In honor of our birthday, I've asked these wonderful authors to share the best writing craft tip they ever received.
Laura Scott: My best craft tip is to consider each protagonist's goal, motivation and conflict for the story. External goals drive your plot and internal goals drive the romance. If you can nail your characters internal and external conflicts your story will write itself! (Okay not really, but you'll have a good start.)
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Jan Drexler: My number one craft tip: You can't edit words you haven't written. Just get them down and fix them later. (Seekerville)
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Regina Scott: The best advice I ever received on craft is to know your core story. As writers, particular themes and ideas call to us. Across everything we write, there is a core truth. Mine is realizing your place in the world, how you can contribute. Once I recognized that, I could go deeper with my writing, shine the light on stories that had been only glimmers. Knowing my core story helped me understand who I am as a writer.
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Denise Hunter: The best craft tip I ever received is pretty simple: get into and out of your scenes as quickly as possible. When you do anything else you risk boring the reader. Of course, one needs to set the scene. Give the reader an idea of who’s there and where “there” is. But that can usually be done in a few sentences. Come into a scene too early and we make the reader weed through a bunch of needless information. Same thing when it’s on the back end of the scene. Get in, accomplish your scene goal, and get out. It'll keep your story clipping along at a nice, brisk pace.
Rhonda Gibson: Lauraine Snelling shared this tip with me. Keep a notebook of the book you are currently working on. Or a notebook with your ideas in it. I keep one notebook with my current book that I'm working on and I have a divider at the back with a section called 'Future Ideas' at the back. This notebook has been a lifesaver for me. I can take it everywhere
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Sherri Shackelford: Never listen to any piece of advice that says you 'have' to do something. You don't 'have' to write every day to be a writer. You don't 'have' to use hundreds of note cards and fourteen multi-colored sharpies to plot out every sentence of your story. You don't 'have' to use The Hero's Journey, or The 'W' Plot, or the The Snowflake Method. The only thing you 'have' to do is find out what works for you. Your method, your rules, your words. Then remember that your process may change over time, and that's okay too. Your talent doesn't desert you--even on bad days.
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Carol Post: I’ve received lots of great craft tips over the years, but the one that made the biggest difference in my writing came from a contest judge. She said I needed to learn to write in deep point of view. Since I had no idea what it was, I had to google it. There are lots of great articles out there, but one in particular really made it click. I learn well by example, and this article was perfect for that. It started with a scenario in a single sentence. Then that short passage was reworked several times, each time including more depth. The fifth and final attempt pulled me thoroughly into the character’s head. The passage filled a good half page and really came alive, with so much emotion, some great sensory details and even some symbolism. Although I copied and pasted the examples, I wish I had saved the link to the article. I’ve looked for it since to be able to share it and have never found it again. But what I gleaned from that one post pretty much changed my writing overnight.
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Two Bonus Craft Tips because writers can't have too many!
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Debra Clopton: I'm not certain which of these has been most important in my career but both have been instrumental. First, sit in the chair and write. Production has been my friend from day one of my publishing career and it still is. But second, and what I believe everyone needs to know, is the tip my first and long time editor Krista Stroever, advised me soon after she bought me, when edits came in from her or the other editors my main job was to protect my voice. I took that advice and picked my battles carefully, but when it came to changing my voice that was where I stood my ground.
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Lenora Worth:An argument is not conflict. Two people fighting in a scene is not conflict. Conflict is what they are NOT fighting about in the scene, the things they hold back and internalize--that's the conflict.
For a chance to win one of two $10 Amazon gift card, leave a comment. Yes, that's two prizes, one for a writer and one for a reader.
Writers please share the best craft tip you've ever received.
For readers, tell us the best tip you've ever received for doing anything. We all can use good advice!
In honor of our 10th birthday, I brought coffee and tea and trays of ten different cookies. Choose from chocolate chip, oatmeal raisin, snickerdoodle, molasses, sugar, peanut butter, lemon bars, chocolate crinkles, peanut butter blossom and monster cookies.
Loved reading all the craft tips the authors got and incorporated in their own writing journey. I like that you found what works for you and ran with it!
ReplyDeleteHonestly, I have no idea what the best tip is I've ever received. Guess I'll have to check back tomorrow and read the comments. Maybe it will spark something :-)
Toss my name in for the gift card, I can always use more books...haha! Oh, and I'll take one of each of the cookies, minus the oatmeal raisin and chocolate chip. Can't forget the giant glass of milk to wash it all down with...lol!
I'll take Trixi's oatmeal raisin cookie...my favorite!
DeleteTrixi, the early bird catches the cookie. Or maybe I should say the night owl. No need to try to think of the best tip you've ever received. Just a tip for something.
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Debby, I have several favorites on that list. Though chocolate chip is probably #1.
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Debby it's not that I don't like oatmeal cookies, just leave the raisins out :-)
DeleteJanet, I love that Seekerville goes live at 9pm my time! I can comment before I head to bed, which is so much easier for me. I USED to be a night owl when my husband worked a 3-11pm shift years &years ago. As I've gotten older, it's harder to stay up...lol! I go to bed between 9:30 to 10:00 and read for an hour or so.
Trixi, I go to bed early and read too. Seekerville goes live for me at midnight so I post in the morning. So you're neither an early bird or night owl. You're a first class human being!
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Happy Anniversary Seekerville ! Thank you Janet Dean for posting this and everyone who contributed their writing tips. I know an aspiring author who could use them and as a reader I appreciate all of you sharing your knowledge with us.
ReplyDeleteLynne, thanks for passing the tips along!
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Know your antagonist as well as you do your protagonist.
