Joy to the world! The Lord is come
Let earth receive her King
Let every heart
Prepare Him room
And heaven and nature sing
And heaven and nature sing
And heaven and heaven and nature sing …
Let earth receive her King
Let every heart
Prepare Him room
And heaven and nature sing
And heaven and nature sing
And heaven and heaven and nature sing …
—Traditional Christmas Carol, lyrics by Isaac Watts
Listen … did you hear that?
The commission to “prepare Him room”? Because that’s for each of us. You see,
while heaven and nature are singing, our job as Christian writers (and readers)
is to prepare hearts for Him. Not just at Christmas, mind you, but every single
day of the year.
Whether you read Christian
books (hopefully passing them and the lessons you’ve learned along to others),
or whether you write them, we all have a job to do. And a joyous one at that,
bringing the joy of God’s love and salvation to a truly needy world.
So in honor of the true
spirit of Christmas, I thought it might be fun to share FIVE FAVES of the
spiritual scenes I’ve written (including one from my novella in Cowboy Christmas Homecoming, “Last
Chance Christmas”) and the emotional triggers I used to make them work.
I actually got the idea from
a blog Interview I’m doing this week for Beth Erin, a Seeker friend, where I
get to share FIVE FAVES of the kissing scenes I’ve written. So when you’re done
leaving a comment on this blog today (for a chance to win your choice of a
paperback copy of Cowboy Christmas
Homecoming or A Light in the Window
PLUS e-book choice of my latest release, Love
Everlasting, or Isle of Hope), I hope you head on over to Beth’s blog, Faithfully Bookish, as well, for a
chance to win a paperback or e-book copy of Love
Everlasting and an e-book copy of Isle of Hope.
My
tagline is “Passion with a Purpose,” which means I love writing kissing scenes. But nothing stirs my heart like a
scene about God’s love or salvation, because that's where the true depth of my "passion" lies.
As Christian writers, we have the sacred privilege
and honor to impart the true spirit of Christmas year-round in unique ways that
not only immerse the readers into the story, but into the very heart of God as
well. And when you capture readers’ emotions, you capture their hearts,
their interest, and their loyalty, certainly, but you also capture inroads into their souls where
God can use you to bring them closer
to Him.
The one KEY point I noticed
in all of my spiritual scenes is a strong emotional reaction on
the characters’ part—be it via humor, tears, anger, etc.—which is critical if you want to elicit the same from your reader. Which is
why it’s important to convey physical reactions like misty
eyes, a bob of a throat, trembling lips, shaky hands, a clutch of the stomach
or heart, etc. With something as important as a spiritual message, we must do whatever we can to transfer the
character’s emotional experience to the reader. This is where personal memories
and experiences come in handy … uh, along with a mirror!
Shall we get started?
1.) I have to say that this clip from A Love Surrendered is one of my top two favorite spiritual scenes I’ve ever
written. It takes place at night in the rain when the hero, Steven O’Connor, is alone and
praying/surrendering to God for the very first time.
For me it’s very personal
because let's face it—we all call out to God in desperation at one time or another. So I literally tear up every
single time I read the last few lines when this former
rebellious son finally realizes why God would even bother
with him.
“God will help you do the right thing.”
His father’s
parting word opened Steven’s eyes, prompting him to search the heavens. “Will
you, God? Will you help me to do the right thing, not just with Annie, but with
the rest of my life? I …” His whisper broke in the dark, hoarse and cracked and
so desperate for change that emotion choked the words in his throat. “I-I’ve
made so many mistakes … with my father, with Maggie, with you. I’m begging you
…” A heave shuddered his body. “Forgive me, please … and change me like you changed
my father … and help me to become the man you want me to be.”
The steady beat
of the rain drummed on the roof while the cold air chilled his body, the cool
and damp of impending winter heavy in the air. And yet somehow, Steven felt
warm, his breathing shallow as his eyes scanned the sky. There were no bolts of
lightning to illuminate the dark nor peals of thunder to herald anything new.
Only the still small voice of God in his heart stirring a flame of hope that
brought peace to his soul.
He leadeth
me beside the still waters ... He restoreth my soul … He leadeth me in the
paths of righteousness …
“I don’t understand,” Steven rasped, eyes brimming
with tears, “why do you even care?”
Because you are mine, the thought
came, and Steven bowed his head and wept.
Because for the
first time in his life, he finally understood.
He was.
Emotional triggers I tried to utilize to draw the
reader in:
—A mood of desperation with
a hoarse and cracked whisper and emotion choking in his throat
—Heaves and stutters
—Atmosphere of night, rain,
impending winter
—A quiet whisper of
Scripture in his mind, then that Still Small Voice
—A hero surrendering and
weeping
2.) This is my
second favorite spiritual scene I’ve ever written because it actually pierced
my heart and set me free personally.
We have a Billy Graham-like hero in
John Brady from A Passion Denied, who
for all his forgiveness of everyone who’s ever hurt him and all the spiritual
aid he’s given to others, is unable to forgive himself. Until his friend and mentor, Father Matthew McHugh, pierces him
with the Word of God.
Father Mac removed his hand from Brady’s shoulder and
took a drink of his coffee. He wrinkled his nose. “Cold. Want me to warm it
up?” He didn’t wait for his answer, but dumped both cups and replaced them with
hot. He set them on the table and sat back down.
“King David was an unusual character,” he said with a
faint smile. “Loved God with all of his heart, but had this unfortunate flaw.”
Father Mac paused to taste his coffee, then quirked his lips. “He was human. For
instance, one day he’s dancing before the Lord in a linen ephod, not giving a
whit that his wife thinks he’s making a fool of himself. Then down the road a
bit, he’s lusting after a married woman he sees taking a bath on the roof of
her house. And what does he do, this man who loves God with all of his heart?
He takes her to his bed, then has her husband sent to the battlefront to be
killed.”
Father Mac leaned in, his gaze intent. “He committed
adultery and murder, yet he’s still
the only man in the Bible God refers to as ‘a man after His own heart.’ Now why
is that, I wonder? I’ll tell you why. Because David was a man who had a love
affair with God. Imagine that—emotionally involved with the God of the
Universe. Trusted Him, worshiped him, sought after him—and all without
restraint. Did he mess up? You bet. Did he repent? With all of his heart,
aching inside whenever he offended his God. Why? Because he had a Father-son
relationship with him, loved him and wanted to please him.”
Father Mac hesitated, slowly tracing his finger along
the rim of his cup. He finally raised his eyes to capture Brady with a fixed
stare. “Just like you, John.”
Emotional triggers I tried to utilize to draw the
reader in:
—Father Mac’s initially
casual approach sets the stage for a serious contrast to when he ups the stakes
for his final point
—A touch of humor in a quirk
of Father Mac’s lips, keeping the conversation casual, safe, before he goes in
for the kill with “leaning in” and “gaze intent”
—Rhetorical questions posed
in a bullet-fire manner ups the pace and gravity of the situation
—A final pause and more
casual action with tracing the rim of the cup heightens the effect of the eye
contact, helping to drive his point home with a final hard-hitting statement to
pierce Brady’s heart with the truth ... and hopefully the reader’s!
3.) One of my favorite ways to empower a spiritual scene is
with internal dialogue where the character communicates with God via thoughts.
I utilize a touch of humor in this scene from A Passion Redeemed, but keep in mind that humor has to fit the
character’s personality. In this case, the hero, Mitch Dennehy, is a crotchety
and no-nonsense kind of guy, which lends itself to humor even in the most
serious of moments, such as when God directs him to pray for Rigan—his enemy
whom he hates most in the world.
