Writing a Romance Series
Book series are really popular in most genres. Mystery stories, thrillers and even romance novels are often written in serial form. If we love our series characters, they’re fun to write and they sell well, too. That’s enough to give it a try!
The same is true for readers. Memorable primary characters stick in the readers’ minds and they want to read more about them beyond just the first book. Of course, not all romances lend themselves to a series but many do.
In a series, especially in mysteries, the main character is featured in each novel. However, every book can stand alone. Very often, the plot and the romance (if there is one) develop from book to book so it’s clearer if you start reading from the beginning of the series. The author tries to weave in some backstory so the reader understands what’s happened before. This can be a little awkward and might seem like an information dump if we’re not careful.
In a series that may encompass several years, we can see the characters change as they get on with their lives. This draws us in, hooks us and leaves us wanting more stories. One just isn’t enough.
Some readers want to go back and read the first books in the series and that’s great but others would rather read the newer stories. They shouldn’t have to read every book in the series to catch up.
The author must make each book really stand alone so the reader enjoys the story without feeling she needs to read all the previous books in the series in order to make sense of the present story.
This can be tricky and challenging for the writer.
Romantic mysteries
In the romance thread of a mystery, the main characters get to know each other better as they grow closer emotionally and romantically. They often work together or sometimes against each other. The amateur sleuth tends to annoy the professional police detective, although they eventually come to appreciate one another’s abilities and common goals.
Sometimes their romance progresses slowly through book after book which can frustrate the reader. We’re anxious for the hero and heroine to marry and live happily ever after!
In some serials the hero and heroine actually do marry (Molly Murphy and Daniel Sullivan in Rhys Bowen’s series called A Molly Murphy Mystery) and the series continues. However, the conflicts between them don’t stop at the altar.
A little history
Serials became popular during the Victorian era with writers such as Dickens and Dumas. They were published in newspapers and magazines as installments.
Sometimes the writers had finished the stories before they were published but often the author wrote one installment at a time just ahead of publication. These stories were structured like our modern day TV episodes. Each installment or episode has a completed story although the characters and story world are connected. A larger story arc carries through the book, similar to a TV season.
Downton Abbey is a good example. It has romance plots, conflict among the classes, war, conflict among the family and among the servants etc. But the overarching arc is the changing world of the early twentieth century and how people coped with it.
Advantages to writing serials
Every episode can veer off in a new direction. You can write the same events from different viewpoints and you can change character arcs.
As an author you know your world already and you don’t have to change it in every book. The same goes for the leading characters. If you want to alter their character arc you can but you don’t have to. You can develop them slowly or quickly. It’s up to you. You can keep them fresh and interesting by changing their circumstances, physically or emotionally. Or both. There’s a lot of flexibility for the author.
Disadvantages to writing serials
The pressure to write an amazing opening is enormous. You have to create unforgettable characters and a fascinating setting right from the start. It needs to be so memorable the reader automatically picks up the next book in the series.
You must write tight and make sure the hook comes early in the story.
Deadlines come rapidly so you need to write fast.
You resolve the current problem in a series but you leave something unresolved so the reader will look forward to the next story. Obviously, you can’t make her wait too long or she’ll move onto to another series.
When you’re developing a series, plan ahead.
Don’t write by the seat of your pants. Be organized and write down everything you’ll need to remember — the story arc, the character arcs, story world details etc. Create good biographies because you’ll need to refer to them again and again.
Know where your series begins, how it progresses and how you’ll tie up loose ends when it finally concludes. A series may go on and on for several books or you or your readers or your editor may decide it’s time to move to something else.
In a romance series the love story between the hero and heroine normally concludes in a happily ever after ending but it can continue to a new book. A word of caution — keep the release of the novels close together.
Sometimes authors write two books before they publish the first one. Then they’re scrambling to write the second one while readers wait impatiently. It’s a very good idea if you’re a slow writer like me.
If the romance is concluded in book one, then bring forward secondary characters from the first story and make them the new hero and heroine. Readers love to see what’s going to happen to the characters they met at the beginning of the series.
Maybe the best friends of the hero and heroine get together in book two and the former hero and heroine become the new secondary characters and sounding boards. At least give the important characters cameo appearances in subsequent books.
Or maybe each son or daughter in a story about a particular family finds a love interest. Make them active, interesting people and readers will think they all deserve books of their own.
To make a series cohesive, know your theme.
The same theme throughout each story will help you develop your plots and tie each book together. From the first book onward, you make a promise to your readers. In a romance, it’s a central love story that ends with happily ever after.
Even if a romance continues into the second book, the first story should broadly hint that in the end the hero and heroine will come together and marry.
