Monday, December 18, 2017

Let Christmas Decorations Enrich Your Writing

Janet here. Step into our house this time of year and you'll immediately know that we love Christmas by the Nativities, trees, garland, centerpieces, Dickens Village displays, candles, Santas, wrapped packages... 

You get the point. So what does our Christmas decor have to do with writing? you may ask.

It struck me as I sat gazing at our transformed great room that I'd developed a setting rich with sensory details that not only evoke the five senses, but also elicited in me a wide range of emotion. I thought it would be fun to look at how Christmas decorations impact us and then transfer what we notice to our storytelling.  


The tablecloth is a quilt my hubby's grandmother made.
The covered candy dish belonged to my grandmother.
The first thing I noticed was that my decorations and other elements of Christmas stir the senses. 

The jewel-tones, sparkle and glamour of our ornaments delight the eye.  

Velvet-covered balls, prickly boughs, glass birds feathery tails, the soft snow in village scenes all beg to be touched, especially by inquisitive little fingers.
Carols are playing softly in the background at my quiet house, bringing me peace and joy. Perhaps at yours the music is barely heard over the laughter of children or the noisy snowplow running past your windows. 

At Christmas, our taste buds and noses have a field day with the aroma and flavor of homemade goodies. I don't use scented candles due to allergies, but if you do, perhaps the fragrance of vanilla or cinnamon candles drifts in the air. 
My Dad wore this tie and hat every Christmas 

Strong writing evokes the senses. Christmas is a great time to notice the impact of the heightened awareness of the senses, then translate that to the descriptions in your novel's setting. Every scene brings a new setting. Even if the location is the same, the character whose head you're in sees the setting differently depending on what's going on with him externally or internally. For example, think of the impact of your Christmas decorations on a serene evening, then imagine how they'd impact a character grieving a terrible loss at Christmas.  

My decorations don't merely evoke the senses. Most have some age, many have huge sentimental significance, others are fun and battery operated like this Santa in my kitchen "Rockin' Round the Christmas Tree." One glance at our nostalgic ornaments reminds me of little ones now grown and loved ones missing at the table, yet forever entrenched in our hearts. All these ornaments produce memories and those memories carry emotion. 




Take some time and look at the details around your decorated house. Do some of the decorative elements have you choking back tears, sighing with contentment or giggling like a kid? If so, grab a pen and write down what you're feeling. Don't name the emotion, like happy or sad. Instead describe the emotion, the reactions you're experiencing inside and out. Record your thoughts. Record what produced the emotion and why. Once you have a whole list of emotional triggers and reactions, you can use them to elicit emotion in your stories, any story, not just a Christmas story. You can always switch up the trigger for something else, just as long as it's meaningful for your character. 


Nothing makes fiction more believable than the stuff we take from real life. 


Our grandchildren are teenagers now and no longer
run their little fingers through village snow.
I'll share an example. Outside my kitchen window is a one-antlered reindeer made of small logs and twigs with a tassel nose and google eyes. It was given to me by my daughter when she was twelve. Right before Christmas that year she got mad at me about something and said she would return my Christmas present, except she'd broken it and couldn't. She's a grown woman now with teenagers of her own. I'm proud of the person she is, of her strong faith and love for her family and yes, her love for me. If you're a mom, perhaps you can identify with a mother-child conflict that could lead to this scenario. 

I cherish that little reindeer. Some days the memory he evokes makes me laugh. Other days, when I'm feeling nostalgic, the memory bring tears to my eyes, as it does now. 
This is my broken Christmas gift 

As I type this, tears flood my eyes and start running down the back of my throat. My nose is running and I've got this awful lump wedged in my throat. Now I'm feeling ridiculous and laughing like a nincompoop, but the tears are still there. Cause you know what? I miss that young girl. 

But time flies and there's no going back. Except in our memories. I may never use that a little one-antlered reindeer in a story, but don't want to waste the emotion it triggered. Give your readers that same experience by utilizing what creates emotion in you, and they'll love you for it. 

For many of us, the older we get the more nostalgic we become. At least that's true of me. If you're young with small children, immersed in the busyness of daily life, you may not "get" this post at all. If so, talk to a parent, listen to their ornament induced memories and borrow that emotion to enrich your stories. 

I realize for some that memories of the past hurt, especially at Christmas, and it's too painful to go back there. If so, my prayer is that God will give you peace that passes understanding this Christmas.      

Readers and writers, what in your decorated house evokes emotion? Share in the comments for a chance to win an eCopy of my heartwarming novella "A Daddy for Christmas" and a $10 Amazon gift card.


