Sandra here to talk about using natural phenomena in our
novels. Nothing like an unusual or significant event to trigger some tension in
the plot. Right?
Well we had a big event yesterday that brought the idea on
for this topic. We are in Oregon now near Madras that is a small town where the
full solar eclipse could be seen for the first time in the United States since
its birth. I need to talk about this event because it may impact my presence
today in the comment section.
We have been advised that thousands of people from all over
the world are flocking to our area to experience the full solar eclipse. Madras
is a small town-rural farming community on the edge of the Cascade Mountains.
Consequently there are very few accommodations for all the people flocking here.
Nearby Bend is a good sized city. So they are predicting hours of traffic jam
delays on the few rural roads from the cities to this area on that day. Farmers in the area are chalking off
blocks of space and charging up to $1,000 for a weekend stay on their little
block of space they lease. Great revenue for the farmers, but I’m not sure the
cattle will be pleased. LOL
Because of the overload of people, we are also advised to
stock up on food and water, keep your gas tanks full because the gas supply will
run out and to try and not travel that day. State government is shutting down for the day. Many
businesses are closing up shop and many events have been cancelled due to the
prediction of traffic jams. My pilates class was cancelled. Bummer.
First responders will all be on alert. They have even called
in the National Guard to help keep order. And most important to you and me is
they expect the cell towers to be overloaded and hence no cell service.
So if you do not see any comments from me today, it means I
can’t get through. But check in
later in the day because I may get online as tourists return home and I may be
able to upload some photos of the event. My Seeker sisters said they would
cover for me in the comment section if I can’t get through.
So fellow writers, has all of this hubbub spurred some ideas
for your next plot? I can think of all kinds of things. Maybe my hero is a first responder.
Maybe my heroine owns a farm and the hero just has to see this event for some
reason. Maybe he’s a scientist and needs the data and she really is annoyed
because her life is getting disrupted in a big way. She might have scheduled a
delivery that day before all the hype was considered.
Experiencing these big events in nature give you a true feel
for the ambience. You get a deep core of emotion for your characters. You
better believe that one of my future novels is going to feature an experience
of the eclipse.
I’ve used events of nature in other novels. In Where The Eagle Flies, the hero and
heroine are caught in a water spout which is like a tornado only it’s on the
water. Their houseboat in Lake Powell is destroyed and they are stranded. I
could really describe that event because my husband and I experienced one of
those while out fishing in Flaming Gorge National Recreation Area where the
Green River is dammed. Let me tell you, I’ll never forget the noise and fear of
watching that spout approach and hit and I think I captured it in my novel.
Love’s Miracles
is set in the huge giant Redwood Forests of Northern California. We used to
live in that part of the country, so it was easy to incorporate the amazing
aura of peace and tranquility as you walk among those giants.
Hubby and I have climbed into an active volcano. This was an
extremely eventful experience. Fortunately, I was too young and naïve to
realize the danger I was in. We were in Guatamala where there weren’t any
regulations at that time to prevent people from climbing into the dangerous
situation. All the crosses at the top should have been a clue. But to this day,
I can still hear the belching sounds of volcanic lava bursting forth and
shooting up in the air. Now I know I’m going to have to incorporate that in a
future wip. In fact, my cousins
all live on Christmas tree farms in Washington near Mt St. Helens. I have
promised them a story set in their region, so my volcano experiences are going
to be helpful.
Mary Connealy has one of her books, Out of Control is set in a cave. Mary wrote that based on her
venture into Carlsbad Caverns. Now there’s some experiences that are
unforgettable. I remember clearly how it felt to be crawling under hundreds of
feet of earth in the total darkness when we went spelunking in Wind Caves
National Park in South Dakota.
I have been fortunate (or maybe just plain crazy) to experience
many natural phenomenon. However, you don’t have to actually experience natural
phenomenon to include it in your novel. With access to the Internet these days
and communication so easy, you can write about a phenomena without actually
having to experience it.
In my novel, Current
of Love, the hero had to face his fear of drowning when a hurricane hit and
he had to evacuate off a Steamboat in the middle of the Mississippi. Hubby and I went on a steamboat cruise
and we had many evacuation drills, which of course spurred my imagination. I
was able to interview the crew and the captain shared some experiences and how
to evacuate the steamboat in the event of a hurricane or flooding. This all
happened before Hurricane Katrina so I didn’t have all of that horror in my
story, but the hurricane did give my character more depth. And because of
interviewing the crew, I didn’t have to actually experience a hurricane.
So folks, what natural phenomena have you experienced and
how have you used it in your writing?
If you have used natural phenomena and haven’t experienced it, how have
you researched it? We can always use helpful hints.
Readers, let us know how you feel about natural phenomena in
the stories you love to read.
Those who comment will be put in for a drawing of their
choice of any of the novels mentioned in this post.
Because some of these experiences are traumatic, I’m
providing comfort food. You won’t be able to get pizza delivery today so I have
baked several kinds of pizza for you to enjoy.
I live on the northern part of the Oregon coast,so while we didn't get the full eclipse (maybe 98%), it was still spectacular! I got a few pictures of it when it was a mere sliver. It was also like someone dimming the lights down real low, we didn't experience complete darkness. Also, the heavy fog rolled in so it shrouded most of the view we would have had...and it got COLD!! All in all, though, it was pretty awesome :-) I watched our local news here (Portland actually) and one the reporters was in the Madras area talking to some of the spectators. Sandra, I didn't know you were in that area! Pretty cool.