Stick to the genre you begin with. Don’t stray from romance to thriller to fantasy or you’ll confuse and disappoint your readers.
Romance novels have emotionally satisfying endings which reinforces the idea that good people are rewarded and bad people are punished.
Popular romance themes (in addition to the love theme) include adventure, forbidden love, betrayal, faith, forgiveness, family, temptation, good and evil, pursuit and rescue.
Along with the romance, start with one overarching main theme and allow less important subthemes to develop in each book. If you start to go astray, return to your main theme and it’ll help you to get back on track.
What are your favorite romance series and authors? We’re always ready for new books.
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Hi Cara! I LOVE series books :-) Among my top favorite are the Love Inspired line. There's a lot of series ones in the mix. Right now, I'm reading the fifth installment of Jessica Keller's Goose Harbor series. I've loved getting to see minor characters from one story get their own book in the next story, or seeing glimpses of characters I've meet from previous stories. It's like visiting old friends!
ReplyDeleteI can name two of our own Seeker ladies whose series I love too; Ruth Logan Herne (Double S Ranch)& Mary Connealy (Cimarron Legacy,Kincade Brides, and Wild at Heart to name a few). Many more authors here I'm sure, but these two came to mind first.
Colleen Coble, Dee Henderson, Terri Blackstock, Lynette Eason, Dani Pettrey, Julie Klassen, Roseanna White,Denise Hunter,Becky Wade, etc, etc!! My comment would expand to book size if I were to go on, lol! There's many wonderful authors who write series books :-)
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DeleteTrixi, thanks for the shout out... I love those series, too, and anything Mary writes is on "Auto Buy" at my house!
DeleteHi Cara:
ReplyDeleteI just loved this advice,
"You have to create unforgettable characters and a fascinating setting right from the start. It needs to be so memorable the reader automatically picks up the next book in the series.
"You must write tight and make sure the hook comes early in the story."
As I read this I could just hear James Patterson, in a writing course I'm taking, saying that,
You need to do this for every book you write! Don't set out to write an average book. You need a blockbuster idea that can carry foreword for many books in a series. If it takes you an extra month to come up with such an idea, it's still well worth it.
Patterson says he writes every book, even books he thinks will be single title, as if it will become part of a long series; yet, he holds nothing back so as to make the current book the best it can be. If the theme or concept is powerful enough and you've created characters that readers have formed a strong emotional attachment to, then you will be able to come up with a great many new and exciting ideas for the sequels. Not only that, publishers will demand you write a series when you had no intention of doing so.
This is a lot better than writing a trilogy and having the publisher not buy books two and three because sales of book one were disappointing.
"Live each day like it was your last and write each book as if your life depended on it becoming a #1 best seller!"
That's my Positive Mental Attitude exercise for today. I totally agree with you, only more so. : ) My wife says, "Yes" to the Starbucks drawing. (Winning is an easy way to become a hero.:))
Vince
Thanks for sharing, Vince! Good for you taking Patterson's class. Sounds as if you're picking up lots of tips. I need to look into his classes...
DeleteThis is excellent advice, Vince! Thank you for sharing. How disappointing it would be to write a book meant to start a series and not have the rest of it contracted. What a let down! But if the book can stand alone, it will still be satisfying. This happens with TV shows all the time--Season 1 ends on a cliffhanger with nothing resolved, and the show gets cancelled. It's so frustrating!
DeleteBut I've seen the reverse done horribly too. A standalone story does so well that it turns into a series, but because the author never thought through where the series would go, the third or fourth installment feels aimless and forced. And the rest goes downhill.
I'm going to post that last quote over my workspace...good motivation!
And good luck on being a Starbucks hero for your wife :)
Hi Debby:
DeleteI have Tina to thank for the Patterson course. She told me about it and about the special discount on the tuition which I got before the cutoff deadline. If it is about the writing craft, Tina knows about it. BTW: the Patterson course is really about how to write to sell the most books. It's what I call putting the marketing into the book before you write the first words. As experience advertsing copywriters our views on writing are just about the same -- except Patterson is far more radical than I am (but I'm going to fix that). Patterson is not only a plotter, he spends three to four months on the outline before he starts writing. He tweaks that outline to the point that if anyone reads the outline, they beg him to quickly write the book. He says when you have an outline like that, you can't wait to write the book. There is never a question of a sagging anything. Still he says that less than half his books end the way they did in the outline. If his characters grow and he thinks of a better way to move the story along, he does it. Don't save anything for the next book if it would make your current book better. Patterson mentions some famous authors who have one great book followed by an average book which gets them motivated to defend their reputation by writing another great book which is followed by another out of breathe average book. He also believes, like a good ad guy, that your current book needs to end with a bang that will sell all your other books! Yes, yes, yes. (I love Patterson but I don't know if I'm up to creating an 80 page outline!)
