Thursday, September 21, 2017

Five "Fun Size" Pre-Writing Starters to Ground Your Story


How thrilling it is as a writer to settle your fingers on the keyboard and type “Chapter One.” But even when filled with the exhilaration of new-story-itis, starting a book-length endeavor can often be intimidating.
Whether you’re a plotter, a seat-of-the-pantser or something in between, it never hurts to launch out on a story journey with a roadmap in hand (or at least in your head). Yes, you might take some detours along the way, but giving serious thought to your destination in advance can pay off in the long run.
I find nailing down 5 core elements before I start writing helps immensely, and I try to approach them as FUN, not something that will strangle my story-telling freedom. In fact, I find working through “fun size” starters actually energizes my storytelling confidence and enhances my writing freedom.

·       Goal, Motivation, Conflict (GMC)

·       Story Concept

·       Story Premise

·       Moral Premise

·       500-Word Synopsis

For me, none of these “fun size” starters are stand-alones. I can start out with any of them and they feed off each other. If I’m trying to decide whether ideas have enough “umph” to carry them from beginning to end, I’ll run them through a few of these “filters” to see how they hold up.

It doesn’t take long to throw a few less promising ones back into the idea ocean—and for one or two of them to catch my imagination as possibilities. Once I’ve decided on the core idea, then I move back and forth among the five elements—playing, building, tweaking—until the idea solidifies into a story I’m excited to tell with an engaging beginning, rock-solid middle, and a satisfying end.
Goal, Motivation, and Conflict (GMC) – We all know how important it is for our protagonists to possess GMC. Lacking even one of them—or having a weak one—seriously sabotages our efforts. Into this GMC bucket, I like to throw giving thought to greatest flaws and fears—and the source of them, the worst that could happen if goals aren’t met, the lie my characters tell themselves, and how they will change by the end of the story. It’s fun, too, to give them a secret!
To get the juices flowing on GMC, I often simultaneously play around with the other 4 elements—and I do mean PLAY. This is a fun way to make the development of GMC somewhat less painful. I’m not one of those gifted writers to whom a full-blown story appears in my mind like a big screen movie and I just transcribe what I see. Coming up with a viable story can often be grueling, so anything I can do to break the struggle into more “fun size” pieces, the better things go.

Story Concept – There are a lot of conflicting definitions regarding concepts and premises, etc., but for my own purposes I personally like to think of the concept as the 1-liner idea that first sparked my imagination. The very high-level story question. For instance, this is where my upcoming April 2018 release, “Mountain Country Courtship,” started:
Can an abandoned-at-the-altar city guy and a small-town runaway bride find the home of their hearts in each other’s arms?
Not a lot of detail there, but it hints at conflict…and romance.
Story Premise – I think of the story premise as more detailed, involving a little GMC and plot. Again, this is not a “textbook” definition of the word – this is just what I do when I’m trying to get a grip on a new story that’s formulating in my mind. This was one of my first shots at it for the same book:
With opposing agendas and a mutual need to prove themselves, an abandoned-at-the-altar city guy and a small-town runaway bride are stuck working together renovating an old bed & breakfast inn as they race to beat the clock to accommodate an all-important wedding that could make or break their future—and their chance at love.
Just added some detail that made me give further thought about GMC and plot.

Moral Premise – I like to think of this as what the core of the story is REALLY about under the surface of the action and dialogue. Knowing this as you write can greatly strengthen the story as you subtly weave it into your scenes.
Wrestling the steering wheel away from God in order to control life’s outcomes leads to directionless confusion and distancing from love. Turning the wheel over to God leads to inner peace and room for love.
This moral premise established for me the characters’ current inward state—and how they need to change.