Delight
thyself also in the Lord: and he shall give thee the desires of thine heart.
Mitch hung his head over the
sink, wetness stinging his eyes. He was truly happy for her, he was. Soon she
would be Collin’s wife. She had her heart’s desire. He exhaled a choking
breath. While his was buried beneath a mountain of lust and hate.
A quiet thought slowly
drifted through his brain, as inconspicuous as the tiny wisps of whiskers
scattered in the sink. He could have it. That quiet strength, that solid peace,
a true commitment to a Being who shouldered burdens and carried you through.
That’s what he needed. A depth of faith that was more than a pass through a
Bible, a visit to a church. A living, breathing relationship with a living,
breathing God.
His eyes blurred as he stared
in the mirror. He blinked once, and everything shifted into focus. He released
a draining breath. “All right, God, I’m done. Done keeping you at arm’s length.
Done doing it on my own. I’m ready to give you everything—my life, my hopes, my
desires. Help me. Guide me. Show me what to do.”
Forgive.
His jaw tightened and then
released. Slowly, he expelled a weighted breath, like fingers being pried away
and letting go. “Okay, I’ll try. But not on my own. Help me.”
Pray
for him.
The concept was clear, but
the application was as foreign as the Greek in which the apostle Matthew had
penned it: love your enemies … bless those who curse you … pray for those who
persecute you.
Mitch closed his eyes, unable
to imagine ever uttering a prayer for Rigan. “I can’t.”
Pray.
His fists balled on the edge
of the sink. Faith had once told him when you can’t pray, pray that you can. He
opened his eyes to glare upward. “All right … help me to want to pray.”
His fists relaxed. The
tension eased from his face. Hope overtook him like a flash flood. Mitch
exhaled, aware that his hands were trembling. He looked up at the ceiling.
“Dear God in Heaven, where have you been all my life?”
Emotional triggers I tried to utilize to draw the
reader in:
—A whisper of Scripture
—Emotional despair reflected
in head hanging over the sink, wetness stinging his eyes
—Moment of surrender when eyes
blur with tears he releases a draining breath
—A touch of anger with jaw
tightening over God’s quiet directive before he acquiesces with a weighted sigh
—A subtle and quiet humor in
God’s 2nd directive to pray
—A crabby show of surrender
with fists balled and eyes glaring before he obeys
—Complete surrender when
hope and peace flood within, relaxing the tension in his fists and face with a
shaky expulsion of air and trembling hands
—A hint of humor in Mitch’s
final response
4.) I have to
admit, I love this “come to Jesus” clip from Love at Any Cost, mostly because of the joy and innocence of the
little sister, Jess, a gentle soul who imparts the truth to Jamie, the brother who loves her at any cost. Even if it
means embracing a God he’s turned his back on.
Jess glanced up with a smile so full of love, it thickened the
walls of Jamie’s throat. “Promise me, Jammy,” his sister said, using the
nickname she’d given him when she was two, “that you’ll lay your will down for
God’s so he can bring us the miracle we all so desperately need.”
Pulse staggering, he stared at her, his breathing shallow. Lay his
will down for God’s? Pry his fingers apart and let go, just like that? Trust a
God he’d never trusted at all, just on a whim? His eyelids weighted closed. No,
not on a whim. On a request from the sister he loved, the mother he cherished,
and the friend he respected. The sting of tears burned in his nose when
Cassie’s image came to mind. And the
woman I want.
His breath caught at the twine of Jess’s fingers in his. “Let go,
Jamie, and let God be God,” she whispered, the trace of an imp in her smile.
“He does it so much better than you.”
Let God be God. He closed his eyes and in the whoosh of
an exhale, he felt his will crack, a fissure of hope no bigger than a thread in
a smothering shroud of disbelief. Relinquishing a weary sigh, he finally
nodded, Bram’s words echoing in his mind. “Faith
can move mountains, you know—be they granite . . . or pigheaded
pride.”
His mouth quirked despite tears burning his lids. Pride he had
plenty of, but faith? He drew in a shaky breath and released it, fluttering her
ebony ringlets as he pressed a kiss to his sister’s head. “Okay, Jess,” he
said, finally willing to let go—not the precious sister he cherished in his
arms—but the pride that separated him from her God.
Delicate arms quickly swallowed him whole.
Her God, yes. His heart skipped a fractured beat.
And now, apparently—his.
Emotional triggers I tried to utilize to draw the
reader in:
—A hero’s love for his
crippled sister conveyed through the thickening of the walls of his throat
—A staggering pulse and
shallow breathing reveals inner torment when Jamie’s love for his sister is
pitted against his conflict with God
—An introspective argument
that begins to relent with eyes weighting closed and a sting of tears
—The
whoosh of an exhale when surrender comes with a weary sigh
—A trace of
humor softens the moment while his heart skipping a beat reveals both the
gravity and anxiety of the decision he has just made
5.) And finally, in honor of Christmas, my last
spiritual excerpt is from my novella, “Last Chance Christmas” from the Cowboy Christmas Homecoming anthology
with Mary Connealy and Ruth Logan Herne. The reason I like it so well is
because it uses humor, something I don’t often do in my spiritual scenes.
Aunt Millie’s voice had its usual edge. “You know,
Cole, I couldn’t abide that girl when you brought her home. Thought for sure
God had slapped the Four Horsemen of the Apocalypse into one little filly,
never knowing what disaster she was going to inflict next.” The loud squeak of
her rocker meant she was picking up speed. “But I was dead wrong.”
His head shot up, jaw unhinging for the second time
in mere minutes. “What?”
Her lips veered off-center. “Truth is I’m a stubborn
old goat who didn’t want anybody taking my place with my babies, especially not
some pretty, little thing with more cotton in her head than brains.” Her lips
began to gum like always when she was about to swallow some pride. “But after sweet Abby choked on that
pit and Grace came home without an iota of that infernal joy she’s always
abubblin’ around, well, the Lord and me had a talk. And I don’t mind sayin’ he
brought me up short. Told me in no uncertain terms that cotton-head girl was a
gift to this family, and if I didn’t start treatin’ her right, I was cuttin’ off
my nose to spite my face.”
Cole could only stare, mouth hanging open like that
dolt she’d accused him of being. Groaning, he mauled his face with his hands.
“She’s an accident in the making, Millie, and nothing like the mother I want
for my kids.” He hung his head, eyes glazing into a faraway stare as his voice
faded into futility. “And nothing like Melissa.”
“No, no she’s not,” she said quietly, the squeaking
commencing once again, “but Melissa’s gone, Son, and I believe God sent this
woman to take her place or he wouldn’t have had the two of you fall so all-fire
in love.”
“I don’t
love her,” he hissed, the very notion scaring him silly. But the moment the
words left his mouth, he knew they were a lie. His shoulders slumped as he put
a hand to his eyes. “For the love of God, how did this happen?”
A raspy chuckle parted from Millie’s lips. “By just
that, Cole—the love of God. A gracious God Who binds two people together in
devotion to Him. Just like He did for me and my Sam and then for you and my
Melissa. And looks to this old woman like He’s afixin’ to do it again.”
Emotional triggers I tried to utilize to draw the
reader in:
—Humor with quirky aunt calling Grace "cotton-head girl"
—The soft side of a
crotchety, old woman whom God has convicted
—The hero’s shock in
realizing he loves the heroine
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ABOUT JULIE:
Julie Lessman is an award-winning author whose tagline of “Passion With a Purpose” underscores her intense passion for both God and romance. A lover of all things Irish, she enjoys writing close-knit Irish family sagas that evolve into 3-D love stories: the hero, the heroine, and the God that brings them together.