Hi Megan:
DeleteRight on!
You wrote:
"But I've seen the reverse done horribly too. A standalone story does so well that it turns into a series, but because the author never thought through where the series would go, the third or fourth installment feels aimless and forced. And the rest goes downhill."
This reminds me of something that Patterson said that might be anti-intuitive. He said you had to have a theme or idea big enough to cover the scope of your story. He said there are many books that should not be written. Yes, you can write them. Yes, they may be published but they don't have legs. They can't go far on their own. They are not as likely to sell your other books. Patterson will really work on story ideas to get one that is striking, that has legs, that is simple and when you explain it in one sentence, others get the idea right away and want to know more. So Patterson will not write a perfectly good book which will sell somewhat well because his 'highest and best use' is to write the really big best seller. I guess that's why he sells more fiction than anyone else. That was his goal all along and with his advertising skills, he knew how to do that. Nice work if you can get it. :)
I'm a sucker for any series. Be it Terri Blackstock's newest series that continues the same suspense from book to book or stand alone series' like Janet Evanovich's Stephanie Plum series.
ReplyDeleteGreat post, Cara.
I love books in a series. I love any of the Love Inspired Suspense series, whether written by one author or a series of authors. Some of my favorite authors that write in series are Ruth Logan Herne, Dani Pettrey, Colleen Coble and Sara Sundin. I like to read their books as they come out, however, my sister waits until she has the entire series and then she starts reading them.
ReplyDeleteI am currently reading totally out of the Christian genre. It was suggested to me to read Karen White's Tradd Street series which is a paranormal with ghosts. I am on book two and plan to read the other three in the series, however, I miss reading in the Christian genre.
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Cindy W.
Aw, thank you, Cindy!!!! And I have a lot of readers like your sister, who wait until the last book is out... and then start reading. I've got kids here who do that, too, save the books....
DeleteFrom the comments so far, everyone seems to love a good series! Editors do, too, and I believe most authors do. I've heard mystery writers sometimes get tired of writing a the same characters and setting but their series are often much longer than romance series. What a great problem to have!
ReplyDeleteTrixi, it's wonderful you have so many favorite writers. I'm always googling to see when the next book in a series I like is coming out.
ReplyDeleteVince, lol! I'm sure you're a hero already!
ReplyDeletePatterson has some great advice — writing every book as if it'll become part of a series. Write all out. Your life may not depend upon it but your career very well might.
Hi Cara:
DeleteThat's a much, much, better quote. I love it.
"Live each day like it is your last and write your next book as if your career depended on it becoming a bestseller."
Patterson lives that. He says don't hold anything back for the next book. There may not be a next book. Besides, Patterson thinks the last chapter drives the word of mouth advertising that does the most to sell your next book.
Patterson also will rewrite a perfectly good chapter 8 to 9 times just to make it work better. Just to make the book tighter and a faster read. This is not for style. It's to make the pages turn themselves.
There is a reason Patterson is said to sell more fiction than any other writer! Of course, he had 15 years as an ad man on Madison Ave. Good ad guys know how to sell things.
Vince
I love Patterson's pacing...short chapters that beg me to keep turning the page!
DeleteHi Debby:
DeleteIn his course, Patterson says that each scene should be its own chapter and each chapter must move the story along.
You don't stop to smell the roses. If you need to know what the roses smell like, then Patterson will let you know. Otherwise just turn the page before the page turns itself.
Good morning, Tina. I love mystery and suspense books, too. My favorites are historical. Not surprising since that's what I prefer to write. But I enjoy reading contemporaries too.
ReplyDeleteCindy, I don't have the patience your sister has! I have a hard time waiting for the next book. I imagine the Victorians had the same problem when magazine and newspaper stories came out in installments.
ReplyDeleteI think continuities with several authors must be hard to write.
Hi Cara! Although I can't commit to TV series, I love to read books in a series. Susan May Warren has some great ones, as does Debbie Macomber...gosh, there's just so many. Thanks for visiting today. Please toss my name into the hat.
ReplyDeleteHi Cara, I just finished a series by Denise Hunter. She wrapped all the threads up nicely and I like the way her characters interact throughout the story.
ReplyDeleteSo are you saying we should have the same theme in every story in our series?
I'd love to be included in the drawing. Thanks for sharing today!
I love series.... I love writing them, and I love reading them (if they don't go on toooooo long....)