500 Word Synopsis – 500 words is about one single-spaced page or two double-spaced, so you must stick to the bones of your story. It forces me to pull the other “fun size” pieces AND critical plot points together to reveal if the story holds together for the long haul.
This mini-synopsis quickly spotlights areas that are weak, that haven’t been thoroughly thought through, and that aren’t yet solid enough to carry the story successfully to The End. Discovering those things early on with a 500-word investment (and performing needed triage) is so much better than getting blind-sided halfway through writing the book.
For a seat-of-the pants writer, this short synopsis on the page or in your head may be all you need to get rolling. For a plotter or planster (or a pantser who must submit a full-blown synopsis with a book proposal), it’s a great foundation for writing a longer, more detailed synopsis.
Keep in mind that when I’m playing around with these “fun size” starters I’m not trying to make the elements perfectly written for anyone else’s inspection and critique (although I have at times polished up some of them to use in a proposal or to flesh out my publisher’s art fact sheet questions). For everything but the synopsis, I’m usually sitting somewhere away from the computer with a blank newsprint pad on my lap and letting my pen flow as the ideas come.
For me, spending a little upfront time solidifying the high-level plot and characters—while having a bit of FUN—can make all the difference in the world as to how I approach Chapter One…and journey successfully on to The End.

Please share with us today how much YOU need to know before you start writing in earnest. Do stories come to you full blown and ready to transcribe as the “movie” rolls through your mind? What, if any, pre-planning do you do? How do you get your ideas to “gel” enough to determine if they hold sufficient substance for a book-length story?
If you’d like to be entered in a drawing for a copy of my latest release, “Mountain Country Cowboy,” please mention it in the comments section!
Glynna

GLYNNA KAYE treasures memories of growing up in small Midwestern towns--and vacations spent with the Texan side of the family. She traces her love of storytelling to the times a houseful of great-aunts and great-uncles gathered with her grandma to share candid, heartwarming, poignant and often humorous tales of their youth and young adulthood. Her Love Inspired books—"Pine Country Cowboy” and “High Country Holiday”--won first and second place, respectively, in the 2015 RWA Faith, Hope & Love Inspirational Reader’s Choice Awards. Just out in May 2017 was ”The Nanny Bargain,” out now is “Mountain Country Cowboy,” and coming in April 2018 will be “Mountain Country Courtship” (the final story in the 6-book Hearts of Hunter Ridge series).
Mountain Country Cowboy. When he’s offered a job at Hunter’s Hideaway, single dad Cash Herrera immediately accepts. It means the former bad boy can start over and gain custody of his son, Joey. Still, small-town folk have long memories—especially Cash’s pretty childhood nemesis. Rio Hunter is now a lovely, courageous woman…and Cash’s new boss. Past betrayal makes them both wary, and Rio’s secret promise will soon take her away from Hunter Ridge. Yet working with Cash and teaching Joey about her beloved horses draw her closer to both. Can she create a loving family with the man who’s claiming her future?

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  1. · Goal, Motivation, Conflict (GMC)

    · Story Concept

    · Story Premise

    · Moral Premise

    · 500-Word Synopsis

    Oh, wow. This totally nails the entire pre writing scenario.

    I am going to force myself to do this. If it kills me.

    Usually I only have GMC done.

    At what point in your story do you actually have all this nailed in more than prewriting form. I find that by chapter 5 I am good to go. But trying upfront will be a challenge.

    Going to try. I like a challenge. ha!!!

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    1. Good morning, Tina! Like I said, none of this is pre-writing is "perfect" -- (and it can change as I write), but I found on my last book--which I was able to write faster than any previously--that giving thought to these areas in advance really helped. And creating a 500 word synopsis gave me a heads up on where my ideas weren't quite solidified enough and I was able to make corrections before I waded out into the muddled middle.

      Again, don't think PERFECT, but just give thought to and see if you can get it down where you can refer back to it as you write. As I'm working on these pre-writing pieces I'm often also launching into a first chapter to further rest the waters and see how things hold up. First chapters let me "see" and "hear" my characters -- bring them to life in my mind -- and let me know if I've given sufficient thought to the elements that will carry a book-length story.

      Pre-writing might take only an hour or two, a day, perhaps more. Because I work full-time and have no time to think a single personal thought at the day job, it might take me several weekends. All depends on the story, I think.

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    2. To further TEST the waters. Not REST the waters. LOL

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    3. I, too, like to jump in on that first chapter, often before I know where I'm going. Because usually I'm chomping at the bit once I know a little about my characters. :) That little bit of fun keeps me motivated to dig in deeper on pre-work.

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  2. When I read the story unfolds in my minds eye like a movie.

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    1. That's exactly how it is for me when I write a book, Mary Preston! How cool.