ReplyDeleteThat's one I always have to work to remember. Every person in the scene is, at least in their own mind, the hero or heroine. Nobody goes around being evil for the sake of it. (Well, except for Dr. Horrible but with a name like that I guess you're stuck with being a meanie.)
DeleteI love Dr. Horrible!!!! hahahahaha
DeleteVoni, excellent tip! Our villains need to be as three dimensional as our heroes. Thanks!
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Hi Evelyn. Love that you said every person in the scene is, at least in their own mind, the hero or heroine. That's good to remember in real life too. :-)
DeleteSo who is Dr. Horrible? Is it terribly embarrassing that I don't know?
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Dr. Horrible is the protagonist in an online video that Joss Whedon (of Buffy fame) created. His goal is to join the Evil League of Evil, but he wants to join so he can make the world a better place and also impress the woman he's secretly in love with.
DeleteThe story inverts the traditional roles, with the evil villain being the protagonist while his nemesis is the hero. The hero is totally smarmy but he is very good at striking a noble pose with his hair blowing in the wind.
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Evelyn, thanks for the explanation! Though I couldn't take the time to watch all the video, it was great fun!
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Best Writing tip....When you're stuck on where to go with a story, go do something physical, walk, drive, wash dishes, shower. Shower for me is it. Every time I'm stuck and don't go shower until I'm just frustrated and close down the computer and go shower....I have to go reboot the computer once I get out and write down whatever I just figured out. When I go to be really late and tell my husband I was stuck and had to stay up late after my shower, he now says "Why didn't you just shower earlier?" Why indeed did I not?!
ReplyDeleteMelissa J. The cleanest writer west of the Mississippi!
DeleteI agree, MJ. I'm often inspired in the shower. A noted author once mentioned the negative ions from the water as the reason. Not sure about her theory but flowing water spurs my creativity.
Deletehahahaha, love this. Showers always help. I do some of my best praying and thinking in the shower.
DeleteMelissa, great writing tip! A mundane physical activity seems to fire up the brain's creativity. So is your skin prune-y? :-)
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What about us writers that love to take baths?
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Learn what makes a story move, learn what stops it.
ReplyDeleteStory, first last and always, tell your story.
The best writing is rewriting.
Write everyday
It takes four years of hard work to get a college degree why should learning to write be any easier?
"It takes four years of hard work to get a college degree why should learning to write be any easier?" I never thought of it that way! I like it! ~Susan
DeleteWow, Mary, you've shared some great writing tips! You could teach a college course on writing.
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Susan, Mary's brilliant for sure.
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Oh Mary, thank you so much for the college degree comment. Makes me feel a lot better about my writing journey :)
DeleteMary, love the college analogy. Now I feel my four-year writing journey hasn't been wasted,
DeleteYeah, and then there's graduate school! LOL
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What a great list of craft ideas. Mine may not exactly qualify as craft, but you know what....yes, I think they do!!!
ReplyDeleteMary, yep, I think I do!
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I especially like Sherri's advice about anyone telling you it HAS to be done THIS WAY.
ReplyDeleteBecause.......I tend to be a little free with advice....feel free to ignore me and do what works for YOU!!!
Mary, Sherri was spot on. There's no HAVE to do. But the thing she said that I love the most is: Your talent doesn't desert you even on bad days. Cause there's days I'm sure it has. And that's just insecurity trying to stop me.
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I see writers get 'stuck' because a certain method doesn't work for them, and then they feel like a failure. NOT TRUE! Hobble together what works - and Janet is right - never forget that your talent doesn't desert you!!
DeleteSherri, you're the one who said that first! LOL
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Best writing tips:
ReplyDelete1. Writing consistently improves your writing ability.
2. Edits make your story better.
3. Readers like white space.
Terri, three tips! All three are excellent. Thanks!
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I must say I am particularly enamored of Sherri and Allie's tips. Thank you, ladies.
ReplyDeleteMy craft tip: Consider the source. Don't take craft tips from people who don't know the craft.
Same here. Sherri's tip stopped me. I'm going to use Allie's tip today on a scene I'm struggling with.
DeleteTina, Allie has us digging deep for those gems. Love the idea of surprising, even shocking readers. :-)
DeleteYes, know the source. That's important tip for all advice we get.
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Josee, wishing you the best with that tricky scene. When I struggle, I go back to the POV character's goal. That usually gets me back on track.
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Our joke for Allie's advice was always - when they aliens land, it's time to stop brainstorming! We use her technique and there always comes a point when someone gets desperate and yells, "And then the aliens land!"
DeleteYes, I vote for Sherri and Allie's tips! Freed me up from a lot of brain scrambling!
DeleteI loved reading these tips! I'm a reader so I really enjoy learning more about the process that delivers such wonderful stories to eager readers like me. I'd love to share some words of vast wisdom but I can't really say that I've ever really had any truly great tips and none that have majorly changed my life. Hmmm, now you've got me thinking and I'm going to be wondering about this all night...
ReplyDeleteJasmine, hope you got some sleep! The tip doesn't need to be life altering.
DeleteMy cleaning tip today. When cleaning the toilet, use an OLD toothbrush to clean those hard to get to places around the toilet seat.
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Janet LOL you mean as opposed to using the toothbrush you are using currently on your TEETH!!!???
DeleteMary, I love when my prose is crystal clear. That toothbrush is not going into my mouth. Though once I hid my daughter's toothbrush because she never put it away and I was teaching her a lesson. Three days later, I asked if she'd missed her toothbrush. She said she'd been using mine. Tough to win against a junior high girl.