When Rafe Rafferty discovers he’s a father, he returns to Bountiful, Indiana, to marry the mother, only to learn she died after childbirth and her sister Tess is raising his child. Rafe falls head over heels for his daughter and for Tess Russo, a woman who doesn’t trust easily. Especially the man she thinks abandoned her sister. Can Rafe prove he’s worthy and conquer the protective walls Tess has built around her heart?       
For breakfast I've brought homemade coffeecake, egg bake, cinnamon apples, coffee and tea. 

Janet Dean grew up in a family who cherished the past and had a strong creative streak. Her father recounted fascinating stories, like his father before him. The tales they told instilled in Janet a love of history and the desire to write. Janet is a two-time Golden Heart finalist, Genesis and Carol finalist and a member of Romance Writers of America and American Christian Fiction Writers. Her Love Inspired Historical novels are also Golden Quill, Gayle Wilson Award of Excellence, Booksellers Best, Inspirational Readers Choice Award and Holt Medallion finalists.     

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  1. I still have some of my now-grown kids decorations they made when they were younger to hang on the tree. Some of the evoke so much emotion on how I miss those days when they were kids and how much love they put into them. Those are the most precious decorations adorning my tree :-)

    I think my most treasured ones are the handmade photo frames with their pictures in them from some long ago elementary school grade! Oh my goodness my heart just melts all over again :-)

    Thanks for sharing your precious reindeer memory Janet! I can just see it in your yard from the picture and how it would bring back so many thoughts and emotions. I think writers can use those special things to bring out the same emotions in their writing just like you posted here. Christmas is just about the most perfect time to bring them out too!

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    1. Trixi, thank you for sharing the impact of the Christmas decorations in your house, especially those made by your children. We moms are sentimental and it's a blessing to see their young faces adorning our tree. i remember how excited they were for us to open their handmade gifts. Wow, I'm tearing up again. I may be ready for the men with the white coats. LOL

      I wish you a very Merry Christmas with those grownup kids.

      Janet

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    2. Trixi, every year our daughters' handmade frames with their elementary school photos go on our tree. They made them with Mason jar lids and tied green "velvet" ribbon around the rims. Our girls are grace-filled, God-loving women in their 40s now, but I still love remembering the precious little girls they used to be.

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  2. Hi Janet:

    This post 'turned the lights on'!

    Just as 'crystal clear' writing will provide the reader with just the meaning the writer intended, so too, will 'crystal clear emoting'.

    Think of it this way: five people can look at a scene and see five different things. Their mind edits what's important to them. Often they see what they expected to see.That's why eye-witnesses to the same crime can have very different takes on the same event. That's just the way real-time, real life, really is. For the writer that's not good enough. You don't want each reader to come up with a different idea about what happened in a scene. You want them all to get the same basic idea with its emotional and sensory impact. That's skillful editing. That's like crystal clear prose with its single meaning.

    The way to do this, while very difficult, is to skillfully five-sense your copy and to use unmistakable emotional triggers and physical proxies for those intended emotions. For example, most all humans would have similar gut feelings on seeing a innocent puppy kicked.

    To your excellent post I would add the use of physical proxies -- physical positions the body takes and facial expressions, etc. -- and thus, as you are noticing your reaction to emotion causing Christmas decorations, also take note of the position your body is in at the time. There are whole books on reading body language. Learn to notice and read that corresponding body language and use this info to create crystal clear sensing and emoting.

    Do you think this could really be done? Right now it is philosophy which is what I do. :)



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    1. Vince, writers certainly do want the reader to get the intended emotional reaction from a scene. Though readers bring their own experiences to the story that impact the way they react emotionally. I'm sure someone reading this post who isn't sentimental and perhaps hasn't had strong family ties, would not "get" it.

      I agree that noticing our facial expressions and body language would be a big asset to help us write the emotional reaction. Julie writes in front of a mirror so she can describe what's happening on her face during an emotional scene. Writer would need to remember that the Point of View character couldn't see his expressions so we have to be careful with describing them in his thoughts.

      You make an excellent point on the value of noticing the position of our bodies. We can note the body language of others, too, and record them. Writers are students of human nature.

      Thanks for sharing these great points!

      Merry Christmas!
      Janet

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    2. Hi Janet:

      Love the idea of writing before a mirror. It's like the theory behind 'method' acting when the actor actually 'feels' the character's pain. There's a saying, "Your actions are screaming so loudly I can't hear what you are saying." What does a person's body language look like when we are sure they are lying? This would be handy to know if the writer wanted the reader to feel that a character is lying -- even when his story seems convincing. Maybe writers would benefit by reading "The Hidden Persuaders".

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    3. Vince, I think writers would benefit from reading "The Hidden Persuaders." I've read that liars blink rapidly, cover their mouths, dart their tongues, flush, fake coughs, have shifty eyes, pull at their collar, etc.