ReplyDeleteI think it's because I hate to let go of great characters. I like to glimpse couple #1 in #2's story and beyond... And I like to see setting progression, how a town comes back to life, or how a well-set town (think Cedar Cove or Grace Haven) wraps its arms around the people and offers support...
I love it, thank you Cara for a great step-by-step look at developing a series.
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ReplyDeleteCARA, this is helpful and lays good groundwork for those of us who are series-prone.
ReplyDeleteI love reading them and writing them. Both of the books I'm shopping around now have sequels. I couldn't help asking myself, "What would happen to Pace and Jenny, or Julia and Henry, after the first book was done?" These characters almost demanded that I do something with them, so I happily wrote sequels. I agree, CARA, you've got to have something ready and I didn't want to be caught short, so I've got drafts of both sequels.
I don't think it will always be this easy, and sometimes in the future I will probably write a stand-alone. I wouldn't force a sequel if a sequel was not to be had.
Snow day, I will be checking in again. I plan to work on my WIP, do some editing on my last WIP, and try to catch up on reviewing.
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I can get SO MUCH DONE TODAY unless we lose the power.
ReplyDeleteKB
Hi Cara, Great advice about writing a series. I'm not terribly fond of series because I just hate it when I pick up a book and find out it is a middle book and I haven't read the books before it and feel compelled to read the books after Annoys me. But that is just me.
ReplyDeleteI have read series and love the kind where secondary characters are featured in the future books. I think Julie Lessman does this amazingly well. I love all of her series. Glynna Kaye writes great books set in a location. Those books are great because they are all stand alone books and reading a middle one doesn't depend upon reading the first. You get glimpses of former characters and that can be fun.
Are you writing a series now?
Sandra, I like stand alone books that are in a series. But I don't want to go back to the beginning to understand what's going on several books later. Some novels are loosely tied together but others depend on the previous ones to make any sense of the characters and plot.
ReplyDeleteKB, I hope you don't lose power. Where do you live?
ReplyDeleteHi, Jill! Some TV series are episodic and you don't need to know what came before. The characters are relatively static so there personal growth isn't particularly important. Others don't make any sense if you didn't start watching at the beginning.
ReplyDeleteRuthy, how a town grows or declines can really create good conflict among the characters and show how they change or don't change. I think setting is very important and fun to write about.
ReplyDeleteI agree, wholeheartedly. The right setting adds to the joy or comfort or conflict of the story. And it can be all three!
DeleteHi, Cathy!
ReplyDeleteJackie, carrying a theme over from one book to the next ties the books together. Subthemes can be different. For example, one story can deal with betrayal and another revenge. But forgiveness can be the overarching theme — how characters deal with the situation. Does one forgive and the other one continue to hate?
I agree with RUTHY. As long as they don't go on too long...and it gets ridiculous...and you can't keep track of the characters because there are so many. Which is okay unless the author feels the need to lob the name of every person who has ever appeared in a story arc into every book whether they have an active role in the current story or not. A couple of writers who I otherwise love (not Seekers) do this and it drives me crazy. If a character doesn't have a role in a particular story, let them visit their aunt in Omaha or some such. That is my rant of the day.
ReplyDeleteKB
CARA, I live in New Hampshire and the snow began last night and is still coming down.
ReplyDeleteI got up early, took my coffee and Bible into the living room, and switched on the Christmas village. Had my devotions in the light of the village as the snow fell outside. Beautiful. The fact that I still have the Christmas Village up, not so much.
KB
KB, I could envision you praying in that lovely setting. Actually it warmed my heart!
DeleteYour Christmas Village is probably so pretty that my vote is to keep it out all year! :)
Thanks, DEBBY, it is. It's half of my late father's collection. He gave the other half to my sister. It looks more wintery than Christmas-y, so I think I'll keep it up a while longer.
DeleteHow special that it belonged to your father. Such lovely memories!
DeleteCARA AND RUTHY, how a town grows and declines, yes. Lauraine Snelling does this with her town of Blessing in the Red River series. The town began with two families in a dugout and we watch it grow through the series and the life of Ingeborg. They deal with change, especially when families move into town that are not the original Norwegians. But the town spreads its arms to welcome them. A parable for today.
ReplyDeleteKB
Love that image! And the dugout.... God bless the strength of pioneers. Most of us pale by comparison. #whiners ;)
DeleteYeah, I know. And what it mostly was was two WOMEN, Ingeborg and Kaaren, who kept the homestead after their husbands died. An amazing story, one of Snelling's best.
DeleteWHAT KAYBEE DOESN'T LIKE...is when the head librarian at her local library orders a middle-or later volume in a series after she's never bought the first. Kaybee has to play catch-up, which is difficult or easy depending on how well the author refers to What Went Before.