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    2. That's how it is when I read, too, Mary.

      Wish I were so fortunate when WRITING to have all that GMC, etc., magically appear and away I'd go with no pre-thought. But "the movie" doesn't start for me until I have a firm foundation or I start floundering just past chapter 3. (Believe me, I have a bunch of stories that died off by chapter 3 that are gathering dust under my bed and it's only been since giving pre-writing thought that I've actually managed to finish 15 books.

      I can happily "pants" the scenes if I have a solid foundation established.

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  3. Great post Glynna. When I can see how all five points would build on each other. Thank you for sharing.

    Please add my name for the drawing for your book. Thank you for the chance.

    Blessings,
    Cindy W.

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    1. Hi, Cindy! Giving my story pre-writing thought has saved me from a life of half-started stories. :) For Love Inspired proposals that must be submitted to get a contract, I have to write a full synopsis (10-15 double-spaced pages); then once the book is done, for their art fact sheet I have to supply a 500-word synopsis. I got thinking...why not write the 500 worder to START with and pinpoint any problems on a single page, then write the longer, more detailed one from there.

      Your name's been thrown in the Stetson! :)

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  4. I'm a reader, not a writer, so the process of brainstorming for a book is fascinating. Thanks for the neat post!

    I would love to be entered into the book's giveaway.

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    1. Good morning, MH! Kind crazy process, isn't it? And it's different for all writers. We each have to discover what works best for us. I just finished my 14th contracted book and I'm STILL learning!

      Your name's in the Stetson!

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  5. Glynna, this is great. It really breaks it down. I'm a plotter, but I'm always trying to refine the process and know more before I go too far. Thanks,
    Kathy Bailey

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    1. Hi, Kathy! Trying to pants a whole book just never worked for me. And believe me, I tried so many times--the 'dead bodies' are stuffed in binders and bins. :)

      But these "fun size" pre-writing practices don't take a ton of time and help me iron out potential problems early on.

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  6. Hi Glynna
    I LOVE your books. I also happen to love this post as well. I think I shall try this process because I tend to have the one sentence/short blurb that gets me interested, but then I lose my way somewhere around the middle. Your post explains my half-baked pile of manuscripts on my hard-drive. *sigh*
    Thanks again for this post. I think it will help me out, or at least get me closer to what will work for me as a writer. Yay! Count me in on the draw please.

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  7. Good morning, DebH! I can relate to the "half-baked" manuscripts. I'd get all over-the-top excited about an "idea" and jump out and start writing, but then would eventually begin to flounder because I hadn't given any thought to laying a strong foundation on which to build. I had, in essence, built my story on sand. And back in those days I didn't have a clue as to how to fix it.

    Who knows...maybe one of these days on down the road I'll pull those long-abandoned pages out for a second look. Then again...maybe they're right where they need to be. :)

    So glad you enjoy my books! I have so much fun writing them and "getting to know" my heroes and heroines.

    Your name's been thrown in the Stetson!

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  8. Hi Glynna, I feel like you've told us about such a clean cut, clear way to start. Sigh. When I write it sort of rushes out my pen in an order and then I have to go back, clean up my mess, and see if I've got things in place. It's the slow road but it seems to be how the process works for me. Right now I'm banging my head against my computer determined to learn everything there is about synopsis. I've tried bare bones and expanded but it was meh- now I'm going the reverse way with full blown to pare down. And you're right. Working with the synopsis does help point out weak places, and unnecessary scenes. Sometimes I feel like my head will explode! I love your clean cut approach.

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  9. Good morning, Barbara! Writing a longer synopsis can be a head banger for sure. I used to have a trouble writing a coherent one, then learned for my Love Inspired proposal ones to first focus on the hero or heroine's backstory. In a paragraph or two lay that groundwork that leads up to the opening scene. Then same for the other protagonist. THEN I write "as the story opens..." and then go from there. It was too tangled up to try to weave that background into the events of the story as I related it, so I do that upfront now so the reader has all that in advance. For the mini-synopsis, I just condense their backstory to one line, then focus on the internal/external "and then this happens" stuff.

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    1. Good summary, Glynna! Synopses, no matter what length, are still like pulling teeth for me.

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  10. You had me at fun-size candy bars! What a great analogy, Glynna... and a perfect way to explain the concept of GMC.