      Janet

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  3. Janet, I love your dad's hat and tie. What rich memories! Merry Christmas.

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    1. Tina, we all have memories but time really heightens them.

      Merry Christmas!
      Janet

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  4. What a great post Janet...and your little reindeer is adorable.

    Right now the things in my house that evoke emotion are the boxes sitting on the floor in my kitchen because I am having difficulty going through them. The contents were all my Mom's and it's just really been hard to go through them. But next weekend, after I finish my baking, that is what I will be tackling. I'm already shedding tears daily because it's our first Christmas without Mom, so I decided I might as well plow in and start going through everything.

    Blessings,
    Cindy W.

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    1. Cindy, my heart goes out to you during this first Christmas without your precious mom. As you go through her things, I hope your tears will be healing. I'm so thankful to have had a wonderful mom, too. Grieving is hard, but we're blessed to have had them.

      Hugs,
      Janet

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  5. Oh, Janet, what a heartfelt post! Thank you for this... and for sharing that reindeer and his/her story. And you're not a nincompoop... you're a mom with a heart of gold. I love my big tree filled with homemade ornaments that span three generations... nothing fancy. Just simple and good.... and it makes me get teary-eyed, every single year!

    Thank you for this!

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    1. Ruthy, we love our kids so much. I don't believe they truly understand how much until they have kids of their own. Then we've got those children to love and fret over. We're blessed.

      Merry Christmas!
      Janet

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  6. Thanks for the beautiful and sentimental post. We don’t decorate the house much, though my oldest daughter really wants to every year. I just never get around to decorating the house except for getting the tree up and hanging the Christmas cards we receive. I love looking at the cards hung by our living room mantle and remembering all of our friends and family, near and far.

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    1. MH, thank you for the reminder that the Christmas cards we receive can trigger emotional memories of those we care about. They're so varied and pretty, too.

      Merry Christmas!
      Janet

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  7. What a beautiful post, Janet. I love your reindeer.
    In our house, it's not only the decorations that evokes so much emotion, it's the Christmas music as well. Even listening to Gene Audry's Rudolph the Red Nosed Reindeer can make me cry. :) Everything about Christmas makes me sentimental. Merry Christmas!

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    1. Jill, ah, Gene Audry's Rudolph is a classic from childhood. I've read that memories of music stick the longest. I always get teary when listening to the Hallelujah chorus, especially at a concert when everyone stands.

      I have a memory of myself as a kid on Christmas Eve so excited that I was jumping around on my bed. My mom was beside my bed, probably trying to "talk me down" but it's a sweet memory of a simpler time when the anticipation for the arrival of Santa was paramount. Now it's the thrill of the Babe in the manger and time with family.

      Merry Christmas!
      Janet

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  8. This is so true. So many emotions. I am so grateful the space heaters are working this morning. Wonderful blessed heat. I will be going with the senior citizens of my church to a large gingerbread display this morning. The Lord is good.

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    1. Wilani, enjoy the gingerbread house display! I've been to one and the creativity and artistry are amazing!

      Merry Christmas!
      Janet

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  9. I enjoyed this post. I love your reindeer. It's Snowman anything for me. I have a few ornaments from when I babysat that the kids made or picked out for me. Some are 25 yes old but it wouldn't be Christmas tree without them.

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    1. Cathyann, thanks for sharing your love of snowmen and the ornaments you received from the kids you babysat that adorn your tree.

      Merry Christmas!
      Janet

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  10. Oh, Janet!

    I love your post. AND how you remember your Dad using the necktie and Santa hat on the staircase end post. Cute, cute, cute!

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    1. Rose, thank you. They make me feel that he's there with us. He also wore red suede shoes at Christmas. I have no idea where he got them as we were away from home by then. One year my brothers wrapped up those shoes and he couldn't find them. They were the first gift he opened and he laughed, enjoying the prank.

      Merry Christmas!
      Janet

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  11. Hi Janet,
    Thank you for sharing your precious Christmas memories. I am a sensory person too, so you are speaking my language.
    Decorating the house is one of the things I enjoy most at Christmas. I have many things that evoke strong memories, the oldest are some of my Mom's toys from 1940. I have a doll, a rolling pin and board for dough and a wooden bowl and cup. I set them out around my small kitchen tree and think of her as an 8 year old playing with them.
    I also have my own red stocking with a Santa sitting on a train that's more than 50 years old.
    I have a 6" fat Frosty the Snowman candle that I bought the first year I married that will be 44 years old this Christmas.
    I won't even go into all the stuff from my children, but I guess you can see I'm very sentimental about Christmas and my memories of the wonderful times I've had, including the birth of my middle daughter Noelle on Christmas day in 1978!
    Now I'm joining you in need of a tissue, nostalgia reigns! I'll just go and have some of your breakfast with my coffee now!
    Merry Christmas to you and your family Janet!