ReplyDeleteKathy
Or when the first book in the series goes missing at the library and they don't replace it!@ ARRRGH!
DeleteHi Kaybee:
DeleteMe and my wife have that problem all the time with many authors. The problem is the early books, which are almost always the best ones, came out years ago as paperbacks only. The author may also not have been established back then. Hardbound books are often not available at all for those first back copies. Also, when early books are hard to get, the library system may only have one for the whole system, they also get stolen more often.
Another problem is some authors, [ike James Patterson, have had some of the early books as eBooks pulled from the library.
Sometimes, when a series takes off after years of slow sales, the publisher will publish a first three book hardbound collection, like Jance did, or even a six book eBook package like the first six Jack Reacher books.
Sometimes a series will be marginal until a very late book clicks and it is made into a popular movie and then there is an instant demand for all the author's backlist and the library does not have them. But the library will buy the new books when they come out.
If a long running low powered series gets hot and starts selling well, that's better than an IRA! That's another reason for writing a series. If one of the books hits it big, it can sell the backlist as well.
Vince
I love series.
ReplyDeleteThe one that sticks out to me is one done by Debbie Macomber set in Promise, Texas. 6 romances in the same town, but there was also a ghost town nearby where the cemetery was filled w/nothing but children. Each book we learn a little more about what happened in the ghost town.
It's been years since I read her...
Thanks for getting me to thinking Cara.
I have read several great series too many to list all my favorites, but Janice Thompson just finished a series that I am sorry to see end. I loved her Bella series. I won a copy of one of the middle books in a giveaway. I read that one and was so hooked that I continued to read each new book as it came out plus went back and began reading the earlier ones I just have 1 1/2 books left from the earlier ones In all this series was over 15 books. I have them all some in print and some as e books. I'd like to go back and re-read them all in order. She did a great job though in making them all stand alone books.
ReplyDeletePraying for all of you that are in the path of the winter storm heading up the east coast and praying that all of you who live in Georgia are all right from the storms on Sunday.
Since I have Mineare's these kind of storms greatly effect me. I went to church Sunday planning to teach the children, but alas when I kept staggering around the church and fell backwards in the pew during the opening hymn, I was praying very hard the Lord would give me the strength to teach the precious preschoolers who I knew would only make the vertigo worse with their continuous movement. As I tried to exit the auditorium I was surrounded by men who wanted to make sure I could walk without falling and then a very dear but bossy nurse was at my side informing me I would not be teaching and another lady had already gone out to get her car to take me home. In the mean time the kids had been dismissed for class and I was given lots of hugs. I am still suffering some effects today but it is getting better. I slept most of the rest of Sunday and most of the day on Monday. Life is certainly an adventure.
Thank you, Cara! The three takeaways from this blog are: know your theme, plan ahead, and for me, if I embrace the serial, write the second book before publishing the first book. Last week we were able to spend a week in sunny Florida where the living is good and there is limited connectivity in the area! I was pleased to see that I had won a prizThank you again, Seekers.
ReplyDeleteYou know this is GREAT advice especially if you're considering indie publishing because you want productivity.... A book every couple of months... and that builds your hungry and hungering audience! So if you get two or three done AHEAD OF TIME, then you can launch them a month apart and be writing the next one while you write #4.... That rhythm is a wonderful thing to develop.
DeleteRUTHY, this is what I am trying to do with my two series. I want to have something at the ready when either of the first books sells. "Be Ready," as our friend Mary always says.
DeleteNow to answer your question: Terri Blackstock is one of my go to escapes. The characters flow seamlessly from book to book while she adds another or two to keep our interest piqued and continue developing the serial. Please put my name in the catdish for the Starbucks card. It is damp and cold in Tennessee and it would be a great treat for my writing buddies when we meet.
ReplyDeleteOLIVIA, I love Terri Blackstock and to me her crowning glory wasn't the suspense stories, although those are top of the line, but her Restoration series, with the worldwide power outage. Still continues to grip me. She is seamless.
ReplyDeleteDownton Abbey? Be still my heart. How I miss that series! Will another ever compare?
ReplyDeleteWhat a great post! I love series for the same reason we love to read our favorite books over and over--I fall in love with the characters and the story world and want to spend time with them again and again.
ReplyDeleteI don't know if it would be considered a proper "series" but I love Tina's stories set in Paradise, CO. They're all tied together and I get to visit the setting and some of the characters over and over.
I also have LOVED Jan Drexler's Journey to Pleasant Prairie trilogy and can't wait for the third book later this year!