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    1. Ruthy -- don't you love those little bite-size candy bars? My favorite is the Hershey's dark chocolate with the almond inside. :)

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  11. Hi Glynna. I found this post very interesting and I like your candy selection :-) Your brainstorming methods would be useful for all of us and not just authors! Please enter my name in a drawing for a copy of “Mountain Country Cowboy,”
    Thank you and Blessings!
    Connie
    cps1950(at)gmail(dot)com

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  12. Hi, Connie! It was hard to resist eating any of the candy bars while doing the "photo shoot." :) Your name has been added to the Stetson!!

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    1. That was brilliant, Glynna! What a great reason to have to buy those candy bars!! LOL

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  13. Good morning Glynna.

    I think I've started every story different.
    Early on, I wrote one based on who the characters were, but had no idea what the plot should be.
    My current wip, started w/the premise, hooks, and conflicts.

    I'm addicted to miniature chocolate bars. Love the analogy.

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    1. Good morning, Connie! Sometimes IDEAS just come at us our of nowhere and it's best to at least get the gist of it written down ASAP before it slips away! Then step back and figure out how this "idea" is REALLY going to work out for the long haul.

      That's why these "fun size" practices help me to flesh out that "idea" and determine if it has what it takes for a book length story and get it better grounded so I can move confidently ahead.

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    2. When I first started, I'd never heard of half of these terms. I thought you just sat down and wrote a story. Ha!
      If I could sit down w/the fun-size practices, I can see where it would cut back a lot of re-writing and painful deleting of words.

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    3. Connie, when I started writing there was pretty much NOTHING available about writing commercial fiction. University courses were all about Theme and such, not the nitty gritty of telling a compelling story. GMC? What's that? The hero's journey? No idea. Nobody talked about those little secrets.

      Craft writing books were rare and pretty high level--not down in the weeds. No such thing as internet, so no on-line courses or blogs or articles that explained anything. No RWA. No ACFW. It was hit or miss--which is why I think I had so many unfinished manuscripts starting out. I didn't have a clue and nowhere to get answers!

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  14. Thank you for all those definitions! I've been going round and round trying to solidify nuances between story concept and story premise. This will really help me out!

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    1. HI, Linda! As I mentioned, these aren't official "definitions." If you read many writing craft books, you'll see all sorts of definitions for story concept, story premise, etc. -- some that to me sound like the same thing and some that sound totally in opposition to how someone else has defined them. For me, it's not so much the "label" I give to the pieces as it is to how much pre-thought I give to the processes. Hope this helps!

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  15. Glynna, fantastic post! Way to make us think so bright and early this morning! Thanks for breaking it down for us in easy to understand thoughts. (AND the pretty candy pics are fun, too!) :-)

    I'm someone who has to have notes, a semblance of an outline, and G-M-C nailed before I can put fingers to keyboard. Now, all that's subject to change as I get into my story, but I'm not one who can just fly by the seat of my pants (though I admire others who can)!

    Sometimes, if I have an epiphany (as we often do) I'll write (jotting ideas down fast and furious as I go), but then the Type A in me has to go back and organize so things will gel better in my mind.

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    1. Hi, Cynthia! You sound a lot like me...I'm definitely not a full-blown plotter and I could never write a chapter by chapter outline as I know some publishers have required, but I need a little bit more to ground me than a full-fledged pantser. I guess I'm a planster. I like to have a high-level idea of where I'm going--major plot points and a strong GMC, and that gives me sufficient freedom to then have some of the fun pantsers enjoy!

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  16. Glynna, what is your blog about? I can only taste chocolate right now. I need real chocolate. Maybe there's a protein bar left in my purse. lol

    Seriously...I love the simplicity and elegance of your method. That's a roadmap I can follow.

    My method is to think in terms of the 3-act structure and plot out the major turning points, which makes me focus on GMC, although I can never remember what the acronym stands for. Then I turn my characters loose and watch the movie in my head. I usually daydream a scene before writing it. Does that make me a plotter or a panster?

    BTW, are you giving away mini chocolate bars with your book? We hide on Halloween, so I never buy big bags of candy...chocolate candy.

    Thanks for the tips!