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    1. Tracey, thank you for sharing your lovely mementos and memories! They're all precious, especially the gift of a baby on Christmas Day. Noelle is such a lovely, appropriate name. I have a friend Carol that was born on Christmas Day.

      Merry Christmas!
      Janet

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  12. Janet--thank you so much for sharing your beautifully decorated home and sweet Christmas memories with us. And reminding us that as writers we can touch the hearts of others by evoking the senses and tapping into their own memories through what we share in our stories. May you have an EXTRA special Christmas this year. Janet!

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    1. Glynna, thank you. Wishing you a very special Christmas celebrating our Savior's birth with family and your church.

      Merry Christmas.
      Janet

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  13. Loved this post, Janet. I love decorating for Christmas. Among my most meaningful is my Angel Tree. This tree sits in the living room and is more formal than the one in the family room, which has a variety of decorations. But the Angel Tree has white lights, gold and silver balls, and angel decorations. This tree is to honor the memory of our daughter who died at the age of 17 months nearly 27 years ago. At the top of the tree is an angel that lights up and flashes on and off.

    Of course, I also love the ornaments my son made during his younger years.

    I have already read A Daddy for Christmas but would love an Amazon card!

    Merry Christmas to you, Janet.

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    1. Sandy, your angel tree sounds absolutely beautiful. What a lovely way to honor the memory of your precious baby girl who lives on in your hearts.

      Merry Christmas, Sandy!
      Janet

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  14. Merry Christmas, Janet and all of Seekerville!

    Love your reindeer. We had one like that at some point. This year we have very few decorations because we have clever and destructive young cats. But I keep a basket of Christmas cards and pray over the senders each day and that evokes emotion.

    May God bless you and all of Seekerville!

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    1. Phyllis, praying over the senders of your Christmas cards is a precious tradition and a blessing for the senders.

      Curl up with those kitties and enjoy Christmas, even if it means fewer decorations.

      Janet

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  15. Oh, Janet, what a LOVELY post, my friend, and SO incredibly unique!! Comparing writing to Christmas decorations is a truly brilliant -- and VERY fun -- idea!!

    First off, your decorations are GORGEOUS!! The tie and Santa hat on the newel post are GENIUS -- LOVE IT!! Soooooo simple and yet soooooo creative!!

    The three-legged reindeer got to me BIG TIME, causing me to tear up too -- what a precious memory! Did your daughter make the reindeer? How did the leg get broken? See? You've really piqued my curiosity with that adorable story!

    Janet, this is the perfect post for a Monday morning, my friend -- very uplifting! I seldom get to Seeker posts on Mondays till much later because even with working at home, I get that dreaded Monday syndrome where I'm tired and trying to catch up from a weekend of fun (and very little writing/emails/career work).

    I am now looking at my decorations in a whole new light because of this -- and the significance they hold to writing -- so THANK YOU!!

    HUGS!!
    Julie

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    1. Julie, thanks for your sweet words and interest in the reindeer. Actually his antler was what was broken. Not sure but she may have broken it getting it home or wrapping it. Whatever happened, I'm grateful she couldn't take it back. The store sold unique decorations at Christmas but also furniture. It was located in a strip mall close to our neighborhood. I'm not sure now if her father took her or if she was allowed to walk.

      Janet

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  16. Whoops ... I forgot to answer your question. See? Monday Syndrome!!

    You said: "I may never use that little one-antlered reindeer in a story, but don't want to waste the emotion it triggered. Give your readers that same experience by utilizing what creates emotion in you, and they'll love you for it. Readers and writers, what in your decorated house evokes emotion?"

    Well, obviously the ornaments the kids made over the years always flood me with precious memories, but because of your post, I am realizing that so many more of my decorations do the same!

    Over the last three years, we have downsized considerably by moving to a lake town home, so many of my decorations are still in storage or given away. But the ones I kept all hold precious memories, such as a very simple wooden pre-Nativity scene that's made from one flat 2"x4". Mary's on a donkey behind Joseph, who is leading the animal via a piece of crude twine. You might say it's a very primitive, simplistic carving, almost child-like, but it's narrow enough to fit on my kitchen windowsill, so that secures a prominent place on my VERY narrow window ledge. As I do dishes, I always reflect on the Nativity and think of the dear friend who gave it to me.

    Also, I always love to hang garland and twinkle lights on the mantle with various Christmas cards from people strewn along the greenery. I STILL have cards from loved ones who have gone home to heaven that I have saved to hang on the boughs, too, which is my simple way of keeping their memory alive at Christmas.