ReplyDeleteI think the only natural phenomena I've ever read were in suspense novels. Dana Mentink features an earthquake, hurricane, and a flood in her earlier Love Inspired Suspense. For me, I think it ramps up the danger even more when an author includes some force of nature. Not only are the characters dealing with natural disaster, but a killer too! I can already feel my heart pound :-)
I'm snagging a couple of pieces of the pizza so I can save it for breakfast in the morning. Yes, I'm one of those odd-ball people who love cold pizza in the morning...lol! Thanks also for the chance to win on of your books here.
Nothing odd about cold pizza, Trixi! I love it and cold pasta too!
DeleteTrixi, I'm so delighted that you were able to experience the eclipse even in the fog. The thing I was most struck with, wasn't that it go dark, but how cold it got. I was prepared for the dark, but not the cold.
DeleteYes, the events of nature do ramp up the danger and tension. Thanks for adding that.
Tina, I love cold pasta also. And cold pizza.
DeleteThe only natural phenomena in my stories is characters doing housework.
ReplyDeleteI wasn't going to watch the eclipse but got sucked right in. I saw some gorgeous photos all over the internet too.
Tina - LOL.
DeleteI totally geeked out over the eclipse yesterday, even though VT only got about 60%. In 2024, I'll be in the "path of totality."
Tina, you are toooo funny. Housework??? Well yes, that could be classified as a phenomena? LOL
DeleteYes, lots of great photos. I was afraid to try it as didn't want to burn out my phone.
I live in Oklahoma and over the last few years we've started experiencing earth quakes. Not fun to be sitting in your living room and feel your chair move.
ReplyDeleteI've also hunkered down in the cellar to wait out a tornado. In May of 99 we had a F5. That was before we had a shelter and the closet didn't feel very safe. Thankfully it didn't visit our neighborhood.
Terri, I grew up in California where earthquakes were always occurring. One time our motorhome jumped and that was the weirdest experience of an earthquake. I can't even imagine being in a closet with a tornado warning. You definitely need to add those emotions in a novel.
DeleteHurricane Katrina, Hurricane Irene, Hurricane Sandy, and the unnamed ice storm around Halloween several years ago were some natural phenomena to live through. I do love these natural phenomena incorporated into the storylines...they add extra layers of tension and character development.
ReplyDeleteYes, MH, those hurricanes were horrendous with their damage. So heartbreaking to see on the news. Yet so many stories of courage and miracles of survival came out also. Great material for our stories.
DeleteHere in Charlotte, we had 98% totality. Although it got dark inside the house, outside it seemed like a cloudy day. Our hummingbirds did seem to freak out a bit. One of my recent stories had the hero rescuing the heroine's daughter during a blizzard, something I experienced in 1979 while living in the D.C. area.
ReplyDeleteOh yes, a blizzard would be a great setting for tension in the novel. What novel was it? Is it out there in Amazon land? That is cool about the hummingbirds. My friend said she heard the birds change from morning song to their night song. I thought that was cool.
DeleteJill, I saw Charlotte on ABC News, what fun! We didn't get totality here. Are you going to write about it?
DeleteKathy Bailey
I think she should. chuckle
DeleteWe have tornadoes around here, but I have never personally been in one. I "think" I've seen one at a distance. Like Terri, we'd always go to the storm cellar in big storms.
ReplyDelete$1000 for the weekend? Wow.
Sandra, just a small town be over ran w/tourists is even to cause havoc.
Less than a mile from my sister's house two trains hit head-on and derailed. I believe it killed at least 2 people. Onlookers and media had no sense to stay off neighboring private party. Compared to the eclipse, this was small beans.
Yes, Connie. It was amazing. One guy was telling us that a person came up to him and offered money to stay in his driveway. Crazy is putting it mildly. There were thousands of people just pulling off the side of the road. They were worried about first responders being able to move and also about forest fires.
DeleteStay in his driveway? That is crazy.
DeleteYes, really??? They just wanted to park there. It was really hard to find a place to pull off the road that morning. Hundreds of people who had found places to stay in nearby areas flocked to the area of totality that morning and there was really no places to pull over off the road.
DeleteWow, Sandra. I was watching the news and they had crews all over Madras. It must be crazy to overrun like that in your town. I should expect something similar here in VT in 2024.
ReplyDeleteI'm using a blizzard in my current WIP as a way of of thwarting my couple and yet bringing them together. I haven't experienced much as far as natural phenomena other than a few hurricanes and blizzards.
Hurricanes and blizzards are pretty intense. Yes, you will be wise to prepare for the big event. It wasn't too bad with folks getting there because they spread out their arrivals over the weekend. But it was really crazy when all those people were trying to get home at the same time. The highways were jammed for hundreds of miles. Crazy is putting it mildly.
DeleteJosee, I live in NH, one state over. If anybody knows blizzards it's New Englanders. Power outages! Stalled cars! I'd rather read about it than be in one.