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    1. Glad to know Project Guy and I are not the only ones hiding out on Halloween with our chocolate stash. Even so, and with NO lights on, kids (I hope!!!) still try our doorbell.

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    2. Before the sun sets, we close the curtains, turn off all the lights, and sit in front of the TV turned down low and eat popcorn. We have a loooooonnnnnnnggggg driveway, so kids don't bother.

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    3. Sorry to distract you by the chocolate, Barbara! :) Have you ever had one of those dark chocolate oranges? Someone first brought me one of those from England but I don't think they're made in England. So GOOD and CUTE because they separate out like orange slices. Couldn't find them here in town last year, so sounds like an Amazon search this Christmas to me. :)

      Sounds like you're a Planster, too -- between the two extremes.

      Myra & Barbara -- hiding out with those chocolate stashes and popcorn! Sounds like a good plan to me!

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  17. Excellent advice, Glynna! I call myself a pantser, but I still need SOME idea of where the story is headed plus a lot of background about my characters. Once I know the basics, then I can let the characters take me along on their journey. Kind of like Barbara said above--I just turn my characters loose and hit "record" as everything plays out!

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    1. Sounds like you live in the best of both worlds, Myra! Maybe leaning more toward the "pants" side.

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  18. Glynna, loved your chocolate analogy! We just bought the jumbo sized bag of fun-size candy for ourselves! If there's any left for Halloween we'll hand it out.

    I love the simplicity of your "formula". I've read so many craft books with so many different definitions and takes on the same words I'm almost stymied when I sit down to write. Scary.

    I'm a plotter, and I work hard for every word I put down on the page. No movie reel for me. And finding enough to write to fill 12-15 pages for a synopsis...yikes! The 500-word sounds more like my speed.

    Please put my name in the Stetson for Mountain Country Cowboy.

    Blessings,

    Marcia

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    1. So MANY craft books and so little time! Ruthy steers clear, but I like to glean bits and pieces from each one--they energize me--and I am slowly distilling what has helped (and what didn't) and putting those helpful bits and pieces into my own "start up" plan.

      Synopses have always been a challenge for me--so I've been trying out the mini-synopsis first and laying the foundation and main structure--then expanding from there. Hopefully SOME day I'll have it all figured out!

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  19. Okay, Glynna, I seldom print blogs off, but I am printing this sucker off, girlfriend, because like Tina -- I'm gonna try it.

    I'm almost embarrassed to say that I NEVER think about GMC EVER when I write my books. I just sit down and start writing, which I definitely don't recommend. Several times I've found myself midway or late in the plot wondering -- what motivates this character? I know ... a little late.

    So I am embarking on a new series and will definitely apply your "fun-size" nuggets in my planning, so THANK YOU! See? It's never too late to teach an old dog new tricks. Now ... if the "dog" can just remember what she learns ... ;)

    Hugs,
    Julie

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    1. I bet subconsciously you're thinking GMC at some level, Julie, because your stories are filled with it! Maybe just need to solidify it a bit and write it down so you're reminded of what was in your head when the original story idea first came to you.

      What's the new series about?

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  20. Glynna, this is so helpful! You put into words kind of what I've been doing on my current WIP. I just need to add a short synopsis and I'll have pretty much all 5 of your "snacks!" :)

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    1. Sounds like the mini-synopsis will wrap up everything you've already put together! I think these "fun size" practices are, well, FUN to do, don't you?

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  21. You know, back when I was trying to sell my second book, which took months, I finally figured out I needed to use a one-liner. That helped focus the whole process. After I did that, I finally sold that second book.

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    1. Great success story, Missy! I keep my "fun size" stuff posted next to my desk so that throughout the writing I can refer to it and remind myself. I think keeping those things at the forefront of our mind can strengthen the scenes and keep them from going off on episodic tangents.

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  22. Loved this post. It's going into my keeper file after I have a piece of chocolate. Please throw my name in the drawing. Have a great day everyone.

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    1. Hi, Bettie! I'm glad you like the post--and hope it helps as you apply some of the suggestions Your name's in the Stetson!