    Beautiful post, my friend. I wish you and yours a happy, healthy, and holy holiday season! ❤️

    HUGS!!
    Julie

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    1. Julie, your primitive nativity sounds delightful and a perfect location to remind you of the Reason we celebrate. The idea of downsizing our decorations makes me cringe, but I know it'll happen one day when we downsize.

      I love that you decorate your mantle with Christmas cards from family members gone on to Heaven!

      Thanks for sharing! Merry Christmas!
      Janet

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  17. Oh Janet, I love seeing all of your decorations. And what a great idea to use all the memories and emotions to fill in your stories. Now I know your secret because your characters are always so full of emotion. Happy holiday season.

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    1. Sandra, you're a blessing! Thanks. Actually this is a new idea to record that emotion I seem to bubble over with at Christmas to help me write emotional scenes. And to remind me that the little things, the details, carry a wallop of emotion.

      Merry Christmas!
      Janet

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  18. Janet, your log reindeer put a lump in my throat and tears in my eyes! So your writing about did evoke that emotion in me. Great writing!

    You've inspired me today to head back to my WIP and to really dig deep to do this.

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    1. Missy, you're an emotional person, easy to bring to tears. LOL But you're right. The secret is digging deep, isn't it? And that's hard to do when we're under deadlines or trying to edit as we go--ugh, that's my problem.

      Merry Christmas!
      Janet

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    2. LOL, yeah, I cry when watching commercials. :) And I nearly fell apart yesterday while our choir was singing along with the kids and youth choirs. Their sweet voices... oh, my. I was a weepy, lip-quivering mess.

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    3. Missy, that just proves you're a warm, sensitive soul. Not that we needed proof! I'm sure the choirs had the same effect on the other listeners. Were you able to sing?

      Hugs, Janet

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  19. Beautiful post, Janet! White lights remind me that I've been washed clean by the blood of the Lamb.

    Please enter me in the drawing.

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    1. Caryl, I've never thought of the white lights as a reminder of being washed clean but now I will. Thank you!

      Merry Christmas!
      Janet

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  20. A perfect post for the week before Christmas, Janet! As others have said, my eyes teared up as I read this, especially the part about the reindeer. That HAS to go into a story someday!

    After our daughter and family moved overseas last summer, I wasn't sure could bear putting up Christmas decorations knowing it would just be Project Guy and me for the holidays. But Thanksgiving weekend found us hauling down boxes, decorating the tree, and arranging my village and nativity scenes. With Christmas music playing, I'd decorate a little, then cry a little, then decorate some more, cry some more . . . . It was a bittersweet experience, but I'm glad we did it, especially when I'd come across something that carries special memories of a daughter or grandchild.

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    1. Myra, being separated from our family is so hard anytime but especially at Christmas. All those precious decorations connect you to wonderful times and the love you've shared.
      Know you'll write a story one day and use all the emotion you're feeling now.

      Hugs and Merry Christmas!
      Janet

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    2. Oh, Myra, my heart aches for you. I hope you're blessed by the presence of friends and your church family this Christmas. Will you get to see your other daughter's family at the holidays?

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    3. No, Missy, a wintertime trip to Montana just isn't happening--LOL! We'll see them in May, though, for #3 grandson's high school graduation.

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    4. Myra, wow, another graduate come May. Those grandkids grow up so quickly!

      Janet

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  21. Like your reindeer, I love the ornaments my boys made for me. I especially love the ones their teachers had them make with their picture incorporated into the ornament.

    Your Christmas village looks perfect with the picture framed over it and the big tree beside it. Nice job!

    Janet, congrats on your Christmas book! It sounds like a great story.

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    1. Jackie, thanks! I guess all of us moms value anything made by our kids, then and now. My child's photo ornament has yarn wrapped around it. So sweet.

      Merry Christmas!
      Janet

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  22. Oh, yes, that reindeer did it for me, Janet. Good memories, though. I lost all the decorations my only child made for me in a fire in 2012 along with everything else I owned, but the memories live on in my heart. The only sad part is that I don't have anything to pass on to her. Of course, she says, "I would rather have you more than anything else".

    Praise the Lord for still blessing me with a clear mind to remember all those good times and be thankful for them.

    May God Bless all of you at this holy time, and heal all your hurts by surrounding you with loved ones to hold dear and precious memories to live on in your hearts.

    Merry Christmas and Happy New Year. Can't wait for the party!

    Blessings,

    Marcia

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    1. Marcia, I'm so very sorry about that fire and all you lost but I agree with your daughter that the most important thing is she didn't lose you! Yes, our memories live on without needing any memento to trigger them. Like you, I'm grateful for my ability to remember.

      Thank you for the beautiful blessing for us all. I wish you the same.