DeleteKathy Bailey
I agree. Much better to experience those things all comfy in your recliner watching them on the news. But still, it is very intense emotionally to see people suffering. Makes me so thankful when I am home and safe. At least with seeing the events on the news we know what to pray for.
DeleteThank you, Sandra. I haven't done too much with natural phenomena, but yesterday made me want to. I watched ABC News and was fascinated by the way people celebrated, including getting married during it!
ReplyDeleteI also loved the way the seasoned news people fell all over themselves for this one, the awe and wonder evident in these people who really have Seen It All. You could feel the energy, especially when they went off-script.
I have one natural event in my first Oregon Trail story, when the H and H have to cross the Platte River during a severe rainstorm. One of the company drowns.
I'm going to try to incorporate more of this! My current WIP is set in New England, in the winter, so all kinds of potential for disaster.
Kathy Bailey
Happily making my characters suffer from the forces of nature in NN
Toooo funny Kathy, Yes, make those characters suffer. That is what Ruthy and Mary have been telling us to do. LOL. And those New England storms will be great settings for tension. BTW I love stories about the Oregon Trail.
ReplyDeleteSandra, hope you can access WiFi today. I want to hear your thoughts on the total eclipse. We were at 97%...so exciting. Sat on my deck and watched it all. Clouds rolled in early, but thankfully we had clear skies for the rest of the time, including our max period.
ReplyDeleteYou climbed into a volcano? Yikes!
I've used tornadoes, hurricanes and snowstorms in my stories. An eclipse might be difficult, unless it's set in 2024!
Hi Debby, So far I'm getting wifi as its early. All weekend, I could get okay reception early in the morning, but by nine o'clock it started to really slow down. As soon as everyone woke up and started using their phones, it got so I could hardly download any sites on the Internet, including Seekerville. I was still able to receive emails and send them however, I don't think they went out exactly when I sent them.
DeleteAnd hey, the eclipse is a definite time frame, but our characters could have had some major trauma during this eclipse that impacts their behavior now. Maybe they met someone in all that craziness of folks gathering to experience it and they are trying to find them again.
My biggest impression was not seeing it so much as I've seen partial eclipses before so it is pretty phenomenal to see it with the special glasses. But what was most impressive to me was how cold it got. And we were pet sitting our friend's cocker spaniel and he just laid down like he thought it was bed time. So cute.
Thanks for such an interesting post, Sandra. Not much happened with the eclipse here in Central Texas, but a lot of folks got outside for awhile and made the most of the experience anyway. No traffic jams though :-) I can't imagine what it was like in your neck of the woods.
ReplyDeleteI've never been in the path of a tornado, but high winds and hailstorms have blown out several of our windows (and done other damage) on more than one occasion.
We visited Carlsbad Caverns in the late 1980s and it was truly amazing/scary. Unbelievable. A few years later while out exploring with our kiddos we found a small cave (alongside a river). I poked my head inside, but the others crawled right on in. They didn't linger though. Probably because I was right outside the entrance having a hissy-fit. I've not worked a hailstorm scene into a book yet, but I have a small cave scene (small cave, small scene) in one. I used the river experience more than the larger cavern for my character's "five senses" moment.
Except for Carlsbad, I've never visited any of the places you mentioned. They sound amazing though, and I'd like to someday. Thanks again!
Laura, how interesting that you used the small cave experience. And you sound like me. My hubby always wants to go explore and I'm basically a coward and having that same hissy fit until he talks me into it. I've been in some pretty intense hailstorms also. I bet we'll see one in a future novel of yours. Thanks for sharing.
DeleteGreat post, Sandra. I was able to experience the eclipse yesterday here in Nebraska. It was incredible! It seemed surreal to experience it for real after looking at so many pictures and videos the last few weeks.
ReplyDeleteLiving in Nebraska, I am familiar with tornadoes. I sat in a bathroom with 14 other people during a tornado that fortunately did not hit the building I was in. It was scary. I am writing a book with a tornado as the main event and the aftermath.
Please put me in the drawing.
Sandy, tornados are so frightening. We've had a lot of warnings in KY and GA.
DeleteOh Sandy, I'm so sorry you had to experience that tornado/bathroom experience, but how wonderful that it will be in your story. I'm sure you will be able to use all those emotions you had.
DeleteWere you in the totality zone for the eclipse? I think I saw that Nebraska was in it.
Sandra, we were in the totality zone. Nebraska had a very large area that was in the zone. I watched it with my husband and son from a ridge on a hiking trail that my son likes. He suggested it and it was perfect. There were only a few other people out there. We were able to see most of the 360 degree sunset that way. It was fabulous.
DeleteAnd yes, the tornado was scary. When the wind came up, it shook the building and I thought that was it. Later our building had a lot of problem with leakage and it was determined the tornado had lifted the roof and set it back down. It wasn't a real strong tornado. I'm convinced I wouldn't be here now if it had been.
DeleteYour viewpoint sounds spectacular. We could see the ring of sunset also. It was amazing. And wow, lifted the roof you say. Now that could be the basis for a comedy but I won't go there. I'm sure living through that was terrifying. Thank goodness you are okay.
DeleteWhat a great idea, Sandra! I've used a tornado in a story before. I've never actually had one hit close to me, but I've taken cover many times. And one hit in one of my cp's neighborhood. So I had her descriptions and used them in A House Full of Hope to have a tornado hit near my character's house.