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All very interesting to this reader thank you. My best tip would have to be to give things a try. Just like the old saying - you never know until you try.
ReplyDeleteMary P, that's a great tip! I think we'd be surprised how much we could do, if we just gave it a try the first time.
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I love all the tips - and the cookies, too! :) I have two non-writing tips for anyone with children in the house or who come to visit.
ReplyDelete1) I've spent my fair share of time separating jigsaw puzzle pieces after a stack of puzzle boxes fell over in our children's toy closet. I bought a covered clear plastic shoe box at the dollar store, cut the picture from a puzzle box and wrote a '1' on the backs of all the pieces and the picture. The pieces went into a ziplock sandwich or quart-sized baggie, depending on the size and amount of pieces, and the baggie and picture went into the shoe box. Continue to number each box and pieces. You can get a lot of children's puzzles in a box, and no more separating lots of puzzle pieces!
2) You may have kitchen hand towels with a crocheted end that button around your oven's handle. They're great for young children who have just started using the bathroom by themselves! Button the kitchen towel onto the bathroom towel rod. The child can't accidentally pull the towel off the rod when drying his or her hands, keeping the towel clean and off the floor. :)
My name is Susan.
DeleteSusan!!! We use those towels in the bathroom downstairs because we've got kids in and out of there and the towel always ends up on the less-than-clean floor! Great advice.
DeleteHi, Ruth! Thanks, I'm glad you've enjoyed using that tip, too!
DeleteSusan, love the puzzle tip. I'll pass it along to my daughter-in-law. My grandson loves puzzles!
DeleteSusan, I love your tips! Wish I'd had them when our kids and grandkids were small!
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It may not be the best but it's the one saving me at the moment. Stop your writing for the day in the middle of something. Mid-scene, mid-sentence, whatever and then make a note of what comes next. That way you've already got a kickstart when you come back to start writing again :)
ReplyDeleteI've heard that tip before and used it when I did NaNoWriMo. It really works! Thanks for the reminder! ~Susan
DeleteGreat tip, Kara. When I was a computer programmer I used to do the same thing. It kept me from floundering in the morning when I got back to work. I never thought to use it in my writing.
DeleteKara, usually I reread the last scene to get back in the flow. That's a great time saver tip. Thanks!
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Glynis, fun to see the tip works in the day job too.
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Kara, I've heard a version of this. The best place to stop for the day is in the middle of a sentence.
DeleteWhat a great post! Definitely a keeper.
ReplyDeleteOne tip that was given to me years ago is, "Just start it or you'll never get anywhere." It works for many things.
Happy 10th Birthday!
Blessings,
Cindy W.
Cindy, if we don't start, we'll never finish, never achieve that dream or unclutter that closet. Love the tip. Thanks! And thanks for the birthday wishes!
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Ooh. Peanut butter blossoms sound so yummy.
ReplyDeleteAs a reader, I've thoroughly enjoyed this post with some of my favorite authors sharing their tips. My tip? Trying to remember this verse in all that I do....."As for me and my house, we will serve the Lord."
MH, I love that Scripture! Thank you for sharing it this morning. It applies to everything we do.
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This is such a great post! One of the best tips I learned many years ago is to write tight.
ReplyDeleteJill, write tight is great advice. I had to delete a ton of words from my debut because Love Inspired Historical line had cut the word count after I sold. I was amazed how easy it was to get rid of 10,000 words.
DeleteThis is a good tip for talking to husbands too. :-)
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My best craft tip was to keep writing. Write daily, ramp up production. If you do that, you START OUT so far ahead of the game that when the door opens, you've got product to sell. What's a pumpkin farm without pumpkins??? A Starbucks without coffee? A grocery without food?
ReplyDeleteIf you don't produce your product, you've got nothing to sell.
GREAT POST, JANET!!!!
Ruthy, you're the poster child for productivity!! Excellent tip!
DeleteI'm thankful that these wonderful authors took their time to share great tips.
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LOL. I love the way you think Ruthy!
DeleteRuthy this reminds me of a bit of wisdom I just read.
DeleteWhen's the best time to plant a tree???
Twenty years ago. :)
Mary, so true! We're going to have three huge evergreens taken down as they're too close together and leaning toward houses, trying to find sunshine. They're twenty years old so we aren't even going to replant.
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One more tip: Beware who you listen to. I see all kinds of folks offering all kinds of advice on facebook, on blogs, and some for payment. THERE IS NO BIG SECRET. There is only writing and practicing and anyone who tells you otherwise is selling something. "Princess Bride" paraphrased...
ReplyDeleteRuthy, yep, there's no short cuts.
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Isn't that the truth - people want the 'secret'. They don't always want to hear that the 'secret' is years and years of hard work and learning! What Mary says above - it's like college.
DeleteGreat post. I'd love to win a gift card.
ReplyDeleteHi Cathy. Thanks!
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Good Morning, Janet!
ReplyDeleteWhat an interesting post this morning. And all those lovely book covers! What a good way to wake up on a Monday!
My best craft tip, it very similar to knowing the core of your story. Mine is know the theme of your story. Is it about forgiveness? Acceptance? Belonging?
Once I know the theme in my story, the words are always easier to write.
Rose, that's a terrific tip! I tend to write the themes of forgiveness and unconditional love. Thanks for the reminder that our theme keeps us on track.
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Great post! One tip I received is to SLOW DOWN. I tend to rush and overlook details.
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Caryl, slow down so you see the details, the things that make life a joy. Your tip reminds me that we need to know who we are. I tend to be slow and need to speed up. :-)
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Daily decisions lead to final destinations, so wise choices are important.