      Merry Christmas!
      Janet

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  23. Beautiful post, Janet!

    Christmas always evokes a lot of emotions, doesn't it? From favorite decorations to songs. Even the aroma of sugar cookies baking takes me back to when I was a girl, baking cookies with my mom.

    I was reading a book to my Sunday School class yesterday (four and five year olds, all boys!), and one of the lines brought tears...a remembered memory...another time. I had to tell the boys that tears don't only come when you're sad, but sometimes when you're happy. I think it might have opened up a whole new world to them.... ;-)

    Okay, now to your question... The decorations that evoke the most emotion are some old pictures we had printed out and framed a few years ago. They're pictures from Christmases past, when our four children were young. There's just something about knowing how swiftly the years have flown by that touches me every time I look at them.

    And yes, I'll use that emotion in a story very soon!

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    1. Jan, I can picture you tearing up before those sweet little boys and expanding their emotional worlds. :-) God bless you.

      Oh, I love that you framed those photos of your kids from Christmases long ago and your readers will too. You've made me want to go through all those albums and find some I can enlarge and print.

      Merry Christmas!
      Janet

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  24. Hi Janet
    You got me misty eyed with the broken reindeer story. I insert Guppy and me into the picture and *blink* *blink* I feel the emotions. I do believe that having children does heighten the excitement and emotions of Christmas for people. (although, when i was still single and childless and um... mature in years i might have bristled at my last sentence because I had a good bit of nostalgia of my own because of good family Christmas memories even without having husband or child)

    One memory I have from childhood surrounds my Grandparent's home in the mountains of Colorado. Christmas eve would find Grandpa, Uncle and Daddy taking the kids out for a moonlit walk while Grandma, Aunt and Mommy would quick break out all the gifts from hiding and place them under the tree. Then they would turn on the back porch light (a red lightbulb just for the season) to signal it was time for the children to return.
    I cried one Christmas because they turned off that red light too soon for me to see Rudolph's red nose as the reindeer and Santa went on their way delivering gifts.

    I so miss that mountain home. So many good memories at Bergheim (the name my very German grandparents dubbed it).

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    1. DebH, thanks for sharing that sweet childhood memory! You've described a beautiful setting for a Christmas story. I love the image you've given of you, the little girl weeping because she missed Rudolph.

      Merry Christmas to you. And to Guppy! I'm sure these are exciting days for him.

      Janet

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  25. Hi Janet:

    I'm fascinated by your Dickens village. I have not seen anyone do that in the homes I've been in. Is that a southern thing or a literary thing? It makes me think of the ending to "A Christmas Carol" with Scrooge doing nice things and people reacting with all kinds of emotions. People who do animations have to be experts at body 'language = emotions' as can be scene in this clip:

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yW9xLzZVxX8

    and of course the ending of George C. Scott's "Christmas Carol" has lots of great body language for a wide range of emotions.

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    1. Hi Vince,

      I really enjoy my Dickens Village houses and accessories that I've gotten as gifts for years. I'm not from the south but some of the houses and figurines are right out of The Christmas Carol with Scrooge and his house and workplace and the Cratchits and their house. Only one of my houses is from that collection. Most of mine are shops. I have a printer and bookshop, of course. :-)

      Thanks for sharing the final scene of the animated Christmas Carol! Amazing emotion from these animated characters! Have you seen "The Man Who Invented Christmas?" I hope to! I think it will be fun for writers to see!

      Janet

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    2. Hi: Now I'd like to get a set of those shops. I wonder if there were train stations in Dickens time.

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    3. Hi Janet:

      Oh my, I always thought that "The Man Who Invented Christmas" was an atheist book about how Christmas is all a fairy tale! I've been avoiding it! I didn't know it was Dickens! Watch out for those titles that have unclear meanings!!! I just got the ebook for my Kindle at our Library but they don't have the movie. I'll have to rent it. Seekerville is a great place to learn new things.

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    4. Janet, I have a village of It's a Wonderful Life. I think a Dickens village would be neat to have.

      I have seen The Man Who Invented Christmas. It is a great writer movie. In one scene his agent keeps asking him "why" when Dickens is discussing how Scrooge hates Christmas. He eventually gets him to the heart of his motivation. Great scene.

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    5. Hi Vince, I'm not sure about the train stations during Dickens time but the large building is Victoria Station. I'll have to check on the date of its existence. These are Department 56 Dickens Village pieces. They're still sold new but can be bought on eBay if you're interested.

      The Man Who Invented Christmas is about Dickens writing The Christmas Carol. I suspect you'd like it, though I haven't seen it. I believe Missy has. Charles Dickens is desperate for money and is sweating coming up with a story.