ReplyDeleteI just remembered something! I've also struggled to take my son to a doctor while in a flash flood while we were on vacation near the beach. I should probably use that sometime.
Great idea Missy. Those experiences are a treasure trove of emotion. Speaking of flashfloods, I forgot to mention that my current wip starts with a flashflood. Yep, you really do need to use that in one of your stories. I remember how well you did the tornado scare in House Full of Hope. Great writing, girlfriend.
DeleteI've grown up with tornadoes all around us in Kentucky. Some hit close and destroyed many of my friends homes. My uncle was saved by a brick column in his driveway when a tree crashed down on his car from a tornado. I've used this in an unpublished story.
ReplyDeleteI viewed the eclipse with neighbors and got to know them better through the process. I'm sure we'll keep hearing many unique stories from the eclipse.
Last thing, in Conway,SC a man robbed a bank at the beginning of the eclipse. Two people were murdered. For those of us interested in suspense, let's don't forget natural phenomena as well. And please join me in prayer for the victims families. Thanks!
Oh Jackie, how tragic about those murders. We will certainly pray for those families.
DeleteThe story of your uncle's miraculous event with the tree crashing down should definitely go in one of your stories. smile
It was fun how everyone visited and enjoyed the eclipse wasn't it? So glad you got to know your neighbors. How fun is that.
Sandra, so glad you're able to be online. You had to be thrilled to experience a complete eclipse! I watched it on the Internet and on Nova last night. Was it an amazing experience?
ReplyDeleteI haven't used natural phenomenon in my books, except for storms, but I'll definitely think about that now.
The pizza smells delicious. Will grab a slice for breakfast. Reminds me of mornings after a slumber party, only we ate the pizza cold.
Janet
Hi Janet, I"m online for now as it is still early here in Pacific time zone. But I might be in trouble later this morning when everyone wakes up. Had some problems yesterday and Saturday. I couldn't comment to your blog yesterday. I read it and it was wonderful btw. But when I tried to comment, it wouldn't upload. sigh So hopefully it will be better today.
DeleteSandra, did you take the eclipse pictures? They're great.
DeleteHope you can comment later. Technology gone awry is frustrating. Surely that reality could be in a book. :-)
Janet
Janet, those were available on Canva.com. I used them last week to because I was afraid I wouldn't be able to get any uploaded. As it turned out it is a good thing I did that because I wasn't able to upload any yesterday. I could do emails, but that was about it.
DeleteHi Sandra, I knew you traveled a lot, but had no idea you were such a thrill seeker!
ReplyDeleteI've had a good number of weather experiences. In 1980 we had a major snowstorm hit our area. We had tickets to the circus at Scope in Norfolk and it wasn't snowing too badly when we left, but when we came out we saw what we were in for. As we were leaving I looked out the rearview mirror and noticed the guards stopping cars exiting the garage one car behind us. All the people that didn't get out as quickly as we did were forced to spend the night in that huge building, for their own safety! We had chains on our tires, so we had no problem getting home, but it was kind of strange being one of very few cars on the road. We only had to go 8 miles but I think it took us at least an hour. Our one year old was at my mom's, my husband thought we might need to leave her there and just get ourselves home. No way was I agreeing to that! We were getting my baby no matter what. I'm glad we did, as everything in town was shut down for at least three days and a travel advisory against driving.
We rode out Hurricane Isabel in 2003 and were without power for a week. We had a generator, but barely had enough gas to make it. It was a big deal when we heard about a gas station up the road finally opening and we were able to keep our power on. The ground was so saturated huge trees fell all over the area and it was months before they were all cleared and removed.
The next year, hurricane Ivan showed up right before that one year old from my 1980 story was getting married. We had a beautiful outdoor gazebo wedding at Fort Monroe in Hampton planned. The morning of the wedding the hurricane was gone but the gale force winds were not. We had no choice but to move the wedding indoors to the officers club were the reception was due to be held. The hurricane also affected the honeymoon plans as they were going to a Jamaican resort which had been all but destroyed. At the last minute the travel agency allowed a change of plans and they went to Puerto Vallarta instead. My daughter was a bit of a wreck because of the changes, but I encouraged her that all these changes and near calamities was actually good experience for how to handle the ups and downs she would encounter in marriage. Thirteen years later they have one of the strongest, most admirable marriages I have ever seen.
Sorry, didn't mean to write a book, but I'm definitely drawn to stories that have interesting weather experiences in them. Thanks for the fun post. I hope the rest of your day goes well!
Tracey, please don't apologies because I LOVED reading all these experiences and events. Wow, you can see God's hand in your lives. smile. And yes, they need to be used in your stories. I love hearing about your daughter's marriage. What a blessing and yes, if they could handle all of that at their wedding, the marriage would be a piece of cake. smilie. So glad they were able to rebook them to Puerto Vallarta. Lovely place to spend a honeymoon. Thanks again for sharing. Very inspiring stories. smile
Deletehey tracy
Deleteyou sound like you're in my neighborhood. I remember Isabel (and lack of power & downed trees) and Ivan. Funny how snow affects the Tidewater area.