Good morning Cara and friends! The sun is shining right now in my neighborhood -- am thanking the Lord! after some bleak weather it's always nice to see sunlight). :)
ReplyDeleteThank you for this post today. I enjoy series as long as I can start reading with the first book so I'm familiar with the setting, characters, etc. As others have mentioned, Debbie Macomber comes to mind with writing great series books. Also Tamera Alexander has written some amazing historicals with her Bell Meade Plantation and Belmont Farm series.
Thanks again for sharing with us and have a terrific Tuesday!
Hugs, Patti Jo :)
Great explanations about series books, Cara--thanks! Oh, yes, I still miss Downton Abbey.
ReplyDeleteAnd just like series books that are spaced out too far, my biggest gripe against Masterpiece programming is that they offer only a few episodes each season and then make you wait months and months to find out what happens next!
Yes, but absence makes the heart grow fonder. Besides those episodes cost a fortune each to make. You might try to find "Miss Fisher's Murder Mysteries" which is Australia's Downton Abbey. That is, in the cost and great historical detail that went into the show. Had to cost a fortune to make each show.
DeleteSeries can be tricky, so I appreciate this advice! I like to read series...sometimes. It depends on how they are done. Sometimes the cliff hangers at the end leave me feeling cheated.
ReplyDeleteI'd love to be entered in the giveaway!
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Cara, what a great post! I want to write a series, and the information you've shared is oh, so helpful! As I read your post, I kept thinking of the tv series, "Castle." In the first season (the only season I've watched so far), they did such a great job of building romantic tension between Castle and the homicide detective. I loved it. :)
ReplyDeleteOne of my favorite book series is Susan May Warren's The Christiansen Family. She does a great job weaving in the family members and giving each child in the family their own stories.
Myra, I totally agree that Downton Abbey should have many more episodes each season. The creator and screenwriter, Julian Fellowes, wrote all the scripts by himself! Maybe he should've had a few more writers.
ReplyDeleteDebbie, I read that Downton Abbey will probably have a movie sequel but not on TV. I hope so.
Jeanne, serials can be used in so many genres including women's fiction. If you love the characters, you don't to say good by to them.
ReplyDeleteAmber, I don't like cliff hangers at the end of a book. It feels incomplete and I feel cheated. I like it when the main conflict between the hero and heroine is resolved and a problem concerning secondary characters continues into the next book. They can be the new hero and heroine.
ReplyDeletePatti Jo, I really like Debbie Macomber's series, especially Cedar Cove. (I think that's the name.)
ReplyDeleteThanks for all the info, Cara! I've read entire series (and eagerly waited for the next book). I've also read one book in a series and decided not to read any of the others. Thanks to your post, I figured out why some series work for me and some don't. For me it's as much about the setting evolving as the characters evolving. I want to sense that the times are changing, too.
ReplyDeleteWhen it comes to mystery/suspense series, I definitely want to see development in the characters ... some sense that they've learned from their previous experiences in the series.
Thanks again for an interesting post!
Nancy C
Yes, Kaybee, it is the Restoration series. I waited longingly for each book to be delivered (yes, we had a library system that delivered the holds by mail) and then read it a second time. Cara, I agree, the serialized story has become popular again because of incessant series watching by the general public.
ReplyDeleteKB, I lived in Vermont for 20 years and I miss the snow. Not in April, but in January.
ReplyDeleteConnie, I like the idea of a ghost town. It sounds as if it's another character, not just a setting.
ReplyDeleteIt was really fun. I found myself getting the next book, not for the romance, but I wanted to find out what had caused the death of the town's children. Little hints sprinkled in each book.
DeleteUff dah, I love series. Laurraine Snelling (even her series are part of a series), Karen Kingsbury, Tina Radcliffe. I font mind if it's the sharacters or the setting that's carried through, but I want to see the characters from the earlier books as well. Series are keepers, and I often go back and reread them
ReplyDeleteWilani, I'm sorry to hear how the storms effected you. How nice you have such a caring church fellowship.
ReplyDeleteIt's kind of sad when a great series ends.
Olivia and Ruthy, productivity is key to a series and to success, these days.
ReplyDeleteMegan, sounds like you're another series reader. I used to read mainly stand alone books but as series grew more and more popular I switched over.
ReplyDeleteOLIVIA, what killed me about "Restoration" is when Beth died, on top of everything else these people went through, and they still ended up praising God.
ReplyDeleteMy husband wants the computer. I will be back later.
ReplyDeleteNancy, I think some of the popular mystery writers from the first half of the twentieth century wrote great stories but their characters didn't change much. I'm thinking of Agatha Christie in particular. They're great mysteries but I don't remember Miss Marple or Hercule Poirot growing and changing.