Author of The Daughters of Boston, Winds of Change, and Heart of San Francisco series, Julie was named American Christian Fiction Writers 2009 Debut Author of the Year and has garnered 18 Romance Writers of America and other awards. Voted #1 Romance Author of the year in Family Fiction magazine’s 2012 and 2011 Readers Choice Awards, Julie was also named on Booklist’s 2010 Top 10 Inspirational Fiction and Borders Best Fiction list.
Julie’s most recent novel, Isle of Hope was voted on Family Fiction magazine’s Best of 2015, and Surprised by Love appeared on Family Fiction magazine’s Best of 2014. Her independent novel A Light in the Window is an International Digital Awards winner, a 2013 Readers' Crown Award winner, and a 2013 Book Buyers Best Award winner. Julie has also written a self-help workbook for writers entitled Romance-ology 101: Writing Romantic Tension for the Sweet and Inspirational Markets. You can contact Julie through her website and read excerpts from each of her books at www.julielessman.com.
Brilliant post, Julie.
ReplyDeleteI like mine spiritual message subtle, because that's how it is in real life, in my opinion.
I want to show God sending us a message like bird seed on the journey and eventually we put it all together and get it. It's rare that he bangs us over the head with the entire bag.
Thanks, Tina!
DeleteYou said: "I like mine spiritual message subtle, because that's how it is in real life, in my opinion."
LOL ... not in my life, kiddo, but then I'm a flamin' CDQ!! ;)
I do, however, like the birdseed analogy because sowing God in a novel subtly takes more talent than just blurting it right out, in my opinion. But ... since I'm a blurter from way back, the scenarios I write are as natural to me as rain. But there's no question that some readers will think they're more of a downpour. ;)
Hugs,
Julie
I love the list of emotional triggers, Julie.
ReplyDeleteI love that kind of analysis of my work. Excellent and JOYFUL post.
Thanks, Mare! It doesn't really teach anything, so I wrestled with the idea of doing it, but I strongly felt like I wanted to focus on the spiritual in my writing at this time of year especially, and this was the only thing that came to mind.
DeleteHugs,
Julie
I like to read any level of spirituality as long as it's in there. There's nothing so disappointing to me than to read a really good Christian novel and find very little mention of God or if it is, it's more of an afterthought. I recently had to give a book a 3 star rating for one reason I just mentioned (among others), and it was by a well known Christian author (to remain unnamed). It just felt like I read a clean novel, not an inspirational one. I read Christian books for the spiritual aspect you can't get from secular writers, it's what helps connect me to the characters along with helping me grow in my own walk. Authors have a wonderful opportunity to witness of God in their writing, a wonderful ministry tool! So please authors, don't hide your light under a bush, let it shine through your writing...subtle or more emotionally piercing! You'll make this reader smile :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you for the soapbox moment Julie, I guess it's a passion of mine! You have no idea how your words on a page will impact the reader or what God will speak to our hearts through you! :-) I'd say the one book that impacted my life is Francine Rivers "Redeeming Love". I read it in a time of my life when I desperately needed to be healed of an area I had struggled with for many years, but didn't know it. God used her words to break bonds Satan had on me and the lies I told myself that kept me prisoner. How God PASSIONATELY pursued me, in spite of my filthy rags of sin, in spite of all the ways I'd messed up and thought I wasn't worthy of His love. He never stopped, He never wavered, He never gave up on me....NEVER! I won't ever be the same again and won't ever doubt His complete love for me. There are times I don't understand it, but that's the beauty of salvation, I don't have to :-) So powerful!
Julie, I love this post! All your examples made me picture each scene in my head and stirred my emotions. I love seeing the conversion of a character, it's a beautiful thing! Keep on keeping on with what you are doing, you have a passion to show God through your books :-) Thanks for the opportunity to win; since I have Cowboy Christmas Homecoming, I'd choose Light in the Window! Blessings!
TRIXI!! Oh my goodness, your post made me tear up, it is so beautifully written and poignant! You can get on your "soapbox" anytime, my friend, when espousing all that God has done for you because He deserves the honor and praise!
DeleteYou said, "There's nothing so disappointing to me than to read a really good Christian novel and find very little mention of God or if it is, it's more of an afterthought."
Oh, man, do I hear you on that! When I judged the Ritas in the past, I would usually get one or two sweet secular romances and although they were good, they just felt hollow to me because God was missing.
And when that happens in a supposedly Christian novel? That does disappoint me, too, Trixi.
But you know what? That's the trend right now in publishing. The reason I say that is my publisher wanted to buy Isle of Hope, but only if I cut it in half and toned the spirituality way down because I think the CBA is trying to move a wee bit more mainstream as far as the spirituality in books so as to widen the net, so to speak, which I think is a good idea. In fact, I plan to try my hand at a secular book soon, but I honestly don't know if I can do it without mentioning God. That's like asking me to write a romance without kisses. :|
I would LOVE to send you a winning copy of ALITW, my friend, so here's to a win!
Hugs,
Julie
Unfortunately, I have seen this trend in Christian novels and it breaks my heart & saddens me! I get that publishers want to reach the secular world, but it shouldn't be at the cost of a watered down Gospel message! Why should they expect a Christian author to tone down a spiritual message? It's like trying to be someone you aren't, it goes against your God nature. I think that's why some authors have gone to indie publishing themselves. It's not that you have to beat someone over the head with the Bible (though some may need that), but you DO need to have the spiritual message be a natural part of the story. Like I said, it helps me to connect with the characters and character depth is an important factor to me! :-)
DeleteTRIXI SAID: " Why should they expect a Christian author to tone down a spiritual message? It's like trying to be someone you aren't, it goes against your God nature. I think that's why some authors have gone to indie publishing themselves."
DeleteWhy, Trixi? Because of the market, of course! Like I said, they're wanting to expand the tent pegs, which makes perfect sense since the secular world doesn't want blatant spirituality.
BUT ... another answer is right before our eyes in this very blog. Most Christians responding in the comments section of this blog -- and I'd say it's a HUGE majority -- prefer subtle inspiration over the emotional/heart piercing kind. I will admit that this shocks me a lot, even though my husband's been telling me this for a long time now.
You also said: "It's not that you have to beat someone over the head with the Bible (though some may need that), but you DO need to have the spiritual message be a natural part of the story."
I totally agree, my friend, and that's what I try to do, but the truth is that is not what sells most in the market because natural or no, people prefer a subtle message with their entertainment, not a life lesson. :)
Thanks for your support, Trixi -- really appreciate it, my friend. :)
Hugs,
Julie
Good morning all (or goodnight, depending on where you're hanging your stocking this Christmas)!
ReplyDeleteLovely post, Julie - I could practically see the scenes playing out. I don't have a specific book in mind as a reference. I like the faith theme to run throughout a story like it runs throughout life - quieter at some times, louder at others.
That's an EXCELLENT way to put it, SARAH, so THANK YOU! It is mostly quiet, but I tend to live in the "loud," so that's where my books tend to go as well. :)
DeleteHugs and good luck!
Julie
Hi Julie:
ReplyDeleteI think all your examples show the moment when the character lives the saying: "Let go, let God". I think many people hear this phrase without really knowing what it means. A good Christian novel shows the true joy and value of the Christian life -- all without preaching.