Hi DebH, yes I think I've read in the past you're in Virginia Beach, I'm in Chesapeake, not to far apart
DeleteSandra, what a timely topic! I have a daughter, son-in-law and 3 grandkids that drove to SC to see the total eclipse and loved it!
ReplyDeleteSuch a cool thing.
And I'm not generally a user of natural phenomena in books other than storms, fires, blizzards.... Oh, wait, I guess I DO use them, and I'm doing a series around a flood...
So I'm wrong, I use them because they happen!
Great post today, and I loved Mary's "Seth" in the cave book... Oh my stars, he was such a great character!!!!
Yes, Ruthy, those storms, fires and blizzards definitely count as natural phenomena and you use them so well. How fun that your family trekked to South Carolina to experience totality. What a blessing that so many were able to experience it. It was fun seeing all the families out having a wonderful time together. Some of the children got bored with watching, but they had each other to play with. smile At least they were outdoors which is a blessing in itself.
DeleteAnd yes, Seth was marvelous. I loved how Mary used the cav to develop so much emotion. She is good at that anyway. smile
Fun post, Sandra! At the moment I can't think of any huge natural phenomena I've used in any of my books. Except maybe the late-1920s drought and dust storms in my Flowers of Eden series.
ReplyDeleteEvents I've actually experienced would include a hurricane or two and a few ice storms. Situations like those would definitely work well for keeping the H/H in close proximity for maximum tension.
Hi Myra, I think the drought and dust storms definitely count. smile. They certainly impacted the characters. Loved that series.
DeleteI can't imagine seeing the eclipse in totality because my area of Kentucky had about 90-92% and I thought it was fantastic. My neighbor put on FB that she was very disappointed but we were told that we wouldn't have the full eclipse so I was thankful to see what I did. Today, as I thought about standing and looking up at the sky, I wondered how people will react if we see Jesus's return. Will there be people disappointed? Don't think so but I do believe that terror will be very present with some people!
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your post and please enter my name in the drawing.
Blessings!
Connie
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Hi Connie, your name is definitely in the drawing. Yes, the event was so exciting. Lowell Observatory in Northern Arizona which was miles away from totality had a big event with folks camping out around the area to participate. So it was exciting to see whether you had totality or 70%.
DeleteAnd yes, we are told we will all be looking up at the sky on the day of the Lord's return. smile. A day to celebrate for sure.
How exciting, Sandra, to be in the heart of things and get to see the full eclipse. Only 70% in Arizona. Barely any change in the light around us, but we enjoyed watching it through the special glasses. Friends in central Missouri had a great view--and sent me photos!
ReplyDeleteI haven't used any big natural phenomena in my stories--just the usual Arizona mountain country weather...monsoon thunderstorms and snow! :)
Ha ha Glynna, those events can be pretty exciting, especially the monsoons. I have a flashflood from a monsoon in one of my wips.
DeleteYes, you had a lot of excitement at Lowell Observatory even though you were only 70%. Still that is impressive to see.
Oh, WOW, Sandra -- talk about timely!! What a great post, and can I just say that you and Ed AMAZE me with all the experiences you have had with traveling. I can't get Keith to budge from the Lake except an occasional trip to Florida, although he DID plan a wonderful bike tour of Michigan a few years back where we rode our bikes in lots of beautiful little towns from Grand Haven all the way to Mackinac Island. :)
ReplyDeleteAnd now I will admit that I actually AVOIDED a known natural disaster in one of my series by setting my Heart of San Francisco series from 1902 through 1905 because I purposely didn't want to fool with the San Francisco earthquake. Seemed too depressing to me, so I focused instead on the good things in San Fran before that catastrophe. :\
GREAT post, my friend, and I am jealous you saw the eclipse in a totality zone. We were only about 97 percent, and although I read you could take your glasses off when the moon covered the sun to see the aura, NONE of us were willing to risk it. So you see, we are not adventurous risk-takers like you and Ed! ;)
Hugs and more hugs,
Julie
Julie, you were very smart not to risk looking without glasses. I would not risk even using my cell phone to photograph it. I need it too much especially since it is the source of my wifi today. LOL
DeleteI did think of your San Franscisco series when thinking of natural phenomena. And since San Francisco is my home town, I love that you brought out the good things. It was a great city. I'm not terribly happy with it since it is a sanctuary city now. Lots of filth in such a beautiful setting. Oh well.
I loved hearing about your bicycle ride. We all have our gifts and interests. God has an amazing appreciation of variety. smile
Alas, Sandra, no excitement yesterday here in Nevada. It was cloudy all day so we watched it on TV. I used it as an "excuse" for a few breaks from writing in the morning.
ReplyDeleteWhile living in Florida (Lightning Capital of the World...I know I'll get arguments here...bring it!), I sat...or huddled...in my 28ft Airstream while Tropical Storm Marco rocked it back and forth. Also, I've experienced fire...5 years ago this month...our heavily wooded mountain homes in Montana felt the wrath of Mother Nature. Fourteen homes and twenty out-buildings were lost, which included our home, too. I feature a fire in my current WIP since I have had up-close and personal experience. So heartbreaking to see it happen to others, too.
Oh, and another thing I consider a phenomena...a sighting of Princess Di and her sons at Busch Gardens in the late 80's...less than 50 yards from where I was sitting! Her pictures never did her beauty justice.