ReplyDeleteThe Psalms and Proverbs are loaded with good advice, but one verse that sums it all up nicely is Proverbs 3:5,6:
Trust in the Lord with all of your heart and lean not on your own understanding, in all of your ways acknowledge Him and He will direct your path.
Praying all the Seekers and Villagers have God directed paths!
Happy 10th Birthday Seekerville, it looks good on you!
Thanks for the prayers, Tracey. Know that your needs are being prayed for as well!
DeleteHi Tracey, that's a beautiful Scripture and one I cling to. Our choices impact everything.
DeleteThanks for the beautiful prayer for our community of readers and writers. You're such a blessing!
Janet
Write a synopsis! Yes, they're often hard to write, but they provide an overview of your story and a map to guide you when you begin to write. You'll find story holes and important story parts that are missing. If your synopsis works, your story will as well. Plus, no sagging middles to worry about if you have a good synopsis.
ReplyDeleteDebby, thanks for the great tip! Not only will our synopsis show us if the story works, it'll help us write it faster.
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These tips are fantastic. I'd say the tip that most changed how I write is to end every paragraph on a hook, no matter how small. Make it imperative for the reader to keep reading.
ReplyDeleteI have no idea where I read it, but it stuck with me.
Josee, every paragraph needs a punch to keep the reader engaged. But it's not easy to do, at least for me. Thanks for the excellent tip!
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Love this one, Josee!
DeleteJanet -- Thank you for sharing the great writerly tips from other authors! I think one of the writing tips shared with me that stuck with me is..."FINISH THE BOOK!"
ReplyDeleteGreat advice, Glynna!
DeleteGlynna, important tip!! Thanks for sharing. I'm guessing there are authors who get discouraged and start another book and another. We have to finish, to force ourselves past that middle or we'll never learn how to put a book together.
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Love all these tips. It's like the ultimate writing workshop in 1000 words. A few others here have offered variations of my favorite:you can fix bad, but you can't fix blank. Write!
ReplyDeleteI need to take my own advice Lol!
Glynis, so true! That tip makes us push on when we feel so discouraged by what we're putting on the page!
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Laura, GMC has made a difference in my work too. I used to just mush around, now my scenss are much more pointed. As Janet would say, NO TEA SCENES!
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Kathy, you made my day with the NO TEA SCENES comment. Thanks! GMC is so important if we want the scene to matter. Go Laura!
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Regina, I totally agree. My core story, the one that runs through everything I've written, is Coming Home -- physically, spiritually, and to the person God means for you to be with.
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Kathy, I love your core story of coming home. That's beautiful.
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Janet, I love all these tips. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteThe best tip I've received so far came from Tina Radcliffe. She said, "There's nothing happening…" It completely changed the way I approach my scenes, particularly the opening scene.
The second best tip came on Seekerville. I think from Julie Lessman first. It made recovering from Tina's tip easier! I'm not sure exactly how it was phrased but— take 24 hours to lick your wounds and then move forward.
Blessings to my favorite group on their tenth birthday!
Barbara, writers are the walking wounded. LOL The reason we need rhino hide to survive.
DeleteYou're a blessing!
Janet
Rhonda, any advice from Lauraine Snelling is worth listening to. One of my favorite authors.
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These are great tips. Thanks Janet. Although I read something to the contrary not long ago that made me think about it some, this is still the writing tip that works best for me: Write like no one is ever going to read it.
ReplyDeleteHi Cindy, do you think this tip is to free us to write the rough draft without revising as we go? If so, I need to grab hold of it!
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Oh, WOW, Janet -- WOW, WOW, WOW!!! What a super-terrific TEN, my friend -- THANK YOU!!
ReplyDeleteALL these tips are golden, but the nuggets that most spoke to me are:
Jan Drexler's -- "My number one craft tip: You can't edit words you haven't written. Just get them down and fix them later. (Seekerville)"
LOL ... short and sweet, my friend -- LOVE IT!!
Sherri, love, Love, LOVE your tip, girlfriend: "Never listen to any piece of advice that says you 'have' to do something."
LOL ... I couldn't agree more ... THANK YOU!!
CATE NOLAN SAID: "She wrote what she loved until she loved what she wrote."
LOL, Cate -- this could be my mantra according to my husband! He thinks I could write three books in the time it takes me to write one, but I DO get to write what I love ... ;)
Hugs and HAPPY TENTH, SEEKERVILLE!!
Julie
Julie, what amazed me is that all the tips are different. That's a God thing for sure. But then I shouldn't be surprised as we writers are all different.
DeleteAs is our call to storytelling! Julie, glad you're free to be the author you're called to be!
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DEBRA CLOPTON SAID: "my main job was to protect my voice. I took that advice and picked my battles carefully, but when it came to changing my voice that was where I stood my ground."
ReplyDeleteEXCELLENT point!! I learned this early in my career when a copy editor took a red pen to my first book, A Passion Most Pure, bleeding my voice, rhythm, intention, you name it -- WITHOUT tracked changes!! She just did it. The only way I figured it out was I was proofing the galleys, and every few sentences or so, I'd jolt, the rhythm so screwed up, I felt like it was fingernails on a blackboard.
I cried for a week before I finally talked to my agent because I thought as a newbie I just had to accept it. Imagine my shock when my editor told me no, that it was MY book and it should read the way I wanted it to read as long as I didn't go against the publisher's policy. It took me almost a week to change everything back that she edited/deleted/added because I had to read my original side-by-side the galleys to do it, but let me tell you -- I was one relieved puppy. ;)
Hugs,
Julie
Hey Julie! I understand your pain :) the book my editor told me that on was book 1 but it was fine. But book 2 the copy editor changed things-and I jumped in there and changed them back. It was such a relief to know I could do that. So I always try to make sure new authors understand they do control that aspect of their work.