I also like that you did not have God talking directly to your characters (in italics no less) because that moves the story to where it's much harder to believe. I think, like good writers, God does not tell us; He shows us.
Funny, your priest scene is also one of my favorites but not for the spirituality. I like the way you honestly portray the priest the way I remember all the priests from my childhood up to my old age.
I'm sure that Emma's story has my favorite and most emotional scenes. Given that Emma is married! That's a lot of conflict the others did not have to face.
I think it is time to read all seven Boston books again. Please put me in the drawing for your newest books, Kindle versions.
Vince
VINCE!! Did you not get my blog tour/influencer copy of Love Everlasting??? You are the list, I promise, but if I didn't hear back from the person on the initial or second e-mail, I didn't send the e-copy. :( I will be happy to send you an e-copy of LE if you have a Kindle or Kindle app.
DeleteYou said: "I also like that you did not have God talking directly to your characters (in italics no less) because that moves the story to where it's much harder to believe. I think, like good writers, God does not tell us; He shows us."
LOL ... I actually do that a fair amount, Vince, and did that in Steven's scene on the porch in the rain, but I will agree with you that doing that makes the story harder to believe. It's a fact that most people -- even Christians -- don't relate to God that way. But because I'm a CDQ who DOES relate to God that way, it's a natural byproduct in my books. But I figured if I could do it anywhere, it would be in the Christian market or I would be in the ABA right now. :)
I know my blatant spirituality in my books (which I feel is more naturally presented in actual life situations rather than being preachy) is not everyone's cup of tea, but it's the only tea I know how to brew right now, so it should be interesting to see how I handle writing a secular romance, which I fully intend to do. :)
I LOVE writing nuns and priests into my books and am having a ball right now including another crotchety nun (they all seemed crotchety to me in grade school and high school!) into my Western novel since the Daughters of Charity actually opened a state-of-the-art hospital in Virginia City, Nevada, in the late 1800s, so it's part of my plot. :)
I am halfway through reading the Boston books myself right now because I do that annually since I miss the O'Connors, so go for it!! ;) ESPECIALLY when I use clips from the stories, which makes me miss them all the more. :(
Hugs!!
Julie
Hi Julie:
DeleteI just noticed this post at 11:45 pm on Thursday. I just don't like this reply format. You can know there was a new comment when 100 jumps to 101 -- even days later -- but you don't know where it was posted. I also think it cuts readership on the other comments other than one's own. This format is ideal for large communities where there may be 20 or 30 comments on each topic comment. Usually original comments are given topic labels so you can easily spot what you are interested in and then read all those comments.
Anyway, I'll write you an email on the book situation.
As for having God talking directly to POV characters, I don't remember you doing that. Perhaps we have different ideas on what counts as God talking.
If the author writes, "God spoke to John. and said, "I want you to not go on missionary work but rather say in your current stateside congregation." If the author says God spoke, then God spoke.
However, if the author writes, "John felt a stillness in his heart that he had never experienced before. In that silence there was a whisper, "I want you to not go on missionary work but rather say in your current stateside congregation."
In the second example it is up to the reader to decide if the voice is from the character's psychology or the actual voice of God. This second example, for me, is not God talking directly to the character. This could well be what the character just thinks is the words of God.
Vince
Hey, VINCE, yeah, the jury is still out on the commenting format. I thought I was going to like it, then felt the way you do. But I have to say, it's grown on me, especially since I can search a commenter's name or mine to see where new comments might be. But you're right -- you still do have to scan down each comment to make sure you don't miss any, so that's a pain.
DeleteThank you for explaining that, my friend. I was thinking that the following excerpt from the A Love Surrendered clip was what you were talking about, especially with the line that says '"Because you are mine," the thought came ...' from the clip below:
Only the still small voice of God in his heart stirring a flame of hope that brought peace to his soul.
He leadeth me beside the still waters ... He restoreth my soul … He leadeth me in the paths of righteousness …
“I don’t understand,” Steven rasped, eyes brimming with tears, “why do you even care?”
Because you are mine, the thought came, and Steven bowed his head and wept.
Because for the first time in his life, he finally understood.
He was.
Thanks for giving me a pass, my friend! ;)
Hugs,
Julie
Excellent topic Julie! I usually prefer subtle. I'm the librarian at my church and find most readers don't like too heavy a hand. But it also depends on the book. How's that for refusing to commit?
ReplyDeleteThat said, I noticed a trend a few years back when I couldn't even tell I was reading a Christian book. I really didn't like that!
A novel I loved the pivotal spiritual scene in was Boo Humbug by Rene Gutteridge.
LOL ... that's not refusing to commit, my friend, that's telling the truth!
DeleteMy husband has often told me I have too many triggers in my books that tick people in the CBA off -- romantic passion, too long of books, too much sophisticated language, too much complication in plots, AND too much spirituality. I would have to agree on all those points, but I never thought the spirituality was too key of a point till now, reading everyone's comments on their preference for subtle. HA! It's a wonder I sell any books at all, I guess, because if my books are anything in the spiritual realm, they are NOT subtle. ;)
I have never read Boo Humbug or really, any of Rene's books, but I've heard wonderful things about them.
Thanks for your comment, Terri, and here's to a win!
Hugs,
Julie
I loved your examples, Julie! As a reader, I guess I tend to prefer subtle, but sometimes a piercing scene is what fits the story and is exactly what *I* need and can be what God uses to pierce MY stubborn heart :) Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteLOL, FEDORA, "piercing" is what I'm all about most of the time, and you're right -- sometimes that's what we need to hear the message in our hearts. HA! Especially me, since God usually has to beat me over the head with it ... ;)
DeleteBut you know what? The letters I receive from readers make it all worth it. I recently got an email from a reader who said Isle of Hope convicted her SO much, she contacted a former best friend she hadn't talked to in ten years (due to a huge falling out) and arranged lunch to clear the air (read: forgive!). They are now good friends again AND both reading my books, too. :)
Hugs!!
Julie
I like books where the faith message and the humor intertwine... Sometimes subtle... and sometimes like a rolling pin to the head (Angelina and Isabo in the Double S Ranch series. They're not afraid to go toe-to-toe with clueless cowboys)... If it fits the scene, it works for me.
ReplyDeleteGreat post, Julie!
Yes, RUTHY, it definitely does! And you know what -- that's soooo YOU! Scenes like that come as naturally to you as mine do to me, so I really believe they also, in turn, come across naturally to most readers even though that may not be how the readers are or interact with God in their own lives.
DeleteI remember with A Passion Most Pure, how reluctant I was to have the heroine, Faith O'Connor, talk and pray out loud to God, but the truth was that was how I was and am, so I was just conveying my spiritual self through Faith. I cannot tell you how many letters I received from readers telling me it never occurred to them to pray about every single thing or pray out loud with friends/their children until they read that book and now they do. So you never know when your own spiritual idiosyncrasies will touch a heart. :)
HUGS,
Julie
Fantastic post, Julie! I must say, the photo of you in front of the Christmas tree is beautiful.
ReplyDeleteI love to read books that mix both subtle spirituality and emotional spirituality. If a passage brings tears to my eyes, the writer has done their job.
Aw, thanks, JILL! My husband put my pic in front of a ton of different settings, but I like this one the best. :)
DeleteI agree that I also like a mix of subtle and emotional since it's a wee bit like sweet and sour -- they complement each other. :)
And when an author brings tears to my eyes? They're golden, although admittedly that's not a hard thing to do with a weepy CDQ like me. :)
Hugs,
Julie
Love this post, Julie!!! I love books that lift my spirit AND strike it to my heart. I always need to improve my walk to grow closer to God. Sometimes a novel will do just that. The latest novel that I can think of, and boy do I read, is The Secret She Kept by Cathy Gohkle. A deep story of forgiveness that struck me to the core. Merry Christmas everyone :).