      And let's hear a big HURRAH for chocolate! :)

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  23. Hi Glynna, Great story starter ideas. You always give us such great information. Am at airport with thousands of people so photos aren't coming in. Will have to look at them when we get to Hawaii. Have a great week. Hugs

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    1. Aloha, Sandra! Can't wait to hear all about the trip and see your pics upon your return! Have FUN!

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  24. Hi Glynna! This is definitely a printable post for my Seekerville notebook...great stuff! The 500-word synopsis really helps me to get a handle on my story.

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    1. I'm going to try the short synopsis, Jill. Sounds like an easier way to see if I have all the parts to a story in place!

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    2. Thanks, Jill. Hope some of the suggestions help. That mini synopsis really helped me spot some weak spots. And 500 words isn't very long at all once you get writing it.

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    3. Debby -- I'll be interested in hearing if the 500-word synopsis helps in writing suspense. I've only tried it on straight romance.

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  25. Saving this one for future reference. Thank you Glynna :)

    Please enter me in your drawing for a copy of your latest release, “Mountain Country Cowboy,”

    May God bless you and all of Seekerville!

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    1. On behalf of the Seekers, than you, Phyllis!

      I hope the post is helpful once you attempt to apply some of the suggestions.

      And your name has been thrown in the Stetson!

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  26. Hi Glynna, this is definitely a keeper post. Thanks for sharing.

    I like to get to know my characters first and go from there.

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    1. So glad it was helpful, Jackie! Knowing your characters through and through really does help keep your story on track. When first starting out trying to write book length fiction, I used to complete those lengthy questionnaires for my characters (what's her favorite soda? Favorite movie?), but those didn't really make them come alive to me. It was only when I got down in the weeds with their GMC and why they so much want what they want that things really started humming.

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  27. Glynna, thanks for sharing your pre-writing process! I do some, but not all. I'm going to print this for future reference.

    I wish a full-blown story appeared in my mind like a movie. Even when I write a story I've planned, I don't see it as a movie. Perhaps if I watched more movies, this would happen.

    Love your latest cover! Know the story inside will be just as good.

    Janet

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  28. I'm trying to decide which of this treats would rank highest. Hmm. I'll go with Reeses.

    Janet

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  29. Hi Glynna! Your blog came at a perfect time. I'm finishing the first three chapters of my next book and working on the synopsis. Your tips will help me hone in on problem areas. I like your mention of writing a 500-word synopsis. Great idea! The synopsis is usually my friend, even though it's often difficult to write. But it does show me the holes and problem areas in my story layout. Working on a quick 500-word overview might help me "see" the story at the get-go!

    Thank you, dear friend!

    The chocolate is yummy too!

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    1. Hi, Debby! Let me know if the 500-word synopsis helps writing suspense or not. Lots to pack into 500 words!

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  30. This is perfect for what I need in preparing the story I want to start for Nano in November. I sure hope it will be a success this time. This has been such a rocky year for my health. I am finally sleeping with the new medications for my heart and blood pressure so that helps. The Lord has been wonderful this year even with all the ups and down.

    Sure wish I could enjoy some of the candy.

    Have a great rest of the day.

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    1. Hi, Wilani! NANO is a perfect place to try some of these ideas out and see how they work for in preparation for it!

      You HAVE had a rough year in so many ways, and I'm glad you're sleeping a bit better. Be extra nice to yourself!

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  31. Hi Glynna:

    Wow! Thanks for your post today! It was not only very useful but it also motivated me to try it out on a new story idea. That is, I can't wait to give your ideas an audition.

    I must say that when I first saw your five 'fun-size' story starters, I almost immediately thought of five more ideas that I would add.

    However, when I read deeper under each subhead, the items I was going to add of were well covered. There's solid gold under those five subheads well worth studying. Don't just scan this post! (I've already posted it safely in my Scrivener Research folder for future use.)

    I would add one more feature, of a somewhat different type, if the writer feels up to it:

    What Value are you going to add to the reading Experience?

    By 'value' I mean what the reader learns that makes them feel rewarded and smarter for having read your book.

    For example: Sandra Byrd's "French Twist" Series takes the reader through a top French Pastry school as a student. It also shows what it is like to live in France and work at a bakery while going to school as a full time student.

    In "How to Charm a Beekeeper's Heart", Candice Patterson shows what it is like being a professional beekeeper and, in "The Price of Victory" Sandra shows the professional bicycle racing career from the inside.