What a blessing for you and your hubby to experience all that God and nature has to offer...and write about it!
Blessings,
Marcia
Hi Marcia, Yes, hubby and I have been so blessed. We are very thankful and appreciative. In fact I've always said that hubby gets special blessings simply because he appreciates God's artistry so much. We know that all artists love to be appreciated. smile
DeleteI'm so sorry about your house. How devastating. I always feel so badly when we hear about those kind of losses. We have so many fires here in the west. But using all of that in your novels is a way to make good come out of it. You definitely will have the emotions and experiences nailed. Best wishes.
Great post, Sandra! And a good reminder that the settings in our stories can add a lot of tension, or ease it, depending on what's going on in the weather or other natural events.
ReplyDeleteOne natural event I didn't think I'd ever be part of was a flash flood. They come and go in a...well, flash! So to be in the right place at the right time to see one (and NOT become a victim of one) seems like it would be a rare occurrence. When we saw water running across the road ahead of us, we pulled off to the side of the road. We were in the mountains, but it hadn't been raining (at least, not where we were). In a matter of seconds the water went from about 1" deep to about 8" deep, pouring down the mountainside and across the road, and into the creek below.
And yes, I'll use that in a book sometime!
I always enjoy hearing about your adventures as you travel!
Hi Jan, yes flash floods are so dangerous because they could be from a rain shower somewhere else. You're traveling along thinking everything is ok and wow, here comes the water. I've seen several and they are pretty frightening. We lost some friends who were jeeping in Mexico. They didn't come back to camp one day and it turned out they were washed away in a flashflood. We've learned to stay out of creek beds when there are clouds anywhere nearby.
DeleteAnd I can picture your story now as you have an exciting writing style.
Great post Sandra! I didn't see the eclipse in my part of Texas. My library posted some cool photos of the shadows on their Facebook page.
ReplyDeleteI grew up in a small town along the Texas Gulf. The traffic streams steady during the Summer. There is also a bird sanctuary that is well known. Hope your "visitors" leave soon!
The visitors are on their way. Internet still slow, but I seem to be getting on if I keep trying and stay persistent. smile
DeleteThe bird sanctuary would be a great place to have your characters visit.
I've not really experienced any natural phenomena (unless you count the eclipse from yesterday, but we only saw about eighty percent of it- never fear we'll be right in the path of the one coming in 2024). Guess I haven't lived long enough. Though there was one time we were staying at an inn where the fire alarm went off in the middle of the night. Fortunately there wasn't actually a fire- if there had been my whole family and I would all be dead. A few days later we all had to go down to the basement of the inn because of a tornado warning. So yeah, that was an eventful stay.
ReplyDeleteIn my second book my characters survive a volcanic eruption which then causes a tsunami. To study for that I checked a lot of survival guides out of the library. I got carried away reading them and realized that I'm a survivalist junkie. Seriously, if you are ever in a pickle... give me a call, I'll start spouting off random survival techniques.
Hey Nicki, good to know you are a resource for survival techniques. And yes, if you've been in a basement during a tornado, that qualifies as a natural phenomena.
DeleteHow exciting that you'll be in the path of totality in 2024. You will really be amazed. Its very unique and exciting.
Let's see, I've experienced blizzards, hailstorms, hurricanes, and tornadoes. Thankfully no forest fires. I've traveled places, but no volcanoes for me :).
ReplyDeleteNext time there's an eclipse, I'm traveling to the area of totality - I want to see that corona stuff live... doubt TV does it justice. I guess I want to experience the whole because yesterday's partial was cool, but not quite enough.
My brother is a trucker in the Colorado/Nebraska region. The mass exodus out of Nebraska made highway travel awful. Since he had a load heading to Missouri, he actually took the "back highways" to avoid the traffic. He said the travel times otherwise would be unfathomable.
Yes, the real thing is super cool. But the tv did do a nice job I thought. The corona stuff is amazing, but you have to be careful you don't blink or you'll miss it. The most amazing thing to me was how cold it got. I wasn't expecting that.
DeleteThe traffic was really gastly. Your brother is lucky he found some back roads. Google routed people on our back roads so they were just as bad as the main highway.
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ReplyDeleteGreat post, Sandra! Thank you :)
ReplyDeleteI also love the giant Redwood Forests of Northern California. Such an amazing place!
Since I write nonfiction my stories all come from real life experiences. But I enjoyed reading about how you and Mary translated your real life experiences to fiction.
Please enter me in your drawing.
May God bless you and all of Seekerville!
Thank you Phyllis and God bless you also. We love our readers and really appreciate your participation. And you do need experience for non-fiction also.
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ReplyDeleteWho needs fiction? You need to be writing an autobiography! "Growing up Between Great Events".
I also went into an active volcano which was smoking, stinking and hot, (during my immortal years) and all the Italian government required was that I take (and pay for) a local guide! (I asked the guide why I got him? "Wasn't Virgil available?" A quick wit the guide replied, "We save Virgil for Dante scholars...not Americani".)
More recently I even had a tornado pull water out of a lake and over the dam flooding my apartment with five feet of water! The dam was not hurt!
