the next story.

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  28. Hey, Mary, I'm not the genius. How many books have you written?

    When I think of someone who practices the "just write" theme, it's Mary Connealy. Your success is because you've kept your hands on the keyboard and your rump (as Lauralee mentioned earlier) in the chair.

    Of course, you've got a natural ability to write great prose, which doesn't hurt either! :)

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  29. Okay, Mary, I just read your second comment, and I'm laughing. I've got a stack of rejection letters (maybe a roomful) to prove I'm no overnight wonder. And I phrased my pre-published journey as lasting MORE THAN a decade. :)

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  30. Hi Scarlet and Sheri! Glad you stopped by! Hope you're writing today!

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  31. Hi Myra and Ruth! Two great Seeker sisters and wonderful writers! Thanks for stopping by today!

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  32. Hi Erica! It does feel like a rocky road sometimes, doesn't it? But the more you write, the smoother the path becomes.

    There is that problem of the plateau. Some folks zip right by it. I, on the other hand, was stalled for far too long.

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  33. Hi Janet,
    Put-up-or-shut-up wasn't my intention, really! I wanted to share the "Ah-ha!" moment I'd had completing that last book. Looking back to my pre-pubbed days, I wish I'd taken three months on my Alpha Smart to hammer out a story. And then repeated the process again and again. By the end of a year, I would have written four books and learned so much about putting words together to create a saleable manuscript.

    Ah, hindsight!

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  34. Hey, Sherry! Good to see you in Seekerville. This is the place you want to be!

    Melanie's here. She's a 'Bama gal. Do you two know each other?

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  35. Well, no, I don't! Hey Sherry! Email me some time. I checked out your blog and we're practically twins!

    melaniedickerson at knology dot net

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  36. Melanie and Sherry, glad you two could hook up on Seekerville!

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  37. Love it!!!

    You are right on when saying you must push through your plateaus with writing!!! This applies to EVERYTHING in life!!!

    Great post!

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  38. Hey Mary G!
    You're right. Perseverance pays off in so many ways!

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  39. Hi Debby, I know its late for you so I hope you read this in the morning. I really really really needed to hear the pot analogy. It was great advice. Of course I know to write every day, but that story just pounded it into my heart.

    Thanks and I'm glad you stuck it through because I love your writing.

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  40. Great advice, Debby. Working full-time, going to school part-time, and caring for a family leaves little time to write, but if I want it badly enough, I'll make sacrifices for it to happen.

    I've heard the ceramic pot story before. It's great motivation for this aspiring writer!

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