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Julie, that's a writer's nightmare! So thankful you got to put it all back, but what a waste of precious time.
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Debra, thanks for reminding us how important voice is. We don't want to all sound the same. Or sound like a copy editor.
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All great tips! Cate Nolan and Lenora Worth's stuck with me - writer's write :) And arguing is *not* conflict. Two very basic things that pack a big punch!!
ReplyDeleteSherri, thanks for sharing the tips that worked for you--besides your own! :-) All of you were so generous to take your time from writing to share a best craft tip!
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How Can You Have 85 Comments
ReplyDeleteand it's not even 9 AM?
It's daunting!
I was thinking the same thing, Vince. I think Janet hit on the perfect topic for birthday month!
DeleteMy thoughts exactly, Vince. I thought I was early today!
DeleteHi Vince, perhaps daunting to read and reply to, but oh, so wonderful because Seekerville is celebrating its 10th birthday. Those ten years have just flown by thanks to wonderful people like you that share our passion for stories.
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Oh, I love this!
ReplyDeleteDenise Hunter said: get into and out of your scenes as quickly as possible.
I can see this makes you stick w/the story and not go down rabbit holes.
Thank you Sherri for telling me I "don't have" to do anything!
Connie, Denise reminded me of the importance of pacing for our stories. And Sherri made us the boss of our process! Who knew?? :-)
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Louise Gouge's "Cowboy Lawman's Christmas Reunion" just gave me an idea for Ruth's next book:
ReplyDelete"The Cowboy Lawman's 1873 Christmas Mystery Wedding Surprise".
Totally doable!
Vince, totally! LOL Waiting for Ruthy to see this. :-)
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These are all great, Janet! I definitely need to go back and reread each one carefully. So much wisdom here!
ReplyDeleteMyra, so true! Do you have a tip to share? There's so many, it's hard to pick the best craft tip. Maybe you have a pet tip. Like how to keep a doggy from eating socks. Can you guess what our grand dog's been doing??
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You stumped me on that one, Janet! I just returned to my office to find one of my doggies chewing up a sticky-note pad!
DeleteAs for a writing tip, hmmm . . .
Know your social media weaknesses and keep them under control. Protect the writing time!
And protect the sticky note pads!
DeleteMyra and Missy, protect the sticky note pads from the doggies and the writing from the time eaters. Lots to protect!
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You can't edit a blank page is the advice that sticks out for me. I always want to quit when the words won't come.
ReplyDeletePlease enter me for a gift card!
Sandy, I hear you. When the words won't flow, it's easy to think of other things that need doing. But maybe doing those things will help. At least Melissa says showers help her.
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I don't like the term "Conflict"…
ReplyDeleteI think Leona Worth makes some important points about what conflict is not. However I don't even like the term 'Conflict' in GMC. Conflict in a story might better be called Obstacles that are keeping the hero and heroine apart.
A physical fight could be an obstacle to the hero and heroine getting together for their HEA. An argument over their different beliefs in God can also be a big obstacle. Sometimes what we call 'conflict' is not between anyone and with all parties on the same side…like the heroine not being able to have children and the hero needing a natural heir to hold his family estate. They love each other and they both agree a marriage is not a possibility. I think of Ruth's "The Lawman's Second Chance" in which the hero lost a wife to breast cancer and the heroine has breast cancer and has seen her husband leave her because he could not live with her disease. This was a great 'conflict' between people who were deeply in love.
I perfer Goal, Motivation, Obsticles.
On this I favor Sherri Shackelford's advice: "Never listen to any piece of advice that says you 'have' to do something." Don't even fall in love with formulations like GMC. Think about it? Does this work for you? Can you think of a better way to make this concept work for you or make more useful sense for you.
This brings me to the best reading advice I ever got: "Have a conversation with the author as you read. Talk back. Even if the author has been dead for 1000 years, if he were here in the room, what would you say to him?" In other words: be an active reader.
Vince
Vince, obstacle in place of conflict works fine. Besides all the external obstacles there's the internal ones, that terrible wound that's festering. Another conflict I love is when the heroine is attracted to the hero, notices something good about him and she lowers her guard, which is the last thing she wants. Ah, the obstacles to the HEA are so much fun!
DeleteIf the story engages us, I think we're all active readers whether we realize it or not. We bring our experiences, hurts, beliefs to the story and that tweaks what the author has put on the page.
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Picking apart books was my early training when I didn't know what else to do. It's a great way to learn, isn't it, Vince? Great point!
ReplyDeleteSherri, Vince always makes great points. Some are even controversial. :-)
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DeleteSeekerville~ Congratulations!!!
ReplyDeleteI wanted to come on today and say a BIG Happy 10th Birthday Seekerville ladies! You are awesome and this is a great blog. I love the community you've created here, it is so special. You're generosity and commitment to writers and readers is wonderful.
Hugs to each of you, keep up the great work!
And thanks so much for including me in the tips Janet!
Debra, thanks for your birthday wishes! It's fun to have you here! Thanks for taking the time from your writing to share the important tip on protecting our voice. Though there was a time I didn't understand the term. LOL
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I love these tips. I remember the first agent to reply to a query suggested I find my voice. I realized he was right. I'd paid an editor and we edited my voice out of the story. Since then, I've tried to be careful to keep my voice.
ReplyDeleteJackie, sad that you paid to lose what made your story unique--your voice. Our stories should have the writer stamped all over them.