And last week another tornado just missed my house but it did manage to take out the Fedex location where all my new car buying documents were waiting to be shipped to OKC. I had to go back to the dealer and re-sign all the many sheets of paperwork. Better that than the car!
I always love reading and writing about natural events that mirror what is happening in the story. This is like having music in a movie that exactly matches what's happening on the screen.
For example, I'd have an eclipse happen at the same time as the romantic 'black moment' happens. I'd have the false heroine step in front of the real heroine and blacken her reputation -- only to have the corona shine through -- showing the heroine, a plain Jane, in all her hidden beauty!
The hero, a scientist, would be explaining the stages of the eclipse in real time when he gets to the 'wedding ring' stage. Here the real heroine says 'under her voice', "I guess that's the next best thing to a real wedding ring". Whereupon the hero stops talking, puts his hand in his pocket, and brings out a small velvet package, "Well, then how would you like the real thing?"
How's that for mirroring the astronomical with the down-to-earth? Too close for comfort? Would the readers catch on as to what I was doing? :)
BTW: also very interesting for a reader is having a great love story take place with a backdrop of some great event. Like taking a date to Ford's theater the night Lincoln was shot. Or even lovers walking along the beach watching as the Wright brothers are testing their aircraft. Just a little touch of history is needed because history is always doing that kind of touching itself -- even if it is almost unnoticed at the time.
Vince
Too funny about Virgil versus Dante as your guide. And you've been in a volcano? Weren't the sounds horrendous? That was more impressive than the lava shooting out.
DeleteI like your ideas and matching the dark moment to the dark moment of the eclipse. At a party, I heard a story last night where a man compared the eclipse to the dark moment in his life (or character arc) It was really emotional.
I love dropping in little historical facts into my novels. It makes it more interesting for me also as a writer. Thanks for sharing all of your great ideas Vince.
Hi Sandra: It wasn't erupting! It was just active with lots of smoke coming out and hissing type noises. That's as brave as I get. : _
DeleteSandra, I loved your story about walking along the volcano. Too wild!
ReplyDeleteCan't say I've experienced many natural phenomenons other than snow storms. Lots and lots of snow.
Sharee, I think lots of snow counts. smile It would for me anyway. I'm not used to snow so I would be freaked out in a big storm. Oh wait. Wouldn't that be great in a romance-like curled up near a warm fire during a raging storm???
DeleteGreat stories! I was thinking 2 1/2 minutes of eclipse totality when everyone is distracted is a good time to kill someone (fictionally. In a novel. Of course!)
ReplyDeleteYou made me laugh out loud, Sherri :-)
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It was mentioned earlier that people were murdered for real during a bank robbery during the eclipse. yikes.
DeleteI love the logical use of natural phenomena in stories. One time I read a story that included a hurricane making a direct hit/landfall at Amarillo, Texas. Uh ... no :-)
ReplyDeleteI've used several things in stories that I've experienced - a fog so thick that the hero (who was was on a horse when they rode into the fog) couldn't see his horse's nose; the unbelievable darkness in a cavern; a 'blue norther' blowing in; and even a (historical) earthquake in North Texas.
Funny thing is that last year I found out about an eclipse that happened in 1878. I'm not sure what other states were included but it passed from Montana Territory down to Texas. I researched local papers from that time for reports of what it was like in the North Texas area ... and the eclipse will work perfectly in one of my stories (the heroine is a woman astronomer).
You are a brave woman, climbing into an active volcano!
Nancy C
Nancy, That is perfect. Great going on the research. Yes, how interesting to have a heroine who is an astronomer especially in those days.
DeleteAnd I was more stupid than brave. LOL But thanks for the compliment.
Sandra, Living in the lightning capital state they say we are more likely to get struck with lightning than winning the weekly lottery. We are also hurricane prone and many of my stories have thunder, lightning bolts and rain in them. Hmm, I never realized why?? Great blog today. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteOkay Suzanne, now I'm curious. What state is the lightning capital state? Wow that's a lot of lightning. And it is exciting so would make great ambience in your novel. Thank you for sharing.
DeleteI say it's Florida, Sandra, and stated it in my post. Suzanne? Where are you?
DeleteI just Googled it, Sandra, and the first post up said "Florida is the lightning capital of the world". I lived there for ten years and I believe it!
DeleteThanks and I would never have guessed Florida. I would have thought in the mountains. Wow. You learn something new every day. Thanks again Marcia.
DeleteI see now where you say that in your post Marcia. I guess it went by me. But interesting that its Florida.
DeleteSandra and Marcia, I live in central Florida on the west coast by the Gulf of Mexico. Originally from New Jersey, we moved here in 1970 and now I feel like a native. I neglected to add that Florida is the lightning capital of the U.S. I know several people who have been struck and lived. One pushing a grocery cart toward the market. The cart was struck and hit her too. Glad you learned something today.
DeleteThanks Suzanne for the update. Yep, I know the feeling of becoming a native. We moved to Arizona in 1975 so we feel like we are desert rats now. smile
DeleteHow frightening to be pushing your grocery cart and be hit. yikes. Will that show up in one of your novels?