ReplyDeleteMarianne, it's important that the characters in a series return in subsequent books. It feels more realistic if they do.
ReplyDeleteCara this reminds me of a book I read...title escapes me...but the heroine wrote these serial type books for a magazine or newspaper in Regency England. And she KNEW she had to end each chapter with a Startling Incident. It was just funny because they used the word Startling Incident all through the book. Her and her aunt or mother or whoever it was, was always saying, "Well that is a Startling Incident."
ReplyDeleteThis is about her life not the stories she wrote.
He really said that?
Yes he did.
That is so Startling.
That word is about all I remember from the book but it was funny the way the author tossed it in at just the right moment.
But it ALSO reminded me that in a regular book, you should try and end Chapters with a HOOK or, dare I say, a Startling Incident. To keep readers turning the page.
Oh, CARA, you're talking my language with series, girlfriend -- I absolutely LOVE them -- both to read AND write! So much, in fact, that I hesitate reading stand-alones, although I do read them.
ReplyDeleteOne of the best series I have ever read that captured me with the characters and continuity of the plot was Liz Curtis Higg's Scottish Lowlands series beginning with Thorn in my Heart. The series is a 1700s Scottish version of the love triangle between Jacob, Rebecca, and Leah, and WHOA, BABY, is that a great trilogy!! One of the best I have read.
Hugs,
Julie
Aw, Sandra -- thanks for the shout-out, you sweet thing!!
ReplyDeleteHugs,
Julie
Great post, Cara! I like the idea of the same theme throughout a series.
ReplyDeleteMy daughter and I are enjoying the Nancy Clancy series written by Jane O'Connor and illustrated by Robin Preiss Glasser. We were fans of the Fancy Nancy picture books, so it's nice to have bigger books for my daughter as she and Nancy get older. :)
As for me, Irene Hannon's Vows series is still a favorite. Those characters came to life for me. I rooted for Laura, Sam and Rebecca like they were friends.
Mary, a startling incident should happen at the beginning of the book so the reader will be startled and keep reading and at the end of each chapter or maybe at the end of each scene, if possible. Startling, isn't it?
ReplyDeleteJulie, in a great series the characters are so memorable we never want them to leave. It's like having your BFF move away and you know you'll probably never see them again. It's kind of sad when a great series ends.
ReplyDeleteIt's so great when the characters come to life and continue on in a series that you hope will go on and on.
ReplyDeleteCARA, thanks for the excellent tips for writing series. I don't care if the stories are stand alone or a long series, just as long as the plot and characters are wonderful.
ReplyDeleteThough my first two books were a series, every thing else I've written is stand alone. Though I have revisited a town so I can still play with the wacky secondary characters I've come to love.
Janet
JULIE, I want to read the Liz Curtis Higgs series you recommended! And it goes without saying that I've enjoyed all the Seeker series books!
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well, first thing that comes to mind is I've loved all the Seeker's series (Mary's, Ruthy's, Audra's, Tina's...) I also happen to like the Charlotte & Pitt mysteries by Anne Perry - not really a romance series, but I do enjoy the progression of the couple through courtship, marriage, kids, his promotions, etc...
ReplyDeleteI would definitely need to complete two or three books ahead of time because I'm too slow a writer right now. You have excellent tips for writing a series.
I tend to be a person who will go back and get previous books if I happen upon a good book that may not be book one in a series. It is nice, though, when the books truly stand alone.
Great stuff!!! I'm always in need of good caffeine...
My favorite series are:
ReplyDeletePercy Jackson by Rick Riordan
The Godmother series by Janette Rallison
Gallagher Girls by Ally Carter
They're not particularly romances (except I guess the Godmother series which is more a romance than the others), but they do have a thread of romance in them, and I like seeing how the characters develop and progress in their relationships.
I adore series! And I'm a reader who likes to start with book one so if you hook me you've sold your backlist as well.
ReplyDeleteI'm also trying to write a romantic suspense series. Fingers crossed.
I'd love to win the Starbucks gift card! Thanks
Janet, I have to agree that for slower writers stand alone novels are probably best unless you write a few books first. I try to write faster but I can't seem to do it. Too many distractions — or that maybe an excuse. But I'm sticking with it.
ReplyDeleteTerri, I've heard it's more difficult to write a romantic suspense series than a romantic mystery series. What do other people think?
ReplyDeleteHi Cara:
DeleteI would agree it should be many times harder to write a romantic suspense than a romantic mystery. In a suspense the question is always 'will the hero/heroine survive the next moment?' There is always the risk of death and thus the suspense need never let up. This type of tension is hard to hold for very long so these stories are usually over within a few days. This makes it very hard to develop a romance that ends in an HEA which has any real credibility. Very often in these books the hero and heroine have history so they know each other before hand.