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These tips are amazing! The best advice I've received is similar to Sherri Shackelford's -- when you are trying to learn the best way to do something, read as much as you can about the topic, talk to those who know, then do what feels right. If you try to mimic any one style you won't be able to be true to yourself.
ReplyDeleteSusan, beautifully put! I like to look at what works for other writers, but some of the processes feel awkward, even uncomfortable like trying to stuff my feet into too tight shoes. But I've also borrowed some pointers that have enabled me to be more efficient without turning myself inside out.
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Great post and great comments! We hear this advice all the time, but I've really committed to it in the past few months. I've been reading a wide range of genres written by a variety of authors. I study the craft of each author. Reading widely has challenged me to elevate my own craft and has given me lots of great examples to learn from.
ReplyDeleteKaren, excellent tip! Like you, when I read outside of my genre that seems to refill my creative tank and enriches my storytelling. Thanks for sharing!
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Great tips from everyone. I agree to just write.
ReplyDeleteGet.It.Down!
Then fix it.
And, even when the words won't come, write anyway.
Pam, true, true, true! Writers on deadline don't have the luxury of not putting words on the page.
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Wow, there are so many great tips here. I love Allie Pleiter's What If game. Doing that could sure jump start some fresh story ideas.
ReplyDeleteI think the best tip I've received came from Rachel Hauck: "Tell the story between the quotes." If we have things in prose or in internal thoughts that can be put into dialogue, do it. It makes the story flow better, and imagine if some of those thoughts got spoken. What kind of trouble could we cause for our characters?! ;)
Jeanne, that's a fantastic tip! I tend to have my characters thinking too much. I love the trouble speaking their mind can cause.
DeleteAnother fun thing to do is to give the character's thought, then have their words contradict what they really think.
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Jeanne, that's a great one! Went to a workshop Roxanne St. Claire did about that. It was such a great idea! I went and took some of my heroine's internal thoughts (grumpy thoughts about the hero, no less), and made them into dialogue. It turned out to make that scene so fun! :)
DeleteIt's reassuring to hear that you two have tried this and found it effective too. ;)
DeleteJanet, I love that. I'm not very good with subtexting, but it's something I'm working on. :)
Jeanne, Wish there was an end time when we got the diploma and know it all. Never will happen. The more we know, the more we recognize there's more we need to know.
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Wonderful tips! Thank you! Cate, I'm going to put that same sign next to my computer: Writers write! My best tip came, I believe, from my then-future-but-now-current editor. I can't remember exactly what she wrote in that blog post, but my interpretation was to find the goal-motivation-conflict of the villain since he or she drives the suspense. Now, that's one of the first things I consider.
ReplyDeleteMeghan, I don't write suspense so hadn't thought that it's the villain who drives the suspense plot. Excellent tip. Thanks!
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Fabulous post!
ReplyDeleteAs a writer, I don't feel all that qualified to give tips... but I guess the best one is that we all have something worthwhile to share. God created us and gifted us differently and that gives us all unique perspectives.
As a reader, I'm writing a Chicken Soup for the Soul story about the best advice I ever received so I need to keep it secret for now. But... my favorite financial advice is to live within your means. Followed closely by learning the difference between "wants" and "needs."
May God bless all of Seekerville!
Hi Phyllis! You are so right. Aren't we grateful that our God creates unique individuals, not clones? Wouldn't life be dull if we were all the same?
DeleteYour financial advice is important. Credit card debt has to be a nightmare with the high interest payments.
I'm excited to hear that you're writing for Chicken Soup on this topic!
Janet
Writing more because I want to be notified :) Loving all the comments too! :)
ReplyDeletePhyllis, thanks for blessing Seekerville!
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What a fabulous post! I haven't had a chance to read all the comments yet, but I'm sure there are great tips in there too. My best craft tip? Follow Seekerville religiously. :)
ReplyDeleteHi LeAnne, you're so sweet to make Seekerville your best tip and I think you're right! I wish I'd had Seekerville craft and encouraging posts when I started writing. There's so much wisdom and support to be found here.
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Oh, wow! These are great, Janet. Thanks to you and all the authors for sharing!
ReplyDeleteI am really chewing on Lenora's advice right now. It's got my brain buzzing!!
I think my favorite writing advice is to make sure each scene has a goal. NOT my goal as the author. I'm talking about the point of view character's goal. And then figure out what conflict will happen, and what decision he/she will make as a result.
Missy, all the internal stuff does mess with our characters, doesn't it?
DeleteGreat advice on making sure the POV characters have a scene goal. Those scene goals keep them working towards the book-length goal, which keeps the book from feeling episodic.
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Hi Sweet Janet! So happy to see you here, today!
ReplyDeleteAll these tips are so great. The one Rhonda mentions is one I use, but rather than a notebook, I have what I call a 'cut out' file for each MS in a word doc. That way I save scenes that I want to cut right away or add ideas as they come up and at the end of the day, my desk is paper free! Yippeee! And the added bonus, it's a major time saver because I know where my notes are! Imagine that! ;)
Lyndee, you're very organized! I say whatever works for the author as long as she keeps what she needs or thinks she'll need. I use a Word file, too, but my desk is still a mess. LOL. I write myself notes all the time.
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"If at first you don't succeed, try, try again". Pretty cliche, pretty simplistic but very few achieve instant success and very few achieve instant perfection.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading these tips and I agree that whether it is writing or painting a room, you have to begin and you need to keep at it.
Blessings!
Connie
cps1950(at)gmail(dot)com
Connie, the reason advice becomes cliched is because it's an universal truth! Thanks for the reminder that we all need practice to learn.