ReplyDeleteOh, KELLY, I LOVED The Secret She Kept, but then I've never read anything by Cathy that I don't love! The first book I ever read of hers was Promise Me This, where she likened the hero to Jesus Christ without me even being aware until the end, when it hit me like a punch to the gut. I was SO moved when I finished that novel (at 2:00 AM!), that I got out of bed and ran downstairs to send Cathy an email (I had never met her or talked to her before), thanking her for a truly beautiful novel that impacted my heart immeasurably. We have been good friends ever since. :)
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Julie
I love this post. I love both approaches as long as the spiritual emphasis is there.
ReplyDeleteOne of the most powerful books I have read this year was by Melissa Jagears her latest book. I loaned my copy to a family member.
Me too, WILANI! Like I said to Jill above, I think a combination enhances the spiritual impact because one complements the other.
DeleteCan you give us the title of Melissa's book so we can check it out for ourselves?
Hugs and good luck!
Julie
Wilani do you mean A Heart Most Certain?
DeleteYes, the book was A Heart Most Certain.
DeleteSorry I have been battling the sleepy effect of the medication. Hopefully when I see the doctor tomorrow I can go off at least 2 of them.
I have also been trying to get my lesson prepared for tonight as well as Christmas baking done. I just baked fruitcake cookies for the first time and they turned out great.
Thanks, Wilani, for giving us the title. I'm sure a lot of people are going to want to check Melissa's book out.
DeleteYou baked a fruitcake? Does anybody honestly eat them anymore? ;) I would love to take a poll on how many people do. I saw 43% in one poll, which I think is high. :) But if it were the kind of fruitcake that doesn't use that candied fruit (which I hate!), it could be pretty good, I think. :)
Hugs and praying you're back to normal soon!
Julie
Julie, what a beautiful post! I have a lot going on right now and have focused on being intentional to celebrate Jesus this Christmas. It's always good to remember why we write inspirational fiction. We're more than writing clean stories, we write with purpose to honor God. Thanks for sharing today!
ReplyDeleteAMEN, JACKIE! And that's why I wanted to write this post today -- to celebrate the season with the true reason we are Christian writers and not secular. :)
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Julie
Good morning,
ReplyDeleteI like how you shared how you made each scene work. As a reader I like both kinds of scenes. More emotional and piercing heart. I need both in my life. But, I love scenes that draw me in and turn my focus to God.
Have a great day.
Becky B
Thanks, BECKY! And "more emotional and piercing heart" is truly what I am all about because that's how I came to Christ, but it's definitely not for everyone. :)
DeleteYou have a great day, too, and GOOD LUCK!
Hugs,
Julie
I prefer subtle, unless the emotion warrants more. I don't like it if it seems the author wrote a story and then went back and tossed in a couple of prayers to make it Christian.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the awesome post Julie!
LOL, CONNIE, I hear you! I remember when my agent told me it was going to be "slim to nil" to get A Passion Most Pure published in the Christian market because of the passion. So I asked her about pitching me to the secular market instead, and she laughed. "Julie," she said, "in most Christian novels, there may be a sermon here and mention of a prayer there, but in my books "God was another character" Who was integral to the book, so there was no way the secular market was going to go for that. :)
DeleteHugs and good luck!
Julie
That is funny. No, they wouldn't go for it. I have a story I've never written, but carry in my heart. It's probably my only story that is truly 100% about the message. A prodigal son story. One of these days I'm gonna write it.
DeleteOh, CONNIE, you should! Even if it's just for yourself, but I'm hoping the pendulum will swing back for books where the message is paramount.
DeleteHugs and you go, girl!
Julie
JULIE, excellent post! I loved reading your excerpts again, seeing how your characters released their hold and let God sit on the throne of their lives!
ReplyDeleteWhether I prefer highly emotional or subtle depends on the story and the character. As long as its believable, then I'm happy. Personally I've had God moments when He spoke, not audibly, but still without a doubt that the quiet voice was His. So I don't mind italicized words from God. I just love to see the characters grow and change and some need more of a nudge--make that shove--than others. :-)
Janet
Agreed, JANET -- as long as I see true spiritual growth in a character, I'm generally happy. :)
DeleteHugs,
Julie
Great post! Thanks for sharing your Five Favs. I loved the one from A Passion Redeemed. Thanks for the chance to win a copy of Cowboy Christmas Homecoming! That sounds like a great collection!
ReplyDeleteThanks SO much, SALLY, and you are definitely in the draw, my friend, so GOOD LUCK!
DeleteHugs,
Julie
I like both the subtle reminders and the sharp piercing. One book that comes to mind with both the subtle and piecing is A Voice In the Wind by Francine Rivers. It's a story of a girl who keeps a quiet faith, but lives her life out loud as a follower of Christ.The entire Mark of The Lion series has a lot of spiritual moments that have resounded with me (I have read the series 5 times).
ReplyDeleteOh, KLKFROG, YES!! The Mark of the Lion Series by Francine Rivers (of which A Voice in the Wind is a part) is one of my top favorite series AND one of the books that has spoken loud and clear to me despite the gentle and quiet faith of Hadassah. I need to reread the series again for sure, so thanks for the reminder! It's been too long.
DeleteHugs and GOOD LUCK!
Julie
Julie, what an amazing post. I've been working on learning how to write emotion more effectively into my stories. Your scenes are beautiful examples of this. I admit, the second scene made me tear up.
ReplyDeleteI like how you shared the elements you used to heighten the spiritual scenes and the emotions. Thank you so much! I'm coming back to this post when I need a little inspiration!
Aw, thanks, JEANNE! The second scene rips my heart out every single time because it pierced my own heart with a truth that has truly set me free, so I'm glad it touched you too! :)
DeleteHugs and GOOD LUCK!
Julie
hi Julie
ReplyDeleteSubtle or not subtle, as long as it isn't "preachy", I enjoy the spirituality in my books. By "preachy" I mean a pace-stopping sermon that gets inserted by the author. Like a "and now a word from our sponsors" thing and then "back to our story" shift once the sermon is done. *sigh*
You have the nice, germane flow of spirituality in your books. I LOVE how you write those pivotal spiritual awakenings because they flow from who that character is. If people don't like that, well... they probably are miserable and want everyone to be miserable with them. I've laughed and wept along with your characters in all your books. Your passion is powerful.
Actually, all the Seekers do a really good job of inserting the spiritual element naturally into their characters. I've never felt preached at in any of the books, but rather, inspired and/or enlightened about how much God wants to work in our lives.
Ah yes, DEB, I know what you mean about "pace-stopping sermon" because my editor actually cut a tent-revival scene from my final O'Connor book in which I used some Billy Sunday quotes from an actual tent revival. HA! That's probably part of the reason why she cut it, I bet. That and the fact the wayward girlfriends of the heroine only went to mock the revival. :)
DeleteYou said: "I LOVE how you write those pivotal spiritual awakenings because they flow from who that character is ... I've laughed and wept along with your characters in all your books. Your passion is powerful."
Wow, Deb, that really blesses me, my friend, because the spiritual awakenings DO flow from the character, so thank you for pointing that out AND for your encouraging comment!
Hugs and more hugs!