      Here's the trailer:

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nx3ctBjG6yI

      Janet

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    6. Sandy, I thought it would be especially fun for writers. So good to hear you enjoyed it!

      Janet

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  26. Love this post, Janet!! This is so true about decorations eliciting emotions. I'm hoping to decorate for Christmas sometime this week. The water damage in our house has kept me from decorating, but the remodel is winding down, so it's time to put the tree and decorations up. I still put the decorations the kids made on the tree and some that I had as a kid.

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    1. Sally, I'm so sorry about your water damage. Glad your life is getting back to normal and you can decorate. If you return, tell me what decorations you have from your childhood.

      I don't have childhood decorations but I do have Christmas cards I made my parents. I must dig them out.

      We've taken our grandkids Hallmark ornament shopping since they were little so they'll have the ornaments they picked out to take to their first home. The boys will have a lot of superheroes on their trees. :-)

      Merry Christmas!
      Janet

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    2. one decoration is a musical Mary Joseph and baby Jesus. another is a felt drum. I'm not sure where they came from but i remember them from growing up. I'll have to look on mom's tree when I go home this weekend. she still puts several ornaments that i remember from back then on her tree.

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    3. Sally, your decorations sound great! Enjoy studying the ornaments on your mother's tree.

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  27. Merry Christmas, Janet & Seekerville friends! Thank you for this journey of the senses, Janet. Your decor is stunning. A few years ago I somehow transformed from the girl who decorated very little (because I test undecorating after the season) to now having seven Christmas trees (3 ft. to 9 ft.), which has somehow happened over the last few years. But my favorite part of decorating is putting ornaments on the tree in our family room. Every ornament was made by one of my daughters (now 18 and 21) or given to me by a student, or were gifts from friends and family. We also have one ornament from each of our grandparents' trees and our parents' trees. Decorating that tree triggers so many memories and emotions, and it's one of the activities I most look forward to during the season. Actually, we just decorated it last night because the girls are home from college and we finally had a moment when we were all home at the same time. :)

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    1. Karen, I'm blown away by your seven Christmas trees. I'm sure they're beautiful! Your family room tree must be magnificent with all those personal ornaments gracing its branches. Glad your college kids are home and got to share in the fun!

      Merry Christmas!
      Janet

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    2. Karen, my daughter is home now as well and I'm hoping we'll get a chance to do a little more decorating. However, right now we're leaning toward baking instead! :)

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    3. Missy, baking impacts the senses in a huge way! Especially those taste buds!

      Janet

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    4. Missy, I wasn't much of a decorator, but now I am. I'm not a baker...but maybe there's hope for me there, too! Enjoy making memories (and goodies!) with your daughter!

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  28. I have many crocheted Christmas pieces that my mother made - coasters, place mats, doilies...the list could go on. When I look at these, I can see my mom sitting in her recliner, crocheting. These pieces also remind me of how much she loved to decorate and entertain. She would start decorating the day after Thanksgiving - sometimes even on Thanksgiving night. But most of all, they remind me of how she (and my dad) always lived their lives for God as an example to my sister and me.

    Janet, a wonderful, thought-provoking post!

    Blessings to all!

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    1. Edwina, thank you for sharing the mementos that trigger memories of your parents and their strong faith.

      Merry Christmas!
      Janet

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  29. Janet, what a great post! I love the picture of your Christmas village...it reminded me of my own we were putting out for so many years, but sold everything at the yard sale this summer. I feel sad now... Hope, someone enjoys it as we did though :)
    Merry Christmas and Blessings!

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    1. Natalya, I'm sure whoever bought your village is enjoying it immensely! It does take a lot of time to set up and a safe place to store them. For the kid in me, setting up the village is like playing with a grownup doll house multiplied many times over. :-)

      Merry Christmas!
      Janet

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  30. Thank you, Janet, for sharing your precious Christmas memories. Handmade ornaments, ornaments we bought with the year printed on it, and now ornaments made by grandchildren...all tell the story of our married life. Some happy memories, some sad, but all weave a tapestry of God's love. Merry Christmas to all!

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    1. Barbara, beautifully said! We've got a lot to be grateful for, don't we?

      Merry Christmas!
      Janet

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  31. I have a tin Schoolhouse (dollhouse) that was a complete surprise when I was in the 3rd grade. Many of the pieces are missing but I still remember my joy when I found it under the tree. Thanks for sharing the pictures of your beautiful decorations.
    Merry Christmas!
    Connie
    cps1950(at)gmail(dot)com

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    1. Connie, that schoolhouse had to give you a lot of pleasure as a little girl. I'm so glad you still have it!

      Merry Christmas!
      Janet

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  32. Janet, such a lovely post and lovely writing. You had me in tears too! So touching to have the hat and tie your dad wore each Christmas. What treasures!