    Also any Amish romance carries lots of new and interesting information about the Amish community. Lots of value here to those readers who seek it. Better yet, if you add even more value, like Debby's Military romances, the reader also gets a feel for being in the Army and how CID operates.

    All these value adding features happen over and above the love story. What the reader learns and experiences should be part of the plot and not just facts added to provide information. The value has to come as a bonus.

    BTW: I really liked the way you linked these three words: 'thoroughly thought through'. It's a visual treat for someone like me. But then, you also have quite a few 'highlightable' phrases in your new book: "The Nanny Bargain". Very enjoyable reading.

    Vince

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    1. "Value added" is a great one to add to the list, Vince!! On my character "Wanted Poster" I actually have a place to record "Why would a reader want to read this? What will they take away?" and your "value added" idea would fit right in there perfectly! Thank you!

      So glad you enjoyed The Nanny Bargain and found some "highlightables!" :)

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  32. Hi Glynna:

    P.S. In my copywriting experience there is no such things as a 'quick 500 word synopsis'! The less words, the longer it takes. : )

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  33. I'm really still trying to figure out which way works best for me. When I wrote my first book I had no idea what to do, I just wrote where the wind took me. My second book I had more of an idea what to do, but still I didn't really plot. For my third book I had a basic outline, that had a sentence or so of what needed to happen.

    Right now I'm writing a short story and I'm trying to write it off of a detailed outline that says what exactly needs to happen chapter by chapter.

    I'll have to try out your fun sized tips for the next book I start because they look like they might be helpful.

    Please enter my name for the drawing of your book.

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    1. Hi, Nicki! It sounds as if you're on the "write" track to discover what works best for you. Trial and error have been what's gradually helped me find what works best for me. I have a feeling I'm on a lifelong journey! I hope some of the suggestions will help you launch that next book!

      Your name is in the Stetson!

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  34. These are great tips, Glynna. I do all of these but I never labeled them this way. I usually focus on the moral premise first, then build my story and GMC around that. Then I write a bare-bones 1-page synopsis (since I'm way more pantser than plotter.)

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    1. Hi, Josee! Sounds as if you have the bases covered! I've found giving thought to these "fun size" preliminaries really helps me get my story grounded so I can move ahead with more confidence.

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  35. Please put my name in the Stetson for Mountain Country Cowboy. Love the cover and am anxious to read the book!
    THANKS!

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    1. Hi, Jackie! Your name has joined the others in the Stetson! :)

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  36. I've gotten romantic premises, moral premises, or really any of those points as my first idea. Then I do like you do with trying to figure the story out. I have stories that feel real to me even unwritten, and others that are more like ghosts. Good tips.

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    1. Hi, Boo! Isn't it interesting how at different times our minds focus on different things as a starter that just BEGS for the story to be told?

      Sometimes for me it might even be an opening line that have NO idea what will go with it. That's how it was for my first published book, Dreaming of Home. "At precisely one o'clock on a sunny September Saturday afternoon, Megan McGuire spied the pirate." And I wrote an entire book around that! :)

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  37. Glynna thanks for sharing how you plot/plan your stories, I love the "fun size" idea like the little chocolate candy bars :-) Always love getting the behind-the-scenes on how authors work, it's interesting to this reader. I bet all our writers gleaned something useful & fun out of this post.

    Please add my name for a copy of your latest Love Inspired "Mountain Country Cowboy", thank you so much. I love cowboy stories and this sounds great :-)

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    1. Hello, Trixi! Your name's in the hat!

      I always enjoy hearing the behind-the-scenes author stuff, too-- I'm ALWAYS looking for new "tricks" I can incorporate to make my writing better.

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  38. This post is a keeper! As a pantser who needs to learn how to be more of a plotter, looking at the process as "bite sized" steps seems less daunting. Thanks, Glynna!

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    1. Hi, Rhonda! Hope applying the suggestions helps! I tried SO hard for SO long to be a pantser--and ended up with a bunch of not-even-half-finished manuscripts; but it wasn't until I HAD to start writing a full-blown synopsis in order get a contract that I learned the joy of being a little more proactive with my pre-writing!

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  39. Keep it bite size and fun! Love it!

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