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Thank you, Janet for this post, and all of the "post-ers" for such awesome tips! Sherri, thanks for freeing up my brain, Allie, I printed out "What if?" in large font, and Cate, that quote moved me.
ReplyDeleteMy best tip came from reading many author and writing tips! No matter how "ugly" that first draft is, get it down, get it done! That's why we have the word "revision" in our vocabulary. And, if you have nothing to write, just write something! Even if it's the same word or phrase over again and again, WRITE!!!
I struggle every time I sit down, but I at least try to not judge myself by what few or many words I put on the page, as long as I am writing.
Put me in for the gift card, it will be spent on books!
Happy Birthday, Seekerville! You are an awesome blessing to this writer!
Blessings,
Marcia
Marcia, your advice is great! If we have to write the same word over and over, I think we'll soon get tired of that and put something new on the page. Writers write words.
DeleteThanks for the birthday wishes! You're an awesome blessing to Seekerville!
Janet
Well said, Marcia!
DeleteThese tips are great! One of the best craft tips I received was to read, read, read, read, read. Know the line you are targeting and read their books. This was good advice for me because even though I've always been an avid reader I tend to get too busy to read when I'm writing.
ReplyDeleteRhonda, Your advice is spot on! How will we know what editors expect if we don't read the books they publish?
DeleteI've struggled to find time to read, too, especially when I was on deadline, but it's important.
Janet
What a fun post today, Janet. Loved the comments from others. Now you got me to thinking. I've had so many great tips along the way. I think some of my best have been from Vince when he showed me ways to think of marketing when I write my wip.
ReplyDeleteSandra, thinking of marketing when writing our books sounds like a great post idea!
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I've gotten loads of good advice that I am attempting to put into place but the one that sticks out in my mind is "Don't get it right, get it written." That was the mantra I used to get my rough draft finished this summer.
ReplyDeleteLoraine, I love that excellent advice! Thanks for sharing. I'm going to put Don't get it right, get it written on my monitor.
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Janet, what a unique set of tips from the wisdom of many established writers. I applaud you all. Not sure how to top it, but my tip is to write like there’s a camera on your head filming the story as it flows in your mind. Some authors type with their eyes closed to halt their inner editor and let the characters talk through them. “Just let it flow” is their motto. Great post today.
ReplyDeleteSuzanne, I've never been good at seeing a scene I'm writing like a movie in my head. Your tip to strap an imaginary camera on my head might make that easier. When the story is flowing and I'm writing dialogue, I find myself moving my lips speaking the characters' words. It's almost like I become them but I badly want to see them. Thanks for the great tip! I'll give that camera a try.
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WOW, lots of good advice here. Thank you everyone for sharing! Just today I've had to remind my co-worker that I want to share with you. Whatever you are trying to do, you need to remember: "Everyone makes mistakes. The wise are not people who never make mistakes, but those who forgive themselves and learn from their mistakes" (A. Brahm)
ReplyDeleteNatalya, your tip is huge! If we can't learn from our mistakes and move on, we'll soon get discouraged and give up. Thanks for sharing the tip with us and I'm sure your co-worker is thankful you shared it with her.
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Happy 10th Anniversary to wonderful Seekerville and all who follow in the community. Keep on Writing and Submitting. Thanks for keeping these informative blogs out there for us writers and readers.
ReplyDeleteSuzanne, thanks for hanging out in Seekerville! These ten years have brought so many lovely people into our lives.
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I think the best writer trip I've ever received is to reward readers and to reward myself. If I get bored of my story, then they will too!
ReplyDeleteBoo, great tip! Vince teaches the importance of rewarding readers, but if we're bored writing the story, that's evidence we've got more work to do. Thanks for sharing!
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Ok as I've read through the comments, I still have no brilliant tips to offer...lol! The only one (and it sounds dumb compared to these others) is my mother put a few grains of rice in her salt shaker to keep moisture from getting into the salt and ruining it. I've also heard you can do the same for a cell phone if it gets wet as long as you catch it right away. I guess you put it in a bowl or something and cover it in rice letting it sit for 24 hours, it's suppose to dry the battery. I don't know if anyone has ever done this and if it actually works. I hope I never have to find out!
ReplyDeleteTalking about salt, a lesson I learned a long time ago....NEVER forget to add salt to your dinner roll recipe! I had made them before, so I followed my recipe as I always do. This particular batch turned out small, didn't rise and were hard as rocks! I was trying to figure out why,so I re-read my recipe and found out I forgot the salt. It reacts somehow to the yeast or something to make soft, fluffy, EDIBLE rolls...lol!! To make matters worse, I made them for a Christmas dinner where I had invited our neighbors. So, yeah, talk about embarassing! I've not repeated that mistake since :-)
Trixi, that's a perfect tip! Thanks! I see rice in salt shakers where humidity reigns. Plus, I've seen people sprinkle salt on a napkin and put their sweating glass on the napkin. It never gets soggy.
DeleteI've had the misfortune of getting my cell phone wet. I bought rice--not instant--and buried it inside the bag for three days. I was too curious not to check once each day, but at the end, the phone came back on. Amazing. This trick may not work if the phone is drowned, not damp.
I didn't know salt was vital for great dinner rolls. Not that I'm going to make any from scratch, but I'm so impressed you did!
Janet
LOL...I make from scratch rolls and biscuits (among other things) and couldn't believe I forgot salt. You only use like a teaspoon of so, but it makes all the difference in the world! The parable in scripture about salt came to mind :-)
DeleteI'm glad to know the rice trick actually works and saved your phone! I'm sure that was a relief to you Janet.