    I'm late to the blog today. We just got home from visiting our eldest daughter and her family. Yesterday we were with them to celebrate my husband's birthday and then spent the night. The girls shopped this morning before we drove home through Atlanta traffic!

    I have a Saint Nickolas that I got when we lived in Germany that's very special to us. Also, the Nativity stable and figurines we bought for our very first Christmas. Decorations from our travels. Many ornaments handmade by our children and grandchildren.

    I love having the house decorated! It looks so festive and inviting this time of year!

    Merry Christmas!

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    1. Debby, I'm so glad you were able to celebrate your hubby's birthday with your family.

      With a German origin, I'm suspecting your Santa is hand carved and beautiful. Nativity scenes are lovely. Always.

      Merry Christmas!
      Janet

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    2. Debby, I'm glad you got to visit with the kids! It's so nice to see family at the holidays.

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  33. Loved your post, Janet. (wiping tears!) Hope you and your family have a blessed and Merry Christmas! Thanks for your giveaway of your book and gift card!

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    1. Jackie, thank you!

      Merry Christmas to you and your family!
      Janet

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  34. I never thought of using my Christmas decorations as a way to help me describe emotion. I'm definitely going to have to try this out.

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    1. Nicki, let us know how it goes.

      Merry Christmas!
      Janet

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  35. Janet, your Christmas decorations are gorgeous, and I can easily see how they evoke so many emotions. Great post!

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    1. Pam, thank you! It's the memories that they elicit that makes viewing them emotional.

      Merry Christmas!
      Janet

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  36. Oh Janet you totally warmed my heart. I love the pictures you have shared and the warm memories!

    I am afraid my home is not decorated this Christmas. We only moved in recently and there are so many boxes still to be opened. We are also only here for a year and then it will be on to hunt to buy a house. The one decoration that is up is a little retro trailer. Maybe a Shasta. My dream is to own one some day and this one was sent to me by my best friend who is back in Arizona. When I see it, I smile. I also get choked up because I am in a new state and although I have my husband, I miss my bestie.
    I should add that I am playing Christmas music and watching sappy sweet Hallmark movies. I am not depressed. It just kind of sounds like it.

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    1. Kelly, moving is tough, especially when leaving dear friends or family behind. I'm glad you have your little trailer, Christmas music and Hallmark movies to put you into the Christmas spirit.

      Janet

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  37. Janet, thank you for asking us to go look at our Christmas decorations. I think so often I pass them without looking at them or thinking about the meaning behind them. I love my It's a Wonderful Life village, and how so many people in my family looked everywhere so they could buy the houses for me. I love how your post also made me think of how we, as writers, can see something through the eyes of our hero or heroine about the other. My husband always puts out a Mr. and Mrs. Claus that belonged to his grandparents, and that reminds me of how I can see something special for the other character through the eyes of the hero or heroine. Thanks, Janet.

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    1. Tanya, we can forget to really look at the things around us. When we do, we may just be surprised by their impact. Especially the people we love.

      I've not seen It's a Wonderful Life village but I love the movie and know I'd love recreating the town and the people who populated it! Especially Clarence. :-)

      The Santa and Mrs. Claus that belonged to your husband's grandparents are such a great keepsake that no doubt stir a lot of memories in your hubby.

      Merry Christmas!
      Janet

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  38. Janet, what a beautiful post! I so agree about being more nostalgic as we get older.
    You offered some great suggestions for adding emotion and senses to our writing---thank you.
    Sorry my comment is so late---busy day, then out to eat for my wedding anniversary.
    Christmas Hugs, Patti Jo

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    1. Patti Jo, happy anniversary!! Sounds like you had a lovely day. Life is busy, especially this close to Christmas.

      God bless you.
      Merry Christmas!
      Janet

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  39. I have Christmas decorations that the children made many, many years ago. They are the stuff of memories.

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    1. Mary P, isn't it fun to see that anything our children made is precious. That was true then, and even more so now.

      Merry Christmas!
      Janet

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  40. For me, it'd be some of my decorations, which include ornaments that used to be on my grandparents' tree and ornaments my former students made for me.

    Please throw my name in the drawing. Thanks!

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    1. Leslie, you're blessed to have your grandparents' ornaments and students who obviously appreciated you as a teacher!

      Merry Christmas!
      Janet

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  41. That sounds like a great writing exercise! the decorations that evoke emotion in me are my porcelain nativity and the sweet angel ornament from my childhood.

    Please enter me in your giveaway! :)

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    1. Heidi, porcelain nativities are so beautiful. It makes me smile that you have an angel ornament from your childhood.

      Merry Christmas!
      Janet

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