Julie
Good morning, Julie! Thank you for providing all of these wonderfully emotional examples. It really helped me see where I need to punch up my own scenes.
ReplyDeleteI think there's a place for both subtle and emotional spirituality in our work, depending on what the scene calls for at the moment. But I admit, I love to see the heroes come to an emotional breaking point in the story. I believe everyone can relate to a similar moment in their own lives.
Absolutely, throw my name in the hat for a copy of your book.
RENEE SAID: "I think there's a place for both subtle and emotional spirituality in our work, depending on what the scene calls for at the moment. But I admit, I love to see the heroes come to an emotional breaking point in the story. I believe everyone can relate to a similar moment in their own lives."
DeleteGosh, RENEE, I never thought about that, but that's probably pretty spot-on! As a CDQ, I certainly have had TONS of "emotional breaking points," but I've got to believe that the most stoic and unemotional human beings in the world also experience emotional breaking points, just not as "loudly"! ;)
And I'm with you on seeing a strong hero come to his emotional breaking point -- very powerful in my opinion.
Hugs and GOOD LUCK!
Julie
Good morning, Julie! Thank you for providing all of these wonderfully emotional examples. It really helped me see where I need to punch up my own scenes.
ReplyDeleteI think there's a place for both subtle and emotional spirituality in our work, depending on what the scene calls for at the moment. But I admit, I love to see the heroes come to an emotional breaking point in the story. I believe everyone can relate to a similar moment in their own lives.
Absolutely, throw my name in the hat for a copy of your book.
Merry Christmas in advance to all of the authors and readers here!
ReplyDeleteAs a reader, I prefer more emotional spirituality that pierces the heart.
I mean, I am not the one for the preachy literature. But I love everything raw and real. If the book can touch my heart (or inspire my brain :)), I am all in. A good example is A Love redeemed by Francine Rivers, which is not a subtle onr - but the one that is very much ALIVE.
WHOO-HOO, JANKA!!! You're my first staunchly pro-emotional spirituality comment, so BLESS YOU! Now I don't feel so alone. And no wonder you read my books, my sweet friend!
DeleteAnd Francine River's Redeeming Love is a true classic and admittedly by Francine, a love letter to God in gratitude for her conversion.
I believe there is probably not a more beloved Christian novel on the planet than Redeeming Love, as evidenced by the solid 5-star rating on Amazon with almost 4,000 reviews -- WOW!!
Plus I Googled the top Christian novels of all time, and not only did Redeeming Love come in first (beating The Shack), but all three books from her Mark of the Lion series (which several people have mentioned) are on the list too.
Here's a Goodreads link that lists all the top Christian fiction:
TOP CHRISTIAN NOVELS OF ALL TIME
Thanks, my friend, and GOOD LUCK!
Julie
Wow Julie you are such a powerful writer. I loved reading those scenes and remembering the stories. smile Thanks for sharing the ways to capture that emotion. Just reminds me of why you are one of my favorite authors. smile
ReplyDeleteAw, SANDRA, you never fail to make me smile, my friend -- THANK YOU!! You already know you're one of mine too!
DeleteHugs and more hugs,
Julie
JULIE, tremendous post and fantastic examples! I love your heart and the way you write. No wonder you tear up as you read over your scenes. It's obvious God speaks through your work. :-)
ReplyDeleteI like all levels of spirituality. Sometimes, the books and stories that resonate the most are the ones with subtle, yet deep spiritual truths that draw me closer to God long after I finish the last page.
A life-changer for me? Redeeming Love by Francine Rivers. Such a perfect picture of selfless love and so many great takeaways.
CYNTHIA, thank you SO much, my sweet friend, for your kind comment -- MUCH appreciated! And, YES, Redeeming Love is far and away the TOP life-changing novel in the CBA, as evidenced by my comment above to Janka, where I list a link for the top Christian novels of all time. :)
DeleteHugs and more hugs!
Julie
Good morning, Julie and fellow Seekervillagers. Great post, Julie. I don't mind blurting or subtle, but one Christian author submitted to her church elders (what shall I say, not exactly demand but more than a soft suggestion) to include a salvation story in each and every novel. Now I do know that's why you write, but this became that every one of her novels revolved around this, and of course the repentants prayer. Sorry, but I don't read her books anymore. The way you and all my favorite authors do it is just the way I love it. Yes, I'd love to win A Cowboys Christmas Homecoming! Thank you!
ReplyDeleteOh, MARIANNE, I hear you, my friend! Before I became a Christian, I was a hard-nosed agnostic whose stomach literally turned and temper flared whenever I heard anybody spouting about salvation. Although I am a Christian now, I still have tinges of that same balking at any typical salvation messages in novels or blatant "praise God"s and other Christian-speak.
DeleteWHICH is why I truly do go to great lengths to avoid that blatant preaching and sow the spirituality (and doubt) into my character's lives instead, rather than outright preaching. Or ... at least I hope I do that ... :|
Thanks for your encouragement, my friend, and here's to a win!
Hugs,
Julie
The Mark of the Lion trilogy by Francine Rivers. It is amazing how this work of historical fiction can still be so relevant today.
ReplyDeleteOh, VEEMOMOF3, I couldn't agree more! Like I told KLKFROG above, The Mark of the Lion Series by Francine Rivers is one of my top favorite series AND one of the books that has spoken loud and clear to me despite the gentle and quiet faith of Hadassah. AND it's on the list of top Christian fiction of all time on Goodreads, so here's the link:
DeleteTOP CHRISTIAN NOVELS OF ALL TIME
Hugs and GOOD LUCK!
Julie
What fun to revisit some favourite characters this way. I exclusively read Christian Fiction because I crave the spiritual part of a story. Love both subtle and deeply emotional spirituality and am always thrilled when it stirs something deep in my soul and encourages change.
ReplyDeleteI recently finished the last of Varina Denman's Mended Hearts series and all three books are definitely of the deep emotionally spiritual variety. And a real change maker. Opened up my perspectives, made me think about a lot of issues through the light of Christ.
I've just finished The Search by Suzanne Woods Fisher -- one of her earlier books -- and it's a lighter read but there's still times when she convicts me anew with a challenge. Like this one: "Are we going to be part of condemning a man? Or are we going to be part of releasing him from condemnation?" (p. 191)
Oh, KAV, I recently read Jaded from the Mended Hearts series and LOVED it!
DeleteThe two authors who have pierced me spiritually more than any others are Cathy Gohlke and Susan Meissner (particularly The Shape of Mercy), but that could be because the themes of their books were reflective of something I was going through myself at the time.
But isn't that what Christian fiction is all about? Touching people at the core when they need it the most ... whether subtly or blatantly! :)
Hugs!!
Julie
Beautiful examples, Julie! Thanks for this inspiring and joy-filled post today, perfect for the Christmas season!
ReplyDeleteAw, thank you, MYRA -- MUCH appreciated, my friend!
DeleteHugs,
Julie
Hi Julie:
ReplyDeleteTo be honest I think much of the power of your spiritual insights that come near the end of a story are driven by the stark honesty of the doubts you also allow earlier in the story -- doubts which many a reader will also be feeling as well.
For experiencing the raw power of the contrary, I much favor the following scene in which the abused and disfigured (by her estranged husband) heroine tries to win the hero over to God's side with reasoning many would find hard to swallow.
“God told St. Paul in the Bible that ‘my strength is made perfect in weakness.’”
His gaze thinned. “It says that? Really?”
She nodded.