Trixi, I'm going to tell the ladies of the Yankee Belle Cafe that you make from scratch rolls and biscuits! They may be calling you. :-)
DeleteSaving my phone was a huge relief!! I had sipped from a water bottle and stuck it in my purse without tightening the lid enough.
Janet
Yummy! I just ate lunch and am now virtually enjoying a classic ~ chocolate chip cookie....thank you!
ReplyDeleteAs a reader, best tip: "Waste not; want not." ~ Grandmom Moore (don't follow it nearly enough...but this old adage certainly honors God and respects the earth.)
Becky, you're welcome! Chocolate chip is my favorite cookie.
DeleteAll of our grandmothers must've said waste not, want not. It's so true, no less today than when they first said it.
Thanks for sharing!
Janet
Oh I absolutely LOVE this!! Such great advice!
ReplyDeleteThe tip I remember was given to me by Mary when I couldn't figure out how to get the information out without boring the reader to death with details: Get them off the mountain then go back and write in the details. Sometimes heroines poof off of the mountain and then I figure out HOW that happened :)
Sharee, When the poofed heroines gain their footing, they can figure out what happened to them. Or die trying. :-)
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Great post, Janet! The best craft tip I've received so far: "Don't end your chapters with the characters saying their prayers and going to bed, because then the reader will want to do that, too. And you want the reader to not be able to sleep because they're too concerned/interested in what's going to happen to your character next. End the chapter with a question/problem so the reader can't put it down." That advice (given by one of the Ladies here who also likes to say things like "If I throw enough light bulbs at you one of them is bound to go off" LOLOL) made a world of difference in my writing. I'm truly grateful that I stumbled across this website.
ReplyDeleteThanks for such an interesting post, Janet! Happy Birthday, Seekerville!!
Laura, that is great advice! I can't tell you how many scenes of mine ended with my heroine lying in bed thinking, then drifting off. LOL But I learned. As we all will when we care enough to be teachable.
DeleteThanks for sharing!
Janet
Laura I've heard this, too and yet I do it sometimes!!! Shame on me!!! Must Find the Urge to End a Scene with the character falling asleep!
DeleteI have been thinking on the advice I have received. One is to keep writing. Another is keep reading and then the one that I am still trying to learn Show don't Tell
ReplyDeleteSorry I am so late chiming in. My medical adventure continues and the doctors have no idea what is causing the pain. Now I am on a clear liquid diet for the next 24 hours. Silver lining I may lose some weight. I just hope we get it all figured out by Nov. 1 so I can write.
Wilani, show don't tell is harder to do than it sounds. :-) But we keep working at it.
DeleteI'll be praying for your pain so you're prepared to write Nov. 1!
Hugs, Janet
Thank you for the post, Janet! ALL of these tips are amazing and helpful. I may be printing this out and keeping it near my desk...along with my sea of sticky notes. :)
ReplyDeleteThe best writing advice I ever read I found on twitter one day, and I wish I could credit it to someone, but I didn't write down the author of the quote.
They said:
"Your story could be the key that unlocks someone else's prison. Don't be afraid to share it."
That resonated so deeply with me and reminded me that every word written or spoken has so much power to heal, like so many books have that have found me at just that right time. And so when I get stuck, I keep writing. No matter what, I keep writing...which was another great piece of advice you included in this post. :)
-Jeanine
Jeanine, that's a beautiful reminder of the power of story! Thanks for sharing!
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What fun and interesting comments! Great post, Janet.
ReplyDeleteTrixi and Janet were talking about salt, and I am reminded of the tip (maybe it was a trick?) my Mom and I used to put ALL rice in the salt shaker my Dad used....because he would oversalt his food, and his blood pressure would soar up! His vision was poor, and he never caught on to us!
I would love to win the gift card! THANKS!
Jackie, love that your mom was saving her DH from high blood pressure with the rice tip!
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing!
Janet
Great list. I especially like playing the "what if" game.
ReplyDeleteWalt, isn't that a great tip! do you use the What If game when brainstorming your books?
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I'm just home from work, so this is the first chance I've had to comment. Thanks for including me, Janet. What fun to read all the great tips. I had to laugh at Sherri's since it sort of contradicted mine, but then I realized it doesn't really because I'm not telling everyone they have to write every day. That's just what works for me. :)
ReplyDeleteIt's always fun to be a part of a day at Seekerville.
Cate, that's the point exactly. The tip that is the best you've heard is the tip that works best for you!
DeleteThanks for taking time from your busy life to share!
Janet
Janet, I love these tips.
ReplyDeleteI think for me, as of this moment - I'm sure it will change tomorrow - is write that first draft but don't be afraid to kill your darlings. I'm having to learn when I edit, some of my favorite scenes don't move the story forward. When I'm honest about having to cut that scene and I actually cut it (boo hoo and sniff), I have to put that scene in my keeper file and take it out of the story.
But like I wrote, that craft tip will be different tomorrow as I sit down for a full day of editing. :)
Tanya, I agree. The best tip is the one we need NOW. 😊 It is tough to kill our darlings but we've all had to do it!
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Amazing tips! Great compilation of advice. For my work in photography, two tips have really helped me: learn to shoot manually and don't take too many pictures. When I learned to manage my camera settings manually I understood the correlation between the light available, aperture, shutter speed, and film speed, and all the fun things I could do with them. It's too easy in this digital age to take hundreds of photos in a photo session, but really that creates more work when it comes to the next step- editing. It's more prudent to be selective and purposeful when clicking the shutter.
ReplyDeleteThrow my name in the hat for a reader gift card! Thanks!