A YA book that does a great job with natural phenomena is Tangerine by Edward Bloor. It takes place in Florida in a location that gets lightning at the same time everyday, and that becomes crucial to the plot of the story. Also, the main character is a boy with severely limited vision that he has always believed is caused by looking at an eclipse when he was young, although he doesn't remember. So lots of natural phenomena there!
DeleteSandra, I've gazed in wonder at Niagara Falls and at stalagmites in caves. I have long wanted to write a romance in the aftermath of a hurricane. So far, there's only been some very rough thunderstorms in my books. I like books where authors use the setting so well it becomes a character.
ReplyDeleteHi Tanya, I agree. The setting can develop its own character. I think mine do because I absolutely LOVE the outdoors and the amazing aspects of creation. So enthralling.
DeleteI know I promised to add some photos from yesterday, but the Internet is still overloaded and its just too slow to upload. I'm so fortunate that I can at least comment on the blog. Sometimes, I have to keep hitting the publish button because it just isn't responding. Then I copy what I wrote and reboot. Then it might go through-sigh. so look for my Facebook Page as later in the week, I'll add some of the photos I have.
ReplyDeleteNow if you really want to see exciting news features of the eclipse search on you tube and pinterest. I'm sure there are some really great photos.
There were some amazing stories. One couple married during the totality of the eclipse. So romantic. smile.
Hubby says there are programs on science channel about the eclipse.
DeleteFun post, Sandra, and I see you are able to comment, but can't upload pictures. My older son and family are in Bend for the eclipse. They got some good photos. Looking forward to seeing yours on Facebook. What an experience!
ReplyDeleteI've enjoyed the natural settings of your books. You capture the experience of being there. The water funnel description from Where the Eagle Flies has delayed me from a houseboat trip! *smile*
My story has a flash flood in a canyon. I've been through flash flooding on a highway, but my husband was caught in a canyon while hiking, so I used a combination of those adventures for my writing.
A Christmas tree farm story set near Mt. St. Helens would be great!
Stay comfy up there as the crowds drift away! Glad you had time to arrive for the eclipse after the Rocky Ridge Ranch retreat. :)
Hi Sherida, Yes, I barely made it back after the retreat. I was going to stay there and watch with Shane, but he said there would be tons of people so I thought I might as well go back to hubby and see it with him. He's such a science geek that he had all kinds of fun info to play around with.
DeleteThanks for the nice compliment. A houseboat trip is really a great thing. Just go in May or June before the monsoon storms hit. smile
I can hardly wait to read the flash flood. So your hubby got caught hiking. Yikes. I need to talk to him for my wip.
I'll get back to Facebook soon. In Bend they have much better reception. I'm glad he got his photos out there. It was quite an experience for sure.
Awesome post, Sandra! I admire your adventuresome spirit! Using natural phenomena in books adds a great dimension, I think. In one of my stories, I used a mountain mudslide based on the one that happened in our ranching community.
ReplyDeleteI haven't used it in a book, but have experienced, spending the night in a cellar waiting on an impending tornado. We sang a lot...maybe that's what drove the tornado in the other direction...LOL
Other frightening moments have been air turbulence when flying...especially the time the flight attendant chased the runaway beverage cart down the aisle.
Thanks for sharing your experiences and providing us with fabulous ideas for future stories!
Oh Kathryn, I can already see the air turbulence scene in a novel. What a great way for hero and heroine to meet. And the mudslide certainly sounds awesome. And if you experienced one, it will be even better.
DeleteGoodness! I've been through wildfires, hurricanes, record-breaking blizzards, and now the eclipse.
ReplyDeleteFires make it into my writing a lot. I think it's because the experience was so traumatic that it comes to the surface quickly and the emotion just spills on the page. Also, it's easy to kick the protagonist out the door and onto her journey when her front door burns to the ground. She CAN'T go back ;)
Good point Megan about not letting your heroine go back. Rough way to go though. And I bet those scenes are packed with emotion. I felt it just in this paragraph.
DeleteYou're certainly right about that, Megan! After our fire, we rebuilt, but in another state. One of my daily mantras: Life Goes On (whether you want it to or not!)
DeleteSo true Marcia, I went back and reread your post and the fire and loss of homes captured my attention which is why Florida as lightning capital flew over my head. I was focusing on the horror of the fires. So sad.
DeleteWell folks, my pillow is calling my name. LOL What a busy day. I enjoyed posting with you and hearing about your natural phenomena experiences. There were so many. We need to keep this in mind. I now know who to call for info on tornadoes, hurricanes, forest fires, etc. This will be a good source of information. Thanks folks for chiming in with your wonderful insights about your experiences.
ReplyDeleteBe sure and look in the Weekend Editiion for the winner. I will probably throw in two books. Yay.
So even if you drop in later, I will check back early tomorrow morning and your name will be put in the dish also.
Happy writing. Happy reading.
I'm a day late on seeing this. I've never included challenging natural phenomena in anything I've published. However, I do have one work-in-progess where I have enough weather reports to know when it was raining in Kyoto in the late 16th century.
ReplyDeleteI love natural phenomenon. I have a thunderstorm in one climax, the first snow in another, and one book that goes from one phenomenon to another.
ReplyDeleteCaves, volcanoes, spelunking?! Yikes. I bow before you brave women. I get dizzy sitting in the nosebleed section at a sporting event. Kudos!
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