“Huh,” he said absently, the notion somewhat unsettling that his own weakness could empower God. He peered up. “So was it for you? His strength made perfect in weakness?”
Moments passed before she spoke, and when she did, something squeezed in his chest at the pain that flickered across her features. Her gaze trailed beyond him, out the window as if the rain were grace soaking into her very soul.
“Yes.”
His jaw tightened. “I have to be honest, Emma—I have trouble understanding that. I have never gone through what you have, to be sure, but to me, it almost seems as if it was God who turned his back on you, causing that pain.”
A ghost of a smile shadowed her lips. “Not caused, Sean—allowed. As a loving Father, God allows us to suffer the consequences of our misguided actions . . .” She looked away, but not before he saw the depth of sorrow in her eyes. “Our wrong decisions, our sins . . .”
Sean snatched up a fountain pen from his desk and roughly rubbed the rounded cap, his fingers suddenly as taut as the press of his lips. “I don’t know what sins you think you’ve committed in your past, Emma, but I do know the caliber of woman you are today. And at the risk of sounding blasphemous, I have to tell you—I have a problem with a ‘loving Father’ who would cause—or allow—a woman like you to experience the hurt that you have.”
Lessman, Julie. Heart Revealed, A: A Novel (Winds of Change) Baker Book Group. Kindle Edition.
I think with the above passage you have made Emma one of the most sympathetic and worthy of heroines. Such honesty to me is pure Lessman!
Vince
VINCE SAID: "To be honest I think much of the power of your spiritual insights that come near the end of a story are driven by the stark honesty of the doubts you also allow earlier in the story -- doubts which many a reader will also be feeling as well."
DeleteTrue to your nature, Vince, you pierce a point better than anybody I know, finger on the pulse of many things others miss. That "stark honesty of doubts" were my own at one time, so I simply lead the reader through the same journey I took from utter darkness into His glorious light. So thank you for your insight on that.
You also said: "Such honesty to me is pure Lessman!" Again -- dead-on, my friend. Thanks for "getting me" better than most.
HUGS!!
Julie
Hi Julie! I loved all your examples (and I loved your Passion series, too!) A book I read recently that I found impactful from the spiritual aspect was Ruthy's "Refuge of the Heart." It really touched me.
ReplyDeleteOverall I prefer subtle spirituality. I think Charles Martin is fantastic at this! That said, there are times where I've felt like the book demanded more Jesus, lacking spiritual impact. So, I think it depends on the characters and the scene. It's not an easy thing to get right and everyone has their opinion on the matter.
I'm so happy to hear your little Evie is doing well. Have a merry Christmas, Julie!
Hey, JOSEE, thanks so much for your prayers and thoughts for Evie -- she is doing very well, albeit keeping her parents up nights with wanting to be held. :)
DeleteI LOVE the spirituality in Ruthy's books, probably because she's not afraid to be blatant about it if she has to, which is the mark of great writer -- knowing when and how to convey a scene.
Gosh, I've never heard of Charles Martin, but the man has a solid 5-star rating on many of his books, so it looks like I need to check him out. Which of his books would you recommend (read: which is the most romantic? ;)
You said: "That said, there are times where I've felt like the book demanded more Jesus, lacking spiritual impact. So, I think it depends on the characters and the scene. It's not an easy thing to get right and everyone has their opinion on the matter."
No, it's not, but some do it really well, like Ruthy, for example. And, yes, when I feel like I've just read a Christian novel that seems more like a sweet secular romance, I definitely feel cheated. :|
Hugs,
Julie
Well, I should have said it in my first comment but one of the reasons I love ALL of your books is the way in which you write about God.
DeleteCharles Martin always writes in the first person and while there is some romance in his books, it's secondary. The first book of his that I read was "The Mountain Between Us." Oh my goodness. So good, I stayed up through the night to read it. It's being made into a movie starring Kate Winslet. I also loved "Water From My Heart" and "When Crickets Cry." I've never read a book of his I didn't love. If you're not a Christian, you may miss the spirituality but if you are, then it's everywhere.
Aw, thanks SO much, JOSEE -- MUCH appreciated! I am definitely going to check Charles Martin out, so thanks for the referral.
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Julie
As a reader I prefer the subtle spirituality in my books. I hate it when it is layered on too thickly (and believe me I have read my fair share of preachy books in which the whole story revolves around the spiritual journey and hardly has anything else in it) because then I just feel like I am being preached at, but the sort of examples you gave are of the kind with a little humor, a little emotion, and a lot of truth that I don't mind reading.
ReplyDeleteI don't actually write Christian books. My goal- and what I feel is my calling- in writing is to give teenagers like me young adult books to read which have an interesting story and are clean. I have read too many YA books that have had not very young adult material in them, and unfortunately they just seem to keep getting worse, and I think that the garbage in these YA books is influencing teenagers the wrong way. I just want to give other teenagers a good story without trying to shove anything down their throats and taking advantage of how impressionable they are, and I feel that if I were to write anything too "Christian" I would just scare them away and turn them toward the "garbage" and that is the last thing I would want to do.
I hear you, NICKY, because teenagers today really don't like the preaching at all, so you go, girl, and I pray God anoints your ministry!
DeleteMy ministry, on the other hand, is to reach out to the Christian market where TONS of Christian girls & women live like the world does -- following its amoral lifestyle rather than God's.
My favorite story is about a young Christian woman whose mother gave her one of my books. This young woman was drinking, living with her boyfriend, and in general, not living the Christian lifestyle she was raised in. When I saw her, she told me she didn't like me very much while reading one of my books.
"Why?" I asked, a bit stumped.
"Because I was so angry with you over the spiritual scenes that pricked my conscience that I wanted to throw the book at the wall every single time. "But," she said with a misty smile, "by the time I got to the last page, you had brought me up to a whole 'nother level with God."
Trust me, I shed tears on that one for sure! ;)
Hugs and keep on keeping on, Nicky -- you're doing good!
Hugs,
Julie
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ReplyDeleteI like the spirituality scene in the story about Brady.
ReplyDeleteI do think some subtleness (is that even a word?! ;) ) is good, but I like books that have it enough that you KNOW what is being shared! Thanks for being willing to let God speak through you in this way.
I love to read, especially fiction, so I think it's a good thing when I finish one and know that I have been spiritually challenged.
Keep up the good work!
LOL, yes, Roz -- "subtleness" is a word, but I'll admit, I had to look it up, too, just to make sure, so we're in the same boat. :)
DeleteAnd I SO agree with you about "when I finish one and know that I have been spiritually challenged." I REALLLY like that too!
Thanks for your encouragement, my friend, and here's hoping it nets your a win!
Hugs and GOOD LUCK!
Julie
Keep up the good work!
JULIE, I LOVE how you bring spiritual truths to light in your stories! I think one's heart condition determines the means necessary to be reached.
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing updates on Miss Evie! She is so precious.
Please enter me in the drawing.
CARYL, THANK YOU, my sweet friend!
DeleteYou said: "I think one's heart condition determines the means necessary to be reached."
Oh, I couldn't have said it better myself, girlfriend, because that is SO true! I would hope that most Christian fiction readers have dealt with a lot of heart issues after coming to Christ, so subtlety works well with them. But then you have those who may still have deeply buried issues and sometimes it takes a bulldozer to unearth the pain/sin inside. So you nailed it on this one, sweetie!
And thank YOU for praying for our sweet Evie! I wasn't planning on putting up any more updates, but I probably will one of these days because so many people were kind enough to keep her covered in prayer. :)
And, hey -- have you had a chance to read Love Everlasting yet and see your character?