In a romantic mystery the pace can be much slower. The hero/heroine need never be in risk of death. If the hero/heroine have been working together for months trying to catch a serial killer when the story opens, a HEA in the weeks ahead may seem more inevitable than incredible. The question here is just 'who done it?'
In my reading I have found it can be so hard to write great romantic suspense stories, in which the romance is not short-changed, that it seems these authors really want to write straight suspense and move out of romance altogether. M.C. Beaton and Janet Evanovich are two really good examples of this full change of genres.
The writer I admire the most is Debby Giusti because she writes romantic inspirational suspense/mystery and she does justice to all four themes. Amazing.
Hi, Nicky, I like the title of the Godmother series! It sounds intriguing. Is it anything like the Godfather?
ReplyDeleteI don't think so. I mean I've never watched the Godfather, but unless it is the story of hapless teenage girls being sent back into the Medieval Ages by their absent minded Fairy Godmother then I think its safe to say that they are nothing alike. The Godmother series is a YA Romantic comedy with a fantasy undertone.
DeleteDeb H, I enjoy the Anne Perry series about Charlotte Pitt and her police inspector husband. The first book was made into a movie years ago. I was disappointed the rest of the stories didn't become a TV series.
ReplyDeleteThis was a needed post for me. I'm almost at the point of submitting my novel for the Kindle Scout program. It will happen within a month. However, I got stopped in the process as I acknowledged that my book is part of a series and I'd yet to coin a name. Appreciating any series discussion at the moment.
ReplyDeleteI love what Elizabeth Maddrey does with her books that are written in the Washington DC area. While the different series are not connected. She uses the same places in the book with characters mentioned in other books so you feel like it is a real place and not fiction. I love being able to see some of the same people from another series.
ReplyDeleteCara this was a fabulous post. Thank you! I am a huge fan of series both long and short. I've devoured every one of Sue Grafton's Alphabet Mysteries, Denise Swanson had me for many many of her Scumblebug Mysteries (though I have to admit that I kind of fell off the wagon after her character got married), Terri Blackstock's Cape Refuge series was a big favorite, and frankly there are many many more. I love both series and stand alone novels.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the great advice. I especially appreciate the advice to plan ahead and keeping a good bio on your characters.
Oh I would also appreciate being put in the draw for the Starbuck's gift card. Please. kellyblackwellwrites(at)gmail(dot)com
DeleteHi Cara:
ReplyDeleteDoes a series have to be a series? That is, does it have to have the same characters? Can it just have the same voice, feel, and conflicts?
For example: I consider Louis L'Amour's short westerns to be a series (except for the Sackett books which actually are a series) because I got exactly what I was expecting with each book -- just as much as if they were part of a series.
I also consider most of Betty Neels books to be a series because they are pretty much the same book written again and again with different named characters, in different locations, and slightly different medical specialties. Like L'Amour, each new book delivered exactly what I expected.
Maybe L'Amour and Neels might best be described as 'variations on theme'. Maybe the key to series is giving the reader exactly what they expect and want -- only different.
Cara, I admit it. I love series. I was hooked on series as a kid when I loved reading Trixie Belden. Each book could stand alone but I read the whole set over and over. I'm a huge fan of both mystery and romance series. I loved how Carolyn Hart married Annie Darling and Max Laurence early on to show a married couple could still have fun while solving mysteries. And I love many romance series as well. Jude Deveraux's Montgomery and Taggerts were a favorite a while back. I've enjoyed getting to know the O'Connors of Boston, the people who frequent Patti Jo's in Paradise and the people who buy tres leches cakes in Kirkwood Lake. So yes, I will devour a series where I love the characters.
ReplyDeleteDid you say romance series?! O, I have a few to share! Lol. I love Julie Lessman's O'Connors in Daughters of Boston and beyond. There's also Pepper Basham's A Piece of Time series, and Dawn Crandall's The Everstone Chronicles. O, all historical. Contemporary, I love Ruthy's Double S Ranch series, Becky Wade's Porter Family series and Shelley Shepard Gray's Amish series....ok, that's all for now, but there are a lot more!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the great post. I'd love a Starbucks guft card. I go there way too much but I love it! 😉
I am only a reader but I always learn so much from these posts. I live series but I also appreciate if I can pick up a newer book in a series and not be completely lost. More times than not I will try to go back to the very first book but at least I don't feel so pressured to read the beginning!
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Series are my favorite. This is such great information about the "series". Thanks so much.
ReplyDeleteAnd, coffee is my favorite! Please enter me in the draw.
Jan