You're in the draw, girlfriend, so GOOD LUCK!!
Hugs,
Julie
Hi Julie:
ReplyDeleteA Radio Station in SF that you might love!
I do!!
KABL
It's been around since 1959 and plays great oldies from before that date. It does not run commercials except facts about SF! I think it is a Chamber of Commerce thing. Right now on its website it has a picture of the Cliff House.
http://www.kabl960.com/
When I discovered this station I just stopped listening to all the other stations and even my music library. Saturday and Sunday night they run two hours of Sinatra songs...all with history and commentary. I think you'll like it. (the Sinatra shows do have a few commercials. They may come with the rights to play those programs.)
Vince
Oh, VINCE, it's soooooo fun to see a pic of The Cliff House, my friend, AND check out this cool station! I'm a definite "oldies" girl (and an oldie as well), so I will definitely give it a shot.
DeleteYou are SUCH a doll!!
Hugs,
Julie
I would have to say subtle spirituality that lifts your spirits! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Anna -- you're in the draw, my friend, so GOOD LUCK!
DeleteHugs,
Julie
Thank you for this uplifting post,Julie! Always love the spiritual moments of your books. Whether they're quiet,powerful,or laced with a bit of humor,they always mean a lot to me! It was many of the moments in APMP and APR that helped me during when of my most difficult times,and in fact all your books have moments that touch and lift me spiritually when I need it most! (No need to enter me in the drawing,already every book you've written so far ;) ) Just had to thank you again for your books that have made me laugh,cry,and touched my heart and soul!
ReplyDeleteOh, LYNNE, you have truly been SUCH a blessing to me, my sweet friend, so THANK YOU sooooo much!!
DeleteLove you to pieces!
Hugs,
Julie
I like subtle the most. Piercing the heart is good especially if it just stops me in my tracks as I am reading and really makes me ponder and take a good look at my life. I don't like preachiness in books though.
ReplyDeleteGiver of Wonders is the book that I just finished that really touched me and made me think about spiritual matters.
I have all your books except The Cowboy Christmas Homecoming. I need and want it. ;-) Please enter me.
BOOS MUM, thank you for your comment, my friend, AND for reading my books -- SO appreciated!!
DeleteOh, I LOVE Roseanna White, so Givers of Wonders sounds wonderful too!
Well, it sounds like we need to get a copy of Cowboy Christmas Homecoming into your hands, my friend, so GOOD LUCK!!
Hugs,
Julie
Your passion and enthusiasm, Julie... you bless my socks off! HUGS, friend! Great big HUGS!!!
ReplyDeleteRight back at you, my sweet friend -- I SO appreciate you and the beautiful job you did on my interview. You knocked yourself out, and it really shows, so THANK YOU!!
DeleteHUGS AND MORE HUGS AND SOME ON TOP OF THAT!
Julie
These are all great excerpts. I'd read all of them except The Cowboy Christmas Homecoming. Reading the excerpts is like revisiting old friends. I think I prefer subtle spirituality that lifts my spirits.
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PAM!! You enjoy subtle spirituality and yet you STILL like my books?
DeleteI agree with you, though -- reading the excerpts is like revisiting old friends for sure. Which is why I reread all my books once a year. ;)
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Julie
Julie, thanks for asking an interesting question. Personally I like more subtlety. I think the character's actions should show their faith more than a flat out sermon. Recently I read Montana Rose by Mary Connealy, and I liked how Red lived his faith.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Tanya, for your opinion! And I love Mary's books, so I concur with your assessment. :)
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Julie
I liked the subtlety. It's more realistic to life. Although life can throw the other your way too.Thanks for this opportunity.
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Julie
Julie, I'm sorry I'm late! It's been my theme this week it seems.
ReplyDeleteGreat post! Thanks for sharing your examples and also for pointing out the emotional triggers for each. I love being able to see how other writers work. Love getting inside your mind! Do you think you worked those emotional triggers in naturally? Or did you plan a lot of that ahead of time?
LOL, MISSY -- "Love getting inside (my) mind? That's taking your life in your hands, my friend! ;)
DeleteYou asked: Do you think you worked those emotional triggers in naturally? Or did you plan a lot of that ahead of time?"
Mmm ... that's a good question. I think it's a lot of both, creating something I've written a blog about once, and that's a concept I call "Movie Mind." Like some authors, I see things like a movie in my mind, so I'm obviously thinking about it ahead of time rather than outright "planning," but it's also a natural progression, I think.
More than you ever wanted to know, yes? ;)
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Julie
Julie, joining in very late tonight but this was an interesting post and very helpful on showing the emotional triggers. Please put me in the drawing for Cowboy Christmas Homecoming.
ReplyDeleteThanks for coming by, SANDY, and you're in the draw, my friend, so GOOD LUCK!!
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Julie
Cowboy Christmas homecoming sounds like a emotional interesting story, I like it so far. Thanks for posting it.
ReplyDeleteHey, DONAMAE, thank you! And here's hoping we can get a copy in your hot, little hands, so GOOD LUCK!!
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Julie
I also like the lessons and humor.
ReplyDeleteLOL ... thanks, DONAMAE ... I appreciate that! :)
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Julie
Loved reading those clips again, Julie - thank you!!
ReplyDeleteI know I don't need to tell you how much I prefer the "tea you brew" with your heart-piercing, emotional spirituality, or how deeply each of your books has inspired and impacted me.
I love "seeing" the faith of the authors I read in their writing and feeling the spiritual emotion it invokes - God uses Christian Fiction to help keep me nearer Him, just as He does with the Bible, and uses the characters life situations to open my eyes to the needs of others and better enable me to reach out to them. For me, these are the most important reasons for reading Christian Fiction - as opposed to purely for entertainment/education. I so appreciate those authors who do this with their work!!
Ruthy's books have touched and inspired me deeply also - 'Refuge of the Heart', mentioned here, was one of those that especially did.
LOL, BONNIE, how well I know we brew and drink the same tea -- I just wish we could do it in the same room!!
DeleteThank you, my sweet friend, for your amazing support and friendship -- I am blessed to know you!
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Julie
I have read books with subtle spiritual influence and more emotional experiences. I think both are great, as long as they are written effectively. I think it just depends on the character, their relationship with God and their circumstances as to how to their Spiritual experiences should be displayed. Thank you for the great blog and the giveaway opportunity! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks, HOLLY, for coming by and sharing your opinion -- MUCH appreciated!
DeleteAnd you are in the draw, my friend, so GOOD LUCK!
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Julie
Oh my.
ReplyDeleteEXAMPLES. I adore examples. They truly help me and these are certainly fave scenes. Just excellent.
Thank you so much for sharing, Julie!
A very Merrrrry Christmas to you, and all Seekerville!
KC!!! Thanks SO much, you sweet thing, and I wish you and May and yours a very happy, healthy, and holy holiday season!
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Julie
Julie, thank you for this post. As I thought about your question I realized that this could describe my conversion. I remember how attending Sunday School, listening to the minister's sermon, taking part in Youth Group all helped me lay my foundation but it was after a special message and a stirring invitation hymn that my heart felt like it weighed a ton and I knew I had to walk down that aisle. My heart had been pierced and I had to seek healing. As a reader, I can appreciate a gentle nudge or an outright tug. Thank you for penning stories that do both.
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Connie
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CONNIE, thank you SO much for coming by and for your beautiful comment -- I appreciate it very much!
DeleteI wish you and yours a happy, healthy, and holy holiday season